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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby fish out of water » Fri May 23, 2014 12:51 pm

PiNeStAr AnD ThE SeLfIe


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"Say... Duckface!" Cindestar yelled before tapping the photo button on her iphone 5s. "Duckface!" Spiritstar yelled as she blinked her Emerald eyes. Cinderstar looked down at the picture and scowled. "Spiritstar you blinked." She groaned. "Now we need to take a better selfie than this one." She hissed. Spiritstar blinked. "I know somewhere we could show off our awesome selfies!" Spiritstar mewed coolly. "Where?" Cinderstar asked. "Appleclan." Spiritstar laughed.


Spiritstar stopped and turned to Cinderstar who had some how gotten starbucks on the way here. "Hashtag... Starbucks selfie." she told herself, typing away. Spiritstar rolled her eyes and grabbed her own iphone. She watched as Appleclan cats slowly stoped to watch the Selfie obsesed pair. But they were most suprrised when they saw Pinestar arive. "She isn't cool enough for our selfies." Cinderstar told Spiritstar with a roll of her eyes. "Oh i will show them." Pinestar smirked. "Photobomb style." she rubbed her paws together.


"Okay... How about fierce?" Spiritstar asked, drawing her paw up to her Emerald eyes. "Perfect." Cinderstar chuckled, coping her pose. Cinderstar lifted her phone up and snapped the picture right when Pinestar yelled. "PHOTOBOMB!" Cinderstar and Spiritstar both turned. "Hey!" they yelled in Sinc. Pinestar chuckled and padded away.


AnD ThAt Is HoW PiNeStAr WaS InVoVeD In A sElFiE
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Spiritstar Takes a Selfie

Postby #Spirit » Fri May 23, 2014 12:53 pm

I think I could do #Selfie for Spiritstar cx
Here we go, a #Selfie parody

*Spiritstar to Cinderstar*

When Spiritfire was at the gathering
I kept seeing him look at me when he was with that other she-cat
I mean, do you think that he was trying to make me jealous?
Because he was totally meowing to me all night last night *annoyed*
And I don't know if it's a mating call or not
Do even think that Gingerheart is even pretty?
How was she even allowed to go to the gathering? It's obvious, they are forbidden mates
Do you hear her?
She's so puny and that fur is so tacky
Who has orange fur?
It's not even greenleaf, why does Lightningstar keep talking about it?
After I visit dirtplace, can we go talk by the lake I really need to
But first...
LEMME TAKE A SELFIE
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby fish out of water » Fri May 23, 2014 12:56 pm

XD lol

Cinderstar is all like Oh no he didn't!
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby #Spirit » Fri May 23, 2014 12:59 pm

Hehe, idk what to do for the next line cx
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby fish out of water » Fri May 23, 2014 4:49 pm

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A few kits gathered around Cinderclaw for a story, it was moonhigh and it seemed as if no kit could fall asleep. Cinderclaw sighed and sat up. "So you want to hear a story?" she asked. The kits nodded eagerly. "Tell! Tell!" Jaykit chanted. "Tell! Tell!" rang out through the Nursery. Cinderclaw sighed. "This is the story of Cinderkit and the Beehive. It went a little like this."


Cinderkit padded through the forest eagerly escaping the loudness of the clan. "Busy Bees, Bussy Bees. Wont you make some honey please." she sang until she came across a large beehive in the middle of a clearing. "Perfect!" She mewed, standing on her small, hind legs. "C-can't R-reach!" she gritted her teeth, reaching for the sweet smelling hive. She sat back down and looked to her side, spotting a large stick. She grabbed it in her small jaws and reached up ever so carefully.


"Wait a second." Snowkit mewed. Cinderclaw turned to her oldest kit. "Is this Cinderkit you?" he couldn't help but laugh. Cinderclaw laughed. "Maybe." she told him with a lick on the head.


Cinderkit reached up, the stick in her jaws and quickly batted at the hive, but she still couldn't reach the busy bee house. She finally got a good idea, or what seemed good at the time. She was going to climb up the tree herself, branch by branch and claw down the bee hive! So cinderkit leaped up, branch by branch and finally reached the branch below the hive.


By now the kits were rolling in their nests laughing at Cinderkit's poor choice. Cinderclaw couldn't help but laugh herself, she was so eager to get honey back then. Pinekit looked up at his mother. "Did she get the honey?" he asked. Cinderclaw nodded. "You could say that." she told him before returning to the story.


Cinderkit reached up, and clawed at the hive until it gave way, but Cinderkit was in the wrong spot at the wrong time because the hive crashed down and landed on her head! Cinderkit fell off the tree and shook her muzzle but couldn't get it off her head. She ran and shook and slammed and rocked but nothing would work! The bees were buzzing inside of the hive and stinging her all over her small head but she couldn't fight it, she was stuck. She finally found a large tree, and slammed her small head into the side of the tree, sending the hive shattering all over around her. She quickly grabbed a comb and padded back to camp where she was scolded for leaving camp by herself, but she ate lots of honey that night.


The Nursery slowly became quiet after the kits had had their fair share of laughter for the night. Slowly, one by one the kits drifted off to sleep. Cinderclaw yawned and fell asleep herself, dreaming of sweet honey.


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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby Esther~ » Sun May 25, 2014 10:13 am

Venoms Untold Story


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What did I do to deserve this?I wasnt always like this you know.I was once an innocent cat. Until that day...

I awoke with a yawn."Whisperkit!Wake up!" My eyes open wide to see my sister Shadekit."Time to sneak out."she whispered."Shadekit.Why should we?" Shadekit stood up."Come on." Finally I had given up.I heaved myself to my paws and walked beside my sister.We left the nursery entering the cold outside.This is a clan by the name Stormclan.It was leaf-bare and it was harsh.I shivered as my breath became smoke on the wind.We padded briskly out of camp.

"Shaadekit.Lets go back." Shdekit ignored me and padded onward.I heard a silent growl."Shadekit!Please let go back!"I begged but she looked at me."No." suddenly a huge rouge stood behind her."Shadekit!" Shadekit scratched my muzzle blood arising from my cut."Shut it!Mom and dad will hear you!"suddenly the rouge bit down on Shadekit's neck."No!"I cried out as the rouge left."S-Shadekit!"I was to late my sister was gone."No.no.no..."My parents came running to me."Whisperkit.Why did you kill her!"I stood up eyes pouring out tears."I didnt!"

I cried out in pain as my dad scratched me downmy flank.I fell crying as he bite my leg then my ear tearing the tip off."Please!Stop!"My eyes looked to my mom.She just watched."Mo-."My voice was cut out as I was sent through the air laanding on the ground.My parents left me in a pool of blood to die.My eyes closed and darkness consumed me.I awoke my wounds treated.But no cat.I was still in Stormclan territory.Just in a hollow tree.I padded out and saw my parents dead bodies."No!Not again!"I ran away running for my life.

~Moons later~


I was now a warrior of Nightclan.My heart had fallen in love with Stormheart.The handsome tom watched me before approaching.He was my mate.And I was expecting his kits.He nuzzled my cheek.I purred and licked his cheek.I then felt pain collapsing.The kits were coming!I blacked out and the nightmare that haunts me came to mind.My sister dying.My dads attacking me.I couldnt stand it.I awoke crying.

It was night.I felt the warmth of my kits leave me.I awoke with a jolt.I looked and didnt see them.I ran out of the nursery and saw Darkspirit killing my last kit.I pounced on him.I bit at him and he moved making my teeth sink into hisneck.His neck snapped killing him.Oh no!My leader looked at me."Traitor!" I looked at her with horror."No!" Her voice filled the camp."Whisperfoot killed her kits and Darkspirit!"

The clan surrounded me.Hiss and growls.Soon Stormheart at there.Looking at me.I was chased out.The look on my mates face huanted me.I turnedmy back on starclan.I ran from my mate and the other only to fall in a snake pit.As I died I was re-named Venom.I was now in the darkforest.Eyes green as snakes venom.

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Any Ideas?

Postby #Spirit » Sun May 25, 2014 10:45 am

Thinking of something to write about, any ideas?
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby fish out of water » Sun May 25, 2014 10:50 am

Hmm...
What about something about Creekfoot?
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How Creekpaw 'Broke The Ice'

Postby #Spirit » Sun May 25, 2014 10:52 am

It was just a normal day in the life of an apprentice, and to his surprise, little Creekpaw found himself standing on thin ice


Creekpaw batted Cinderpaw on the ear playfully, "you wish!" He giggled after her former sentence, he scented the air and looked over to Thornblaze, "nothing in sight," his paws were stained white with snow that molded into his fluffy pelt.

Thornblaze sniffed the air and nodded, "Cinderpaw, Creekpaw, how about we head down to the lake and catch some fish, instead?"

Creekpaw bounced up in excitement, tail bobbing and head quickly jolting into a nod of approval, "yea!!" Cinderpaw and Creekpaw both mewed in synchronization. Thornblaze had flicked his tail in order for the two to follow. Creekpaw darted in front of his mentor in excitement, "hey, Cinderpaw, race you to the lake!" His crush had smirked and narrowed her eyes, bolting after the fellow eager apprentice, tail streaming behind her, "hey, no far, you cheated!" Creekpaw's nose crinkled, "nah-ah, I just announced it last minute!" He joked, assuring, streaking in front of the she-cat, paws hitting against the ground's surface as he approached the icy lake. I win! he thought to himself and approached the ice, "I bet I could make it to FeatherClan and back," he whispered as Cinderpaw and Thornblaze neared him. He was quite a playful cat, always up for an adventure, maybe a little look around wouldn't hurt, hey, and maybe I can start up a wild goose chase! He stepped onto the ice, eyes narrowed in determination as he began to slide, "WHEEEE!!" Fish swam by underneath him and he smiled, feeling the cool wind blow his fur in it's direction. I wonder what it's like to be a fish

His skate along the ice seemed to be moving slower and the two others were not too far behind better pick up pace! Slowly, his paws began shifting and he took a step, pushing against the ice. To his surprise, he did not go faster, but stayed in an uncomfortable position, ice stabbed into his paws as he yowled out in pain. Suddenly, the area around him began to break away, icy cold water seeped into his fur as he plunged underwater, struggling to reach the small opening where he fell, but the force seemed to be pulling him underwater. He could have sworn that a shadowy figure had smirked and dunked him underwater, his eyes began to close as he reached his paw upwards towards the fading light of day. Bubbles surrounded his face during his attempt to call out for help. Suddenly, a splash interrupted his vision and Thornblaze came leaping after him. His claws outstretched and just about hooked onto his ragged fur, he felt teeth tug at his flesh as his mentor struggled to bring him to air, Creekpaw's breath seemed to be slipping away, slowly, slowly, slowly. Blackness.




He gasped for breath as he looked up at the roof of the medicine cat's den dizzily, teeth chattering as he awoke, he stared up to see Cinderpaw and smiled, "h-hey, wh-what just h-h-happen-ed?" It was barely audible yet Cinderpaw still replied, "you fell into the lake and almost drowned." Her voice dropped to a whisper, "just warning you, you are in pretty big trouble with Thornblaze and Remedysong." His fur was wet and he lay in a bed of moss, Creekpaw let out a sigh, "whatever, it's my fault anyways."

Remedysong interrupted, "yup, you better believe it," she growled, "good thing Thornblaze was there, or else by now we wouldn't be so angry." The medicine cat let out a sigh, "don't you ever leave camp unattended, do you hear me?"

Creekpaw's eyes widened, "but I didn't! they could still see me and I just-"

"No buts!" Remedysong hissed, "just.. get some rest, Creekpaw, alright?"

Creekpaw sighed and nodded, Cinderpaw smiled down at him, a playful glint in her eyes, "see ya after your punishment!" She giggled and skipped towards the apprentice's den
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby Esther~ » Sun May 25, 2014 11:02 am

I worked forever on Venoms story and it stinks.This spot is reservedfor Nightfur life
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