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ᴄ ʜ ᴀ ᴘ ᴛ ᴇ ʀ . ғ ᴏ ᴜ ʀ

Postby thaliana, » Wed Jun 13, 2012 9:04 am

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"That's not possible..." Nanuq flicked his ears forward, flicking his ochre gaze towards the bruja who had spoken. Her eyes were wide, revealing the small flecks of grey which danced about her hazel iris. She had taken a step back, startled by Kavik's words. The dark-furred wolf lowered his eyes on Sitka, who was slowly pulling himself to his paws, tail tucked solemnly between his legs. Nanuq grimaced at the light quiver in his littermate's stance, though Sitka's muzzle and head were raised defiantly as he came to his brother's side, glancing between Kalaa and Kavik.
"You try telling him that," Kavik grunted, refusing to meet her shocked gaze, finding more interest in the pale fur which lined his large paws. The snow was thin under his body, and he could almost feel the iced earth beneath his pads; a firm reassurance that winter would not exist forever.
"But what have I got to do with this?" Nanuq snapped, interrupting Kalaa as she parted her muzzle, ready to speak once more.
"Do you remember the legend mother used to tell us? Of Lord Amarok?" Kavik implored, his gaze flitting upwards momentarily to meet the cold stare of his brothers. At their blank looks and cocked heads, Kavik allowed a frustrated sigh to escape his clenched jaws. His ears pinned as a bitter wind rustled the wintry branches of the forest, an eerie whistle sweeping through the valley. The red and grey wolf glanced about the towering trees, shivering under their forceful shadows. "It isn't safe to sit here like rabbits in the open. I am sure Massak has managed to coax the ravens and crows into aiding his ploy," he muttered, suddenly aware of the other creatures which inhabited the forest.
"We are still taking them back to Massak," Kalaa barked, though the heavy notes quivered slightly, betraying her fear, and yet the authority was clear in her voice.
"You are not," Sitka snapped, his first words spoken since Kavik's attack. Kalaa's eyes whirled on the young brujo, anger and worry twisting her amber eyes.
"You think so?" The bruja snorted, taking a menacing step towards the rogue wolf; her grey tail raised high in dominance; the fur along her nape bristling with ferocity. "Do you think for one second that an incompetent dog like you and a wounded mutt like your brother can overpower us?"
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Postby thaliana, » Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:26 am

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Postby thaliana, » Mon Jun 18, 2012 8:48 am

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Re: ᴘ ᴀ ᴄ ᴋ . ʙ ʀ ᴏ ᴛ ʜ ᴇ ʀ s

Postby thaliana, » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:19 am

I told myself I would finish Chapter Three... but I haven't. I am about three-quarters of the way through and in the last quarter, my invisible readers, you shall find out Massak's plans for the forest and why Kavik would sooner turn in his own brothers than disobey him.

I have, though, started a timeline for myself on the events which will happen up until chapter seven (haven't got pass there) and, if you check the character list, there will be three new characters coming in around that time - which is when the main plot will get under way. Chapters should thus be more frequent because I cannot wait to get to that point. ;3
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Re: ᴘ ᴀ ᴄ ᴋ . ʙ ʀ ᴏ ᴛ ʜ ᴇ ʀ s

Postby thaliana, » Mon Jun 25, 2012 8:04 am

Chapter Three is finally, finally finished. ^^ Phew, that's the longest chapter so far.
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Postby CaptiveLegacy » Tue Jun 26, 2012 2:30 am

Marking <3

I shall read this, I do enjoy your stories c:
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Postby thaliana, » Tue Jun 26, 2012 2:48 am

Thank you. :3 It means a lot that I know somebody's reading them. ^^
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Postby CaptiveLegacy » Tue Jun 26, 2012 1:08 pm

There's probably a lot of people reading this story, its really well written and organized c: . I sometimes feel the same way with my stories, like there is only me and another person reading :3
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Postby Charias » Wed Jun 27, 2012 4:01 am

I'm still reading, I can just never think of what to post and don't want to spam too much. ;)
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Postby thaliana, » Fri Jun 29, 2012 3:30 am

I took a look at your story, carrie, it is looking really good. I voted amazing. ^^

Haha, thank you LishaCakes. ;3 And thanks for considering spam and all that. ^^


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