Niara's Diary. Almost 50 fans!

Are you a writer or a poet? Come and share your creations with us, or discuss writing techniques with others
Forum rules
Please only post your own original work, do not post poetry or stories which were written by someone else.

Do You Like The Diary Story?

Yes! I love it! This is the best diary book CS pet thing ever! I'm book marking!
11
65%
I love the characters!!! The story's interesting, although some grammar issues could be fixed..
1
6%
Yes, I really like it.
1
6%
Yeah, it's okay. I might read more some time.
2
12%
Niara's cute.. The story's okay...
2
12%
 
Total votes : 17

Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby sparkle.+bballmta » Mon Nov 07, 2011 6:11 pm

CONTINUE, you really should maybe I'll work on that fan club.......
I used to be sparklecadwell.
500+ pets trading!!


WORK IN PROGRESS
sparkle.+bballmta
 
Posts: 475
Joined: Wed Jan 20, 2010 9:57 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby SecretsLive » Mon Nov 07, 2011 11:15 pm

Okay! :D
      Image Image Image Image Image Image
      I am basically quitting Chicken Smoothie. I don't have as much time as I'd like to get online, so I am giving up all of my CS pets for artwork of my characters\fursonas. I'm also done participating in all of my roleplays. I have two Jelly Bean Dragons, a species made by Hiccup, and I'm trying out for an baby inverted Dox Dragon, by Teleport. To participate in my character drawing contest with amazing Very Rare prizes from '08 and '09 click here. These are my JBDs, Apples and Starburst.

      Image
User avatar
SecretsLive
 
Posts: 2288
Joined: Sat Oct 22, 2011 11:57 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby no~body » Thu Nov 24, 2011 1:55 pm

EEP haven't been here D:
Image
"....So dawn goes down to day.
Nothing gold can stay."
♒︎
User avatar
no~body
 
Posts: 2608
Joined: Mon May 16, 2011 2:35 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby SecretsLive » Fri Nov 25, 2011 3:16 am

Dear Diary,

It's Tuesday and everbody has calmed down.
Today in English guess what happened.
I saw Rain ( Roxin Dare the cutest guy in school <3 ) making out with that evil witch, Jayla.
Something broke in my heart that day, and when I saw Jayla look up at me, I knew this was war.

At lunch I was sitting with Mataya, Indigo, and Leona, like always. Mataya was eyeballing Rain the whole time and Leona and Indigo were blabbing on about some science project. But me, I was staring down one person, Jayla. She was sitting beside Rain with her stupid little manicured paw around his shoulder. I turned around after I saw her head turn, probably to look at me. She stood up and sat beside me and said, "Hey Niara, wanna come over to the popular table?" and I said.. "No.." Just plain no!? No combac, LAME NIARA, LAME! Jayla rolled her eyes and strutted off, her pretty little golden tail flicking with defeat. But I felt defeated, she had stolen my man. MINE.
When I thought was all over, Rain came up and said we shouldn't talk anymore. Then Jayla came behind him laughing and kissing his neck. I nearly gagged and cried.. But I didn't, because it was just getting started. War. Love. Hell.

~ Niara.
      Image Image Image Image Image Image
      I am basically quitting Chicken Smoothie. I don't have as much time as I'd like to get online, so I am giving up all of my CS pets for artwork of my characters\fursonas. I'm also done participating in all of my roleplays. I have two Jelly Bean Dragons, a species made by Hiccup, and I'm trying out for an baby inverted Dox Dragon, by Teleport. To participate in my character drawing contest with amazing Very Rare prizes from '08 and '09 click here. These are my JBDs, Apples and Starburst.

      Image
User avatar
SecretsLive
 
Posts: 2288
Joined: Sat Oct 22, 2011 11:57 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby PLEASE-DELETE! » Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:45 am

No, evil Jayla. I love this diary!
PLEASE DELETE MY ACCOUNT!

THANK YOU.
PLEASE-DELETE!
 
Posts: 1828
Joined: Sat Nov 21, 2009 3:48 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby SecretsLive » Mon Dec 12, 2011 9:33 am

Dear Diary,

Today's Wednesday.
Nothing happened today, well that's what it seemed like.
It turns out Jayla was planning another evil sceme, against me, of corse.
Let me tell you the story from the beginning.

It all started at lunch, where most problems start.
Before the lunch lady gave me my puke-on-a-plate, Jayla had been talking to Mataya.
Before I knew it Indigo, Leona, and Mataya were at the popular table with Jayla.
Ceoto wasn't here today.

I sit down, look around, then see all my friends sitting with my worst enemy.
Here's what happened:


Me
Walks over to Mataya with tray. "What are you guys doing over here?"
Mataya "Jayla said you guys were friends now, so we should all sit together."
Jayla Smiles all evil-like, "Yeah, Niara, we're friends, right?"
Me "Last time I checked, no, we actually weren't friends."

I rolled my eyes, then sat by myself at a lonely table.
None of my friends came to sit by me.
None.

~ Niara.
      Image Image Image Image Image Image
      I am basically quitting Chicken Smoothie. I don't have as much time as I'd like to get online, so I am giving up all of my CS pets for artwork of my characters\fursonas. I'm also done participating in all of my roleplays. I have two Jelly Bean Dragons, a species made by Hiccup, and I'm trying out for an baby inverted Dox Dragon, by Teleport. To participate in my character drawing contest with amazing Very Rare prizes from '08 and '09 click here. These are my JBDs, Apples and Starburst.

      Image
User avatar
SecretsLive
 
Posts: 2288
Joined: Sat Oct 22, 2011 11:57 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby cswolf. » Mon Dec 12, 2011 11:14 pm

More please.This is getting good.
Image
signature now loading...
User avatar
cswolf.
 
Posts: 88460
Joined: Sun Mar 06, 2011 6:38 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby SecretsLive » Sat Jan 07, 2012 9:33 am

Friday ( might have skipped a day or two, oh well! )


Things were a little.. different today.

When I went into lunch I sat at the table in the back corner where me and my friends usually sit. It was beside the popular table. Ceoto Meows was the first to sit down with me, followed by Leona and Indigo. They looked freaked.


Me: "Hey guys-"
Ceoto: "There no time!"
Me: "..what?"
Indigo: "She stole Mataya!" Indigo looked like she was almost in tears.
Leona: "Niara, it's Jayla! She stole Mataya! She's refusing to sit with us- Or even talk to us!
Ceoto: "She ignore me.."


I knew imediatley what they meant, Mataya's dream was to become one of the populars, and Jayla knows it. She decided to take in Mataya just to screw with us. Next would be Ceoto, then Leona, then Indigo.. I couldn't let her take my friends! I decided to form a better plan, I told them all to call me after school.

When lunch was over we had to go home early because of electric problems. When I walked out of the building I saw a unfamilar face. A new guy! That hardly ever happened here. I got a little closer to see who it was, but was stopped by a voice it was one of the popular guys. Ugh, what did he want? His name's Scott. He said not to mess with Jayla and them or I'd pay. Okay then.. I went home then.
As soon as I got home the phone was ringing- but I couldn't find it anywhere! I heard the phone pick up- Mom and Dad weren't home.. Timmy's afraid a monster will come out of the phone and eat him. Merica! I ran up to her room and sure enough there she way going, "..hello?" I walked in to get the phone, and she started yelling at me to get out. I soon found out why, I started stepping on her science project.
"YOU'RE GOING TO PAY, YOU LITTLE WORM!!!" She screamed at the top of her lungs. She threw the phone at me and the object clambered down the stairs. I ran out of the room, grabbing the phone on the way down. I put it back together and called the number that had just called.

Me: "Hello? Did you just call?"
Caller: "Yeah.. It's Roxin.. Who was that.. screaming?"
Me: "Oh, that was my sister. She's a nut. Oh, it's Niara by the way.
Rain: "I know."
Me: "What'd you want..?"
Rain: He paused, "..I ..forgot.." he muttered and quickly hung up.

I doubt it. Roxin has just about the best memory in the entire school! Was he nervous? Of corse not- Why would the most popular guy in are grade be nervous about Niara Gates, the girl from the nerd herd. The phone rang again.

Me: "Hello?"
Ceoto: "It's Ceoto."
Me: "Oh, hi, Ce. Can you come over now?"
Ceoto: "Yeah, I come.."

I hung up first, now I had to get Leona and Indigo. Indigo was second, then Leona. They soon arrived and we plotted our plan.. :twisted:


~ Niara.
      Image Image Image Image Image Image
      I am basically quitting Chicken Smoothie. I don't have as much time as I'd like to get online, so I am giving up all of my CS pets for artwork of my characters\fursonas. I'm also done participating in all of my roleplays. I have two Jelly Bean Dragons, a species made by Hiccup, and I'm trying out for an baby inverted Dox Dragon, by Teleport. To participate in my character drawing contest with amazing Very Rare prizes from '08 and '09 click here. These are my JBDs, Apples and Starburst.

      Image
User avatar
SecretsLive
 
Posts: 2288
Joined: Sat Oct 22, 2011 11:57 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby SecretsLive » Sun Jan 08, 2012 2:11 pm

Saturday


Today was really warm for winter.
So, I decided to call the girls to go for a walk. Leona and Indigo came, but Leona didn't pick up her phone.
Mataya answered and as soon as she found out it was me she HUNG UP!
I tried to ignore it, but couldn't really. I put on a light purple t-shirt and jean shorts with my glasses, reins, and my bow. I had to talk Mom and Dad out of making me take Timmy. So, now Merica has to watch the twirp.
We were walking around and having a great time just talking, laughing, and having fun. I looked up and down the street I saw three paws and four hooves! Jayla, and her two slaves, Dream and Krissy. And.. MATAYA! I just stood there and gasped, I looked over at Leona and Indigo. They were doing the same. This is what happened..


Jayla: Looks up to see half of the nerd herd. "Well, well, well.." she snickered, "If it isn't Niara and the nerd heard.."

I hadn't noticed intill then, but there were four other faces. Rain, Duck Boy, Scott, and one of their other friends. Oh yeah, and here's Scott's picture.

Image


Me: "Just get a life, Jayla."
Jayla: She rolled her eyes, "I'm not afraid of you Niara." she sassed, "And don't you think for a minute that you're better then me. Because I know your secrets.."
Me: "And I know yours!" I said a bit louder. "You act like you were always Mrs.Big-shot! But that's just because you didn't tell anyone that you used to be Jayla-faila!" I heard her gasp along with pretty much everyone else there.
Jayla: "I can't believe you would say that!" She snarled, "You.. you.. YOU STUPID LITTLE DEISEASED PONY!!!" She exploded, a few gasps and, "Niara.."s excaped the nerd herd. And one from the popular side, I knew who it was. Mataya.
Me: For a minute I was shocked, I felt my heart sink. "You've always been like this.. ever sinse you found out I had.. PPS.." Leona and Indigo came closer, telling me it was okay.
Jayla: She snickered happily, "You were always weak." she laughed. "And the whole school will know about this by Monday. I'll make sure."

She laughed, turning to the side, so she could look at her group and us, she wanted them to laugh with her. All obeyed, except two. Mataya and Rain. To my suprise, Mataya stepped forward, along with Rain. Mataya seemed to lead him, she swiftly turned towards Mataya, she was in front of me, as if guarding me.

Mataya: "Don't act like you're so perfect, Jayla!" she yelled angrily, although determination singed her words. "Yeah, maybe Niara will be an inch shorter than one of the other ponies, but at least she has REAL FRIENDS. And not to meantion she has good parents." The pony growled, obviously knowing some sort of secrect, she turned taking her group, and Rain with her.
      Image Image Image Image Image Image
      I am basically quitting Chicken Smoothie. I don't have as much time as I'd like to get online, so I am giving up all of my CS pets for artwork of my characters\fursonas. I'm also done participating in all of my roleplays. I have two Jelly Bean Dragons, a species made by Hiccup, and I'm trying out for an baby inverted Dox Dragon, by Teleport. To participate in my character drawing contest with amazing Very Rare prizes from '08 and '09 click here. These are my JBDs, Apples and Starburst.

      Image
User avatar
SecretsLive
 
Posts: 2288
Joined: Sat Oct 22, 2011 11:57 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Niara's Diary.

Postby kaypatts » Sun Jan 08, 2012 2:49 pm

Image

"Moar Moar Moar!"

Cassy said.
.
Image
.
.
bnha. | haikyuu.
death note. | kny.
horimiya. | re:zero.
.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
.
tumblr
disc: kaypatts#9999
twitter
©
.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
.
★ ★ ★
gemini
esfj
3w2
Image Image
User avatar
kaypatts
 
Posts: 8484
Joined: Tue Jul 12, 2011 6:30 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 6 guests