мαувє тнєяє'ѕ нσρє || by Obscure

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Re: мαувє тнєяє'ѕ нσρє || by Obscure

Postby obscure. » Mon Feb 06, 2012 7:33 am

LishaCakes wrote:That is the best story I have EVER read on here, and is better than lots of the published books I've read too! It's absolutely amazing, I want to know what happens! This story is EPIC!


Wow, thank you so much! It means a lot to me, because I'd like to be an author when I grow up ^^

I never knew so many people would like this story, to me it isn't as good as you've been saying it is, thank you so much for the kind comments <3 The last of the story shall be posted very soon, so then you can see what happens! XD
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Postby obscure. » Mon Feb 06, 2012 10:05 am

Right, the rest of the story is up <3 Go find out what happens and tell me what you think!
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Re: мαувє тнєяє'ѕ нσρє || by Obscure

Postby Brightpaw » Mon Feb 06, 2012 10:16 am

I just cried my eyes out. Literally.
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Re: мαувє тнєяє'ѕ нσρє || by Obscure

Postby obscure. » Tue Feb 07, 2012 4:50 am

Brightpaw wrote:I just cried my eyes out. Literally.


I'm sorry, was it too sad (when the horse is looking back on memories of his early life)? I have a tendency to make endings a little sad XD
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Re: мαувє тнєяє'ѕ нσρє || by Obscure

Postby Brightpaw » Tue Feb 07, 2012 7:08 am

They were tears of joy.
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Re: мαувє тнєяє'ѕ нσρє || by Obscure

Postby obscure. » Tue Feb 07, 2012 8:23 am

Brightpaw wrote:They were tears of joy.


Oh, well I'm glad that you found it was a happy ending, I tried to make the horse find a happy place again XD
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Re: мαувє тнєяє'ѕ нσρє || by Obscure

Postby . silent » Tue Feb 07, 2012 11:03 am

Whoop! Awesome! I love it! I also want to become an author when I am older.
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Re: мαувє тнєяє'ѕ нσρє || by Obscure

Postby Charias » Tue Feb 07, 2012 2:11 pm

It's such a beautiful story, you've done a great job of it! I love the happy ending, it made me smile :)
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Postby CookieRaider » Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:15 pm

its to short i think lol
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Re: мαувє тнєяє'ѕ нσρє || by Obscure

Postby obscure. » Wed Feb 08, 2012 9:55 am

Thank you for all the lovely comments, it means a lot to me (:

It's a little short because, originally, it was going to be used for some homework, but it got a little too long so I decided to use another story instead. However, I decided to continue with this story; I would have added a lot more detail and made it lengthier but it was a little too late then XD That's why it's short C:
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