•Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

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#8 is up

[Captain Iron Krista]

YAY!! (: more?

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Haha Soon

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I Re-modeled The cover post a little

[Lazeling]

Needs a bit more work on punctuation and spelling, but it's the content that's more important. And the content of this is simply amazing. This story is like an uncut gem. It just needs to be cut and polished before revealing the pure diamond within. In other words, it's awesome, but I don't like it when people keep making mistakes with spelling and punctuation. The grammar's fine though. I'm sorry, I'm just really fussy about small things like that. This story is absolutely fantastic. And the way you tell it is wonderful. I just don't like bad spelling and punctuation, but you can ignore that.

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Thanks a lot!!! ok, I will work on that!!!

[Lazeling]

P.S. I checked it again and realised that the spelling was perfectly fine except for a couple places where the punctuation affected it. For example: "your" should've been "you're", etc, etc. It's mostly the excess of unnecessary capital letters that takes your attention away from the actual story and makes it a little difficult to read, but that's all. Sorry if this seems mean or anything.

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No It doesn't seem mean to me, thanks for the criticism

[Lazeling]

Now that you've fixed it, It's awesome. Love it! Now I want more- Lots more!

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Ok, so I am having a little bit of writer's block, I know were I want the story to end up, but I need to figure out what leads up to it.
It may be a day or two before I have something new up
~sorry