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Postby broodingtulip » Mon Apr 23, 2012 7:21 pm

Oh, yes please! Such wonderful work requires fans, now doesn't it? It reminds me of the Hunger Games, don't get me wrong, I love the hunger games and I'm a huge fan, but your story is more realistic, well, in my opinion it is. :)
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Postby elie53 » Tue Apr 24, 2012 11:38 am

I like the title Paradise ^_^ It seems really artsy in the context... Can't wait till you post more!!
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Postby Qiokkabee » Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:58 pm

Very, VERY good! Like elie said, can't wait till you post more. It is kind of like the Hunger Games, but not much. I watched the Hunger Games last week when we took my cousin to the movies! It was great! ^^
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Postby Foi » Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:30 pm

|U m a k| wrote:Oh, yes please! Such wonderful work requires fans, now doesn't it? It reminds me of the Hunger Games, don't get me wrong, I love the hunger games and I'm a huge fan, but your story is more realistic, well, in my opinion it is. :)

Aweh, thank you~! <33

elie53 wrote:I like the title Paradise ^_^ It seems really artsy in the context... Can't wait till you post more!!

Cool! Hopefully I'll get another bit up today. c:

duque_18 wrote:Very, VERY good! Like elie said, can't wait till you post more. It is kind of like the Hunger Games, but not much. I watched the Hunger Games last week when we took my cousin to the movies! It was great! ^^

Thank you so much! <33 I love the hunger games, and wouldn't dare copy it. Parts of the movie [the mutts] scared me a little, but it was an awesome movie, and I can't wait 'til catching fire comes out. As the story progresses, I hope nobody thinks of the hunger games when they read it. c:
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Postby Qiokkabee » Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:33 pm

I don't want to upset you but I think many would with the picking kids thing, but the rest I bet would be completely different. ^^ Hope you post more soon.
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Postby Foi » Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:36 pm

duque_18 wrote:I don't want to upset you but I think many would with the picking kids thing, but the rest I bet would be completely different. ^^ Hope you post more soon.

Yes, I was prepared for that, but I don't reckon it'll turn anyone against the book.. I hope.

By the way, may I add you to the fans? o3o"
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Postby elie53 » Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:38 pm

I don't think people will think about the hunger games too much when they read it :3 It's got its own unique style and I absolutely love the purpose behind it!! The hunger games was built from the want for control. To me, toootally different ^^
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Postby Qiokkabee » Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:46 pm

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duque_18 wrote:I don't want to upset you but I think many would with the picking kids thing, but the rest I bet would be completely different. ^^ Hope you post more soon.

Yes, I was prepared for that, but I don't reckon it'll turn anyone against the book.. I hope.

By the way, may I add you to the fans? o3o"


Yes! I'd love it if you did! Thanks! ^^
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Postby Foi » Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:52 pm

elie53 wrote:I don't think people will think about the hunger games too much when they read it :3 It's got its own unique style and I absolutely love the purpose behind it!! The hunger games was built from the want for control. To me, toootally different ^^

Thank you. <3

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duque_18 wrote:I don't want to upset you but I think many would with the picking kids thing, but the rest I bet would be completely different. ^^ Hope you post more soon.

Yes, I was prepared for that, but I don't reckon it'll turn anyone against the book.. I hope.

By the way, may I add you to the fans? o3o"


Yes! I'd love it if you did! Thanks! ^^

Thanks heaps!
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Postby Qiokkabee » Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:55 pm

^^ Whens the next part of this story coming up?
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