Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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What do you think of the last entry (on page 12)?

OMW OMW OMW OMW OMW! I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT JUST HAPPENED!
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29%
I knew it all along!
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6%
Such a surprise!
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13%
NO! I mean, YES! I mean, I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO THINK!
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Total votes : 31

Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Nonexsitent » Thu Feb 09, 2012 6:45 am

Derp of course we do
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Feb 09, 2012 9:50 am

Shadow-Of-The-Insane wrote:Derp of course we do

:) I somehow knew you were going to say that. :)

So (since you probably all want more), I SHALL WRITE MORE! ................ in 2013. Just kidding! I'll write more now. :)






























Hannah led us through the forest and through bushes, until finally we reached large house (more like a mansion).
This is it.
THIS PLACE IS HUGE!
Hannah nodded.
So..... I can't go in. Suzi put an alarm on so that if I ever step foot in there, it will go off immediately. Has she put an alarm on you two?
I shrugged.
I'm not sure.
Hannah looked at us both.
I know how to figure out if you are.
How?
I just have to look at your neck.
I looked at Jenette, and she shrugged.
Okay. Go on.
Hannah walked up to Jenette and looked at her neck.
You're safe.
She walked over to me and looked at mine.
You're sa-
Hannah suddenly hissed, making me jump.
AGHAGAHAGHAGHAGHAGHAGHAGAHGAH!!!!!!!!!!
Hannah backed away from me, and then she started screaming. I looked at Jenette, who had a weird expression. Hannah screamed louder and louder and louder, until she finally let out an ear-piercing scream. I covered my ears, and Jenette even cringed. It sounded like some sort of mermaid screaming. And then she transformed.
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I staggered back at her sudden transformation. She turned to look at me and hissed, making me scream.
AGAHGAHGAHAGAHGAHGAHAGHAGAHGAHGAHAGHAGHAGHAGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hannah growled at me and started running toward me.
Amy? I'd run!
Me and Jenette started running.
What happened to her?!
I have no idea!
I looked behind myself. Hannah was getting closer.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Thu Feb 09, 2012 10:24 am

Woah! What just happened here?
Hannah turned into this weird were-dog thing? strange............ anyhoo, MOAR! please?
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Ellies » Thu Feb 09, 2012 8:50 pm

wow 0.o....... Ummm
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Nonexsitent » Fri Feb 10, 2012 5:30 am

I told you all HANNAH IS EVIL!
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Feb 10, 2012 8:52 am

xxazul63xx wrote:Woah! What just happened here?
Hannah turned into this weird were-dog thing? strange............ anyhoo, MOAR! please?

*Dun dun dun* I love typing that I will write more later! :)
Ellies wrote:wow 0.o....... Ummm

O.o
Shadow-Of-The-Insane wrote:I told you all HANNAH IS EVIL!

She is! *Gasps* RUN FOR THE HILLS! *Runs, then stops* Wait. WHAT IF IT'S SUZI DISGUISED AS HANNAH DISGUISED AS AN EVIL WEARDOGTHINGYMAJIG?!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Fri Feb 10, 2012 9:27 am

"Moar please?" thats my nice side. this is my dark side >:D
"I DEMAND MORE! GIVE ME MORE OR I'LL RIP YOU TO SHREDS! *graps pitchfork and turns into were-wolf* YAHHHHHH!"
..............................
i will now go hide my evil side in a thermos again.
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby proud.little.wolf » Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:07 am

Wow, you've come a long way with TIAJNAD! Great start, by the way! You have a way with writing that makes me come back for more every day. :thumbup:
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:35 am

xxazul63xx wrote:"Moar please?" thats my nice side. this is my dark side >:D
"I DEMAND MORE! GIVE ME MORE OR I'LL RIP YOU TO SHREDS! *graps pitchfork and turns into were-wolf* YAHHHHHH!"
..............................
i will now go hide my evil side in a thermos again.

lol
Xela XIII wrote:Wow, you've come a long way with TIAJNAD! Great start, by the way! You have a way with writing that makes me come back for more every day. :thumbup:

Aww, thank you! :D Sorry I can't write more right now. I'm still thinking of what to happen next. The more I think, the longer the entry. :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby katomorakwarrior » Sat Feb 11, 2012 1:36 pm

So would you do us a favor . . .
Think.
A lot.
A lot, a lot, a lot, a lot.
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