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Chasing the Sun *needs characters*

Postby FourCrosses » Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:08 pm

"I don't believe it! How could Claw betray us?" Crypt struggled through the mud that stained his pale fur. "I thought he was loyal!"
"Yeah, well you thought wrong. Get used to it." Crypt stared at the speaker, a brown-ish wolf who he'd never talked to before. He prepared to issue an angry reply when a quiet voice interrupted.
"Ignore him. Mud has... problems." Crypt looked up at the owner of the voice: Four, a skinny she-cat who had become deputy in Claw's place - Crypt had no idea why. "He can't stand pups. Here, I want to tell you something." Crypt moved to walk beside her as the mud gave way to concrete. "I found this place, I even lived here for a while. The pack will be safe." Crypt noticed, with slight misgivings, that she didn't say 'we'. "You and I, however, need to leave." She broke off as Moono, a lanky male wolf, pushed past her.
"What do you mean?" demanded Crypt.
Four sighed sadly. "The new headquarters are much smaller than our old ones. There won't be separate sections for cadets and warriors. You'll all be together. And if you insist on annoying every wolf you meet-" she nodded politely to Mud "- you'll soon make dangerous enemies."
Crypt nodded. He understood.
"So," he grinned. "When are we leaving?"

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So. Welcome to my story. I hope you enjoyed the first chapter. I'm now going to tell you about the characters.
Crypt is a pale-coloured, slightly albino wolf with red eyes, who is the hero of this story.
Four, as you probably guessed, is my fursona. She's skinny, a brownish/red colour, with grey-blue eyes. More about her will come.
Here's my first pic of her. She's really rather pretty.
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Mud and Moono are background characters.
Keni, as wonderfully supplied by Tigresse's Dwarf, is male, and a Vajan rider. He's a major character.
Saroch and Saire (full name Sairean) are siblings, Vajan riders and minor characters.

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I actually need more characters. I have most of the story planned out, but just need these characters.

2.________, Male/female, Villain/ess
4.And as many background characters as possible.
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Re: Chasing the Sun *needs characters*

Postby FourCrosses » Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:53 pm

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Re: Chasing the Sun *needs characters*

Postby FourCrosses » Sat Aug 04, 2012 4:14 am

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Re: Chasing the Sun *needs characters*

Postby veggie » Sat Aug 04, 2012 4:36 am

Username: -Tigresse's Dwarf-<3
Character name: Keni
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Re: Chasing the Sun *needs characters*

Postby FourCrosses » Sat Aug 04, 2012 4:39 am

Thank you... thank you.
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Re: Chasing the Sun *needs characters*

Postby FourCrosses » Sat Aug 04, 2012 5:05 am

CHAPTER ONE
Finally...


Keni padded through the narrow streets that led down to the Hold. "Hurry up!" he yapped angrily. "We'll be late!"
"Calm down, idiot!" came the equally annoyed reply. "Just because I told you I love you, doesn't mean you can boss me around!" Venice's voice softened. "But I was telling the truth. I love you."
"Me too," whispered Keni. "I love you more than anything."
'Shut up, lovebirds!' came an annoying bark from behind them. "Don't you want to get there on time?"
"Shut it, Saroch!" Keni looked embarrassed. "Come on, Saire, Venice. We really will be late if we delay too much."
"Okay," murmured Saire, the shy younger sister of Saroch. "We don't want to miss the last night!"
The noisy, happy group made their way to the wide plaza that was the Hold.
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Re: Chasing the Sun *needs characters*

Postby FourCrosses » Sat Aug 04, 2012 5:19 am

Bump! What do you think of the new chapter?
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Re: Chasing the Sun *needs characters*

Postby FourCrosses » Sat Aug 04, 2012 8:25 am

Bump! Next chapter coming out tomorrow.
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Re: Chasing the Sun *needs characters*

Postby Siriro » Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:38 pm

You needed some characters? c;

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