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The Hope of You | Foster Child Story

Postby the force awakens. » Fri Dec 07, 2012 9:30 am

Hello everyone! This will hopefully be a story I can actually start and finish on Chicken Smoothie, so I hope to update this story a lot!
This will be a story about a foster child, so I will have the first chapter up right after finishing this chapter! Enjoy!
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r wars and cats c:
the mcu, harry pot
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The Hope of You | Chapter 1

Postby the force awakens. » Fri Dec 07, 2012 10:21 am

-Chapter 1-

May 29 -- 2:23 p.m.
Pre-Vacation Entry:
*Two Days before Vacation Start*


I personally hated my fifth grade teacher. She was insanely annoying, and constantly cussed and complained about her job. Really, there's no point in being a teacher if you are just going to complain about it all the time.

My name is Haley North, and I am a fifth grade student at Blackened Ridge Elementary school. I'm ten years old, my birthday is July ninth, and I'm obviously female. My parents are really busy at work, so I spend most of my time at the free after school program that is provided for all of the students. Everyone says that the school is haunted, but I don't really care about that. I really have never seen a ghost or anything supernatural, so I don't believe in those annoying rumors. I just care about making it through class everyday with my annoying teacher, Mrs. Lilith. She can be really annoying at times, but I've already mentioned that, right?

Well, tomorrow is the last day of school, which means for an awesome summer. I have plans to visit my awesome family in California, which is far away from Florida, where I currently live in. Trust me, I don't live on the beach, so I don't live a perfect life that is a complete stereotype. I live on a farm that is completely remote, though I still go to public school. It's actually fun to watch all of the cars go by on the road outside of the house, because the drivers usually have no clue where they are going.

Well, I'm making it home from school now, and I write this journal entry on the bus. So yes, this is a journal that I am writing in right now. It's supposed to be for the vacation that starts in two days, but I'm really excited and decided to write in it now. My summer will be full of adventure, I hope.

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May 29 -- 4:15 p.m.
Pre-Vacation Diary:
*Two Days Until Vacation*


Right now, I'm super nervous. I have looked all over the farm, the house, and I have called both of my parent's cell phones and work phones to get no response. Where exactly are my parents at? I am very scared right now, because they promised that they would be home by three o'clock or so. I hope I don't end up home alone for much longer, because I know that dinner usually starts being prepared by four-thirty or so. It's going to be hard to do anything without my parents around. Even worse is that I am an only child, which creates extreme loneliness when my parents aren't home by their usual time. I hope that there's someone to come home soon.

Oh great, someone in a white truck has pulled into the driveway. I guessed that they are probably here to find directions for how to get back on to the highway. I'll be right back after I finish talking to whoever is currently here and I'll finish this diary entry then.

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May 29 -- 5:04 p.m.
Pre-Vacation Diary
*Vacation Countdown Unknown????*

Okay, I'm super nervous right now.
Apparently the person who came here wants me to pack up my important items, and make sure to be ready for something important. I'm sure that vacation could still be in two days, or it could be never at this point. I'm in the person's truck, waiting for the time to see my parents and have a happy reunion.

The guy's name is Mr. Issac Wind, and he says that I am going somewhere that will be good for me. I have absolutely no clue what is going on in this conversation, so I feel very nervous at the moment.

Mr. Wind and I have been driving on the back roads all the way to wherever I am to be placed at, and I can tell that we are going back into town. I personally do not want to go to school tomorrow, and I don't want to be close enough to Blackened Edge right now. Ms. Lilith can do her own thing with me another time.

Now, Mr. Wind pulled up to a white one-story building across from school, which doesn't make me happy. I have no idea why I'm going to be here, especially with all of my "important" belongings. I just know that my parents are somewhere out there, and I hope that "somewhere" is here. I'm pretty sure vacation is in two days, and I would like it to stay that way.

When Mr. Wind and I walk into the building, I see several other adults rushing around. It's exactly as if I am a major setback, just waiting to become complete chaos. I'm pretty clumsy, or chaos is usual when I am around.

Two people look at me, and I shyly walk through the office to where I am directed to sit. I start to cry, because I just want to see my parents. I don't want all the drama that occurs here, and I'm sure I could be part of the drama I am experiencing right now. It's obvious by the looks in everybody's faces at that office.

Unfortunately, Mr. Wind comes and stands in front of me. "Haley, your parents have somehow disappeared off this planet."

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(Hey everyone! So most of the story will have this set-up where I have a few diary entries at once, and usually the last entry will end up having a cliffhanger for everyone who decides to read this. Enjoy!)
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hi! my name is star
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r wars and cats c:
the mcu, harry pot
ter and books are
pretty cool as well!
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to be friends! <3

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Re: The Hope of You | Foster Child Story

Postby lullaby; » Fri Dec 07, 2012 11:52 pm

Are you still gonna be writing more of this? I like it! (:
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Re: The Hope of You | Foster Child Story

Postby the force awakens. » Sat Dec 08, 2012 7:44 am

Yes I will, I have another chapter coming out in a little while. I'm trying to do everything else I want to do first.
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hi! my name is star
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r wars and cats c:
the mcu, harry pot
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pretty cool as well!
pm me if you want
to be friends! <3

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Re: The Hope of You | Foster Child Story

Postby Tyler~Rose~Oswin » Wed Dec 26, 2012 5:04 pm

MORE!
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*whispers* Chocolate is amazing
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Re: The Hope of You | Foster Child Story

Postby Tipsy » Wed Dec 26, 2012 5:53 pm

I like this
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Re: The Hope of You | Foster Child Story

Postby the force awakens. » Mon Mar 04, 2013 6:48 am

(Thanks y'all, I think I'll probably write another part of the story now. :))


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May 29th --- 5:10 p.m
No clue what this diary is going to be to me now lol


"They're both gone?" I responded in shock. "That's completely impossible! Explain to me how that could happen!"

"Well, first off, anything can happen," Mr. Wind said. "There could be an alien spaceship that could've taken them to their own planet."

"I don't believe in aliens, so that's completely impossible to me," I say with a bit of sass involved. I didn't want to deal with his stupid logic. "Any other stupid ideas you want me to hear?"

"Well, you're going off to foster care," Mr. Wind told me. "I'm refering to an orphanage."

"Those places still exist? That's just too funny," I said. "I'm ten. Someone will find me, love me, and make me their adopted child." At that point, I started to laugh. "My name is Haley Marie North, and I don't believe in that business."

"Well, make sure that you have all of your items, since you're off to Hollylight Orphanage," Mr. Wind said. He muttered something under his breath I couldn't understand.

I sighed and sat down on Mr. Wind's chair, waiting for the time I could leave the messy office. Files and food wrappers were all over the place, and I was just waiting for him to finish this funny business. I was starting to believe this was all some annoying prank, and that my parents would be coming for me any second. What was really coming to me at Hollylight???



May 29th - 6:47 p.m.
I'm off to the orphanage - so new countdown:
"About to spend my first day at the orphanage."


I finished my McDouble from McDonald's, waiting for the car to arrive at Hollylight Orphanage. I had a sorrow feeling for wherever my parents had ended up at, and I wasn't very hungry as a result. I also had an awkward feeling beating at me multiple times for what could occur at the orphanage, since several stories I had read about children in orphanages had resulted in death, sorrow, and hunger. The one thought racing through my head was one question: What could be there that was similar to all those orphanage tales? I personally hated violence and unhappy endings in most books, and this was racing toward me. Could I ever have that happy ending?

Mr. Wind brought me to a massive, white house- house was probably an understatement. The orphanage almost seemed to be a mansion, a place where probably all of the orphans from all over Florida ended up! A garden filled with flowers was in the front, and two tweens were outside, enjoying the scenery as they were sitting next to each other. The mansion had three floors, and I was moderately sure that the top floor wasn't just an attic! I continued to have the feeling that something was obviously wrong with the place, but the owners kept a large cover on it from the outside! Maybe all the stories were just stereotypes...

Mr. Wind strolled to the front door, while carrying one of my suitcases at the same time. That's when a young woman with long, straight, almond brown hair, green eyes, and tan skin answered the door. "Hello, is this the girl you were mentioning on the phone?" The woman said, glancing at Mr. Wind.

"Yes, this is the girl I was talking about," Mr. Wind said. "Her name is Haley North."

"Well, I'll help her get her stuff to her room," the woman said. "You may go back to your job now."

Mr. Wind left briefly after that moment, most likely happy that he didn't have to deal with me anymore. That's when the woman said to me, "Well, hello Haley. My name is Lila. I'm going to start a group meeting any second, so I'm going to lead you to the living room and we'll all gather there."

"Well, thank you, Lila," I responded with a small smile.

Lila led me to the living room, where a few teens were sitting on the couch, watching television. I was wondering what they were watching, but one looked at me immediately after sitting down. "I guess you're new around here?" A girl with blonde hair, brown eyes, and pale skin asked me.

"You could say that," I said. "I just came here about five minutes ago. Lila's starting a group meeting any second."

The girl gave another girl a look to turn off the television, which happened in the blink of an eye. "Well, I'm Lauren. I'm thirteen, in case you were wondering. The other girl over there is Harmony, and we've became good friends."

"Well, my name is Haley, and I'm only ten," I responded very quickly. "I guess our ages won't be the best thing to become friends over--"

"Well, don't worry about that," Lauren responded, interrupting me. "Some of the older... orphans take on the younger orphans as if they were friends from the start. You'll probably end up with my dorm. It's almost like mentoring the younger orphans here."

"Well, thanks," I responded. "Maybe we could become friends."

In less than five minutes, about twenty other kids are piling into the living room, and somehow there's still quite a load of space. I guess that several of the kids might've found homes lately, and I'm just the start of a new generation...

"Listen up everyone!" Lila yelled, somehow including patience. "I have quite a few announcements to make!" Everyone calmed down quickly, and I was wondering whether everyone had some practice with this before. "First off, we have a new member at the orphanage. Her name is Haley."

Everyone takes a chance to look at me, and I know that this probably isn't the best thing for me. I don't want to have all the attention, I just don't...

"Either way, the summer has finally started," Lila said after a minute of silence. "So, there isn't any more homeschooling today, and I would also like to make a couple of summer rules clear."

Everyone sighed, and I knew that these were probably new rules. "Everyone has to dry off outside, and they have to take a shower before being near the furniture outside their dorms. Any questions?"

Everyone sighed, and I guessed there was no questions.

"Haley, you will be in a dorm with Lauren and Marci. Meeting dismissed!" Lila left after that, and several kids walked back toward the dorms.

"Who is Marci?" I asked Lauren.

"She's this annoying teen who is basically just... dark," Lauren responded. "She's been through a lot to get here, I guess."

"Well, maybe someone should just be quiet about it!" A voice is said, and I'm unsure who.

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(Okay everyone, quick little chapter for you all. I'm going to try and add another few entries later based on your critique.)
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hi! my name is star
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r wars and cats c:
the mcu, harry pot
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Re: The Hope of You | Foster Child Story

Postby Tipsy » Mon Mar 04, 2013 3:33 pm

I love this story.

You made a mistake, You said her name was Haley North, but Mr.Wind called her Haley White.
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Re: The Hope of You | Foster Child Story

Postby the force awakens. » Tue Apr 02, 2013 8:50 am

Thanks for helping me find that, it was useful lol

And thanks, new chapter up today or tomorrow. I need ideas for the cliffhanger xD
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Re: The Hope of You | Foster Child Story

Postby the force awakens. » Wed Apr 03, 2013 6:44 am

(Hey everyone! This is a quick chapter, I have to charge my grandma's iPad really soon. WIP at the moment.)


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May 29th - 7:09 p.m.
(My amazing orphanage diary! Yay!)

"Who in the world is that?" I whispered to Lauren, unsure of what was going on.

"That's technically the girl I was telling you about- Marci," Lauren whispered in response. "She has some real anger problems for an unknown reason."

Marci (I guess) was a medium-skinned girl with dark brown hair, almost black in some sections. She had green eyes, and a blue feather was in her hair. She was a little taller than I was, and she was somehow very skinny. "She has a unknown backstory?" I somehow whispered the words loudly, and Marci ran straight in front of me. I had the feelings she hated most people, and I was one of the giant group of people.

"Yes, in someway she does," Lauren said quite loudly, especially since Marci had ran past the two of us.

"Maybe we should head in another direction?" I questioned Lauren.

"Most likely a very good idea. I think she is quite upset, since she barely enjoyed sharing a room with me in the first place," Lauren responded, and the two of us strolled to the kitchen. "Want to have a snack?" Lauren asked me.

"No thanks, I had McDonald's on the way over here," I thought of my McDouble (no onions or pickles included) as I gave her a reply, and walked back to where Lauren was hunting for something or another. She finally came out with a package or Scooby-Doo fruit snacks, something the after-school program had always provided.

She opened her package and took out a green one shaped as the Mystery Machine, and gobbled it down. "I think it's probably safe to reattempt the hunt to our room by now," Lauren replied.

"You know what"- I started the sentence very broadly -"We might just have to try."

The one issue was this: Would it be possible to have Lauren as a real friend? Otherwise, it might just take time to truly figure out.






(Hope everyone liked that little section! I am charging the iPad now!)
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