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Postby Novi » Wed Nov 27, 2013 7:17 pm

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Welcome, stranger, to Cor's form for Doughnuter 116! Here, you will see my attempts at wooing this miraculous little fellow. All art is (c) to its respective owners, whom of which you will find somewhere in the credits. Well, that's enough on my end. Let's get to the form!
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Postby Novi » Wed Nov 27, 2013 10:15 pm

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username :: dangit memphis
Hello, butter beer! It is a pleasure
to meet such a fantastiche artist
as you are. My username here, as
you can plainly see underneath my
avatar, is dangit memphis, but please,
call me Memphis. You can also call
me Cor, Raff, Raffu, or Raffle,
as those were my previous nicknames.
c: I am a huge fan of the
Pokémon series, so forgive me if I
commonly make references to it. I
currently own three Doughnuters, and
they would be my precious Tod, Geo May, and Killigan. Don't get me wrong; I love them lots, but... I think it's time to get a new Doughnuter. One to get a fresh, new start with, and that's where this boy comes in... <333

why I want him ::
There are many, many reasons as to why I want this beauteous Doughnuter. For one, his design is so cute and unique. Although I am unable to draw digitally for the rest of the week, therefore making my art of him uncoloured, I have mastered the basics of his design on paper. Another reason as to why I want him is because of his concept and quirks you have on the first post. A deer Doughnuter who loves eating Easter edible grass? Adorable! He seems like a fun character to write as, and I know I'll have a blast with him if I am to win. And finally, our third reason is because I haven't been using my first Doughnuter, Tod, as much as I'd like to. I think that if I could win this boy, then I'd have more inspiration and motivation to show them both love, as I would have yet another Doughnuter for my derpy little fox boy to interact with. A fox Doughnuter and a whitetail deer Doughnuter... Doesn't that seem fun and interesting? I'd like to own this little fella so I could cherish him each and every day, and give him all the attention he so rightfully deserves. But if you find somebody better to own him, by all means, choose them. I wouldn't want him to be in anywhere but the best of hands. ^-^
use ::
Well, I can easily say that I'd use this little guy for nearly everything. First off, he'd be given an ask thread here on CS, where one could ask him any question they desire, and he'd answer it. Secondly, I'd put him in a comic that would also be here on CS. He'd be used for anatomical practice (er, as much as I can get out of it) and as Tod's "rival". I would develop his character further by writing stories with him and RPing as him, and I might even attempt to get him a mate. Overall, he would be used constantly, and certainly not get left in the dust!
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|| zevi the brave :: the basics ||

Postby Novi » Wed Nov 27, 2013 11:31 pm

name :: Zevi
A variant spelling of the Hebrew name "Tzevi", meaning "deer."
gender :: Male
Just as you said, the gender shall not be changed in this form.
age :: Three (3)
In my form for Tod, I said he was three (3) as well. Why? Because in my logic, their years are like dog years. Times it by seven and you get 21.
friends :: Killigan
Known commonly as "Slenderman", this Doughnuter resides in the very forest that Zevi calls home. At first, Zevi was terrified of this murderous Doughnuter. He strayed far away from in, him, in hopes to not be his next victim. But as time went on, Zevi started to see that Killigan would only slaughter those not of the forest. Slowly, ever so slowly, Zevi came out of hiding and began to try to interact with this mysterious murderer. Although Killigan hasn't the slightest clue of what Zevi's saying, they are now mutual acquaintances. "Friends."
best friend :: Geo May
This fun-loving little girl caught Zevi's attention almost as soon as she ventured into the woods. Zevi followed her for a while (stalking is too strong of a word), and when she caught sight of him, Geo immediately pounced, playfully attacking her pursuer. Of course, Zevi didn't know that at the time, and tried to escape frantically. Geo clung to him from then on; "stuck like glue," as one would say. She follows him around constantly, and while Zevi shows obvious signs of detestation for her, he still considers the female his best friend.
crush :: Pending...
Open
enemies :: Tod
Ah yes, the age-old rivalry of nature. Tod and Zevi have been enemies since they were just newborns; this is how it has always been. They don't really know each other, however; they were just raised to hate each other.
likes :: His Hut | The Forest | His Antlers | Easter Edible Grass | His Appearance
Zevi loves his hut. It was originally built by a man as a dollbohse for his daughter, but they one day left it out in the woods. That's when Zevi stumbled upon it. Curious, he went inside and found the perfect place to live. He won't let anyone near it, out of fear that they'll try to steal it from him.
Zevi also loves the forest in which his hut lay. He finds it fun to explore, but he never does too much adventuring; that could get him hurt, or worse.
Zevi takes a great amount of pride in his antlers. He views them as trophies that get him girls.
Easter Edible Grass is delicious! He doesn't understand why all Doughnuters don't eat it. After all, it's much tastier than regular grass...
Like his antlers, Zevi thinks he has a very stunning appearance. He enjoys admiring himself in the pond, and will commonly gloat to others...
In his own weird little way.

dislikes :: Predators | Being Insulted | Death | Cars | Humans
Like any deer, Zevi loathes those higher up in the food chain. He'll commonly try to avoid Doughnuters that resemble these creatures (i.e., Tod looks like a fox, therefore, Zevi will avoid him).
As prideful as he is, Zevi despises being insulted and/or challenged. If someone dares question his leadership, he'll take care of it the way he saw his father do so; by ramming them into submission. With that being said, Zevi does not mind violence. He knows it's a fact of nature; only the strongest will survive.
When Zevi was very young (and still a fawn), he watched as his mother boldly defended him from a pack of wolves. However, the wolves were cruel, and killed her. Ever since then, he's been terrified of wolves, and the fact that he, one day, will join his mother in the Great Beyond...
Have you ever heard the term, "like a deer in the headlights?" Zevi's seen the darker, more literal sense of that phrase. He had a little friend - a doe named Flower - who was crossing the street when a car zoomed in out of nowhere. It all happened so quickly...
He mourned this loss for days.

Humans drive cars and hunt deer. That's enough of a reason to hate them.
hobbies :: Trilling | Hiking | Admiring Himself
He likes the sound he makes when he rolls his tongue and hums at the same time. He also enjoys annoying people with these noises.
There's nothing extremely exciting to do in the forest except for hike. Although he hated exercising at first, this acticity quickly became his favorite pastime.
Zevi is considered highly conceited. Therefore, it's only natural that one of his favorite hobbies would be admiring himself.
fears ::Thunder | Wolves | Death
Ever since Zevi was little, he's feared thunder - or should I say the sound it makes? He doesn't understand that it's just a noise; that it can't hurt him. So he fears it, and will run for cover every time he hears it.
Ever since his traumatizing experience with a pack of wolves, he's been afraid of these animals to the point where he'll attack anyone who looks like one.
He knows that one day he'll die, but he hasn't learned to accept that, yet.
obsessions :: Shinies | Easter Edible Grass | Himself
Whenever Zevi goes out on a hike/adventure, he sometimes finds little ttrinkets, or as he calls them, "Shinies." He adores how pretty they look, glistening in the light, so he'll take them. He has a little collection of bells and thimbles because of this.
He loves the taste of it! Whenever he hears the word "Easter", he'll run around in search of the edible grass.
All of his efforts are out of his own vanity. He thinks that he's more important than anything; a fatal flaw that will surely come back and bite him...
...what's with the clicking? ::
Hmm? ...Oh, you mean the clicking noises that Zevi makes! Ah, yes... Well, you see, Zevi is selectively mute... In the sense that he won't speak using actual words. He finds English tedious and uninteresting, so instead of using "proper grammar" and stuff like that, he speaks in clicks! He especially likes his new secret language because nobody understands him, and it annoys others.
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Postby Novi » Thu Nov 28, 2013 2:39 pm

personality ::
{{ conceited || annoying || rude || popular || easily frightened }}
Zevi is a lot of things. He is very high strung and a perfectionist. This little Doughnuter wants EVERYTHING to be perfect. One way or another, it HAS to be just right and even. If it's not, he throws a hissy fit. With that being said, Zevi is oftentimes viewed as an "annoying little brat" who just wants his way. And in a sense, that's both true and false. It's true because he's been spoiled rotten all his life, with promises that if he acts this way, he'll get what he want. And it's false because he simply does not know any better. Zevi is very rude to newcomers, and will oftentimes try to drive them away. But that's just because his whole life, he's known for those close to him to disappear; to die. So, as a solution for that pain not to return, he pushes everyone away from him, save for a few Doughnuters that he knows won't abandon him. Then, and only then, will he show his true emotions.
Seeing as he was once a deer, Zevi is extremely well-known in the Doughnuter community. He's oftentimes seen with young Doughnuters crowding around his hooves, trying to figure out if the rumors they've heard are true. This goes hand-in-hand with his last personality trait well. Zevi is, simply put, a coward, and is commonly seen running from even a hair of danger. He's learned that the key to survival is to be the last one standing, so he's more-than-likely going to be the one waiting out the danger while everyone else is fighting for what they believe in. Not the most honorable or respectable choice, but hey; it works for him.
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Postby Novi » Sun Jan 05, 2014 5:33 pm

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Inspired by the song: Hurricane 2.0 by 30 Seconds to Mars, ft. Kanye West.
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Time taken: 33 minutes, 34 seconds.
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