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Should AJ Have a sequel?

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Re: Ash's Journal

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sat Jul 07, 2012 6:12 pm

Bump!
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Re: Ash's Journal

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sat Jul 07, 2012 7:58 pm

Bordom is overwhelming... so here is the next entry.

Entry 5(still at the party)

"Hi Ash! I havent seen you in ages" Scarlet squeeled, obviously excited.
She and the rest of my friends -and me- were on a school break, so that explained the ages bit.
"Happy Birthday Ashie" said a voice, using a personal nickname only certain people could use.
I turned around and saw Amalia smiling at me. She had gone away for half a year with her family and she hadn't had contact with anyone.
"Lia" I shrieked before hugging her.
As i hugged her i felt the same thing i hd been feeling for weeks. Something bad is going to happen today. A tiny voice in my head said.Stop saying that.I thought to myself.
Lia stepped aside so summer could tackle me, her way of greeting.
"Ugh, Summer, I know you love me and all but you gotta stop doing that." I said as I pushed her of me.
"Feel lucky I'm even tackling you, its not something that most get." She pointed out smuggly.
All i did was role my eyes at her.
I turned to look for my other friends when Kahla hugged me from behind. You could tell it was her, she always hugs from behind.
"Hey Kahla" I said through a wide grin.
Kahla and me are the jokers of our group, the rest of them always laugh at everything funny we do.
"Pull my finger" Kahla giggled.
I did and nothing happened.
"Aww you got my hopes up" I said disapointedly.
"Look behind you, before she tackles you down like Summer did" Came the reply.
I turned around to face Snowmelt, the most sensible one of our group.
"Ola, amego" I greeted her formaly, my way of making fun of her.
Snow laughed. "Ola to you too!" She hugged me before saying. "Happy Birthday, Amego."
Lia walked up to me and Snow. "Do you mind if i steel her for a minute Snow?"
"Yeah Sure" Snow said, not minding at all.
One thing i knew is that this wasnt going to be good. Because the bad feeling i've been feeling for weeks just got worse.
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Re: Ash's Journal

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sat Jul 07, 2012 8:15 pm

Bump! Please let me know if i should continue ._. I would really like to know your opinions.
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Re: Ash's Journal

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sat Jul 07, 2012 8:53 pm

I think i am going crazy ._. Bump!
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Re: Ash's Journal

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sat Jul 07, 2012 9:08 pm

._. maybe i should just stop the story.... noone is reading... Bump
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Re: Ash's Journal

Postby [Braveheart] » Sun Jul 08, 2012 3:50 am

WhiteKitsune wrote:
Cowgirl! wrote:i do like this! It is worth my time and good work..DO NOT STOP WORKING ON IT! You can't give up now..As someone i know says, the first leg is always the hardest. I have been in your shoes.

Thanks :D that comment really makes my day!



I'm so glad to see more of your story written! I'll get on whenever i can, but I can only play a half hour a day, but right now i'm on vacation, and slipping online when possible. I am glad I made your day, because your story made my day!
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Hello! I am a
lady
who
wants to be
called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby [Braveheart] » Sun Jul 08, 2012 3:54 am

No, no, don't stop! I want to know what she is dreading!So no matter how long I am gone, keep doing it! I know you can! It just means I get to read more.....YAY. :lol: :) :D :shock: :mrgreen: :clap:
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Reason: Nobody wants to hear that much about horses.

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called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
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heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sun Jul 08, 2012 10:56 am

Ok, I wont stop..... But i'm going away for a few days.... So i wont beable to write. When im back Ill write entry 6!
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sun Jul 08, 2012 11:40 am

it turns out im only leaving in half an hour.... so heres the enxt entry.. and then fairwell for 3 days!

Lia dragged me to the backgarden. I knew it was something big that she wanted to tell me. I could also feel it was bad.
"Ash, we have to get you out of here. Your in danger!" She whispered to me."We dont have much time, but quickly go into your room and get a few things. Scarlet already knows, she will help you."
"I dont understand Lia, what are you talking about?" I asked, letting a look of pure confusion settle on my face.
"Just listen to what Lia says Ashie" Came Scarlets cool voice from behind. "She knows what shes doing"
"Ok, Ill so what you say" I said reluctantly.
"Come" Was all Scarlet said.

Thats all i can write for now, it surprisingly took me 15 mins to write that and i need to go put my bags in the car... Bye~
Ash's Journal ♣ ♣TINACS(This Is Not A Cover Story)The journal of Alina
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby [Braveheart] » Sun Jul 08, 2012 3:32 pm

Wow, way to keep me on edge! Have a fun time for me! Keep brewing over that story...
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Reason: Nobody wants to hear that much about horses.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hello! I am a
lady
who
wants to be
called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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