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Unnamed - A story

Postby longlive » Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:35 am

Welcome to my story! I hope you like it!

Oh and looking for a name for this story~
PM me if you have any ideas!

You know what I hate about life? You get old. From a crying baby, to a curious child. Period. I wished my life had ended there. Being an new teenager, is harder. In fact, worse. I get sent to this boarding school, called Cartin Academy. My best friends, hate me. And guess what? I have to join the stupid cheerleading class, while I could just be diving into the water and swimming like a shark was after me.

Mrs. Cane frowend. She sighed. "My, my, girls. Show you're clumsy new friend what a split is."
I opened my mouth to protest. "I know what a spli-"
The leader, Alicia looked at me smugly. She slipped into a split. She flipped her hair and smirked. The other girls did what she did. What? Was this class a bratty place? I rolled my eyes.
"Now do it." the Alicia said. She smirked.
"Uh excuse me? How flexible do you think I am?!" I snapped. "I am a swimmer not a stupid cheerleader!"
Mrs. Cane pushed me into a split. You could hear a crack. I felt like screaming.
My legs flet like fire when I got up. "Excuse me, but I think you broke my leg."
"Now, Cassie, swimming is for guys!"
In this school. I thought. "I'd like to join it anyways."
Mrs. Cane frowned. "Let's see how Mr. Hoppins would think about this."
......
Mr. Hoppins let me into the pool. I raised an eye brow. All pairs of eyes came onto Mer. Hoppins and I. "Uh, well, this young lady demanded to be on the swim team. Uh- meet Miss Cassie Billow."
Guys rolled there eyes. They all muttered how I would be to slow. Fat chance. I thought.
"Are you sure Cassie? Wouldn't you like to join the cheerleading squad?" The coach asked. She looked familiar.
"I'm sure."
The coach smiled. She laughed. "Finally." she smiled. "Why don't we put you in front?"
I stepped into first place. I smiled and went into my position.
"Better not be slow, girly-girl." a boy sneered.
I rolled my eyes. "Yeah whatever."
" Fifty freestyle! Go!" the coach's voice echoed through the walls.
The water felt refreeshing. My legs seemed to feel better. I swam to the surface. I was amazingly fast, the boy behind widened his eyes as he saw me get out in about twenty-two seconds.
I realized people were watching. The cheerleading squad. I shrugged off the thought and looked away.
"Two-hundred butterfly."
I dived in. I felt the energy submerge into me. I pushed my butt down witch supported for me to breathe. My arms went onto the sides of my heads. I swallowed some air and continued.
It went on. It was refreshing and nice. I was glad to be back in swimming.
......

I walked into my dorm. I sighed. My parents had ordered a private dorm. Music blasted from the room on the left. A knock sounded. I grumbled. "Come in." I muttered.
Ty came in. "So how was the swim team?" she grinned. Ty sat on my bed.
"How was the cheer leading squad?" I grinned back. She had to do the squad too. But she did it earlier.
"Horrible!" Ty cried. "Alicia, she like broke my ear drums."
I wiinked at Ty. "You know what I think? I think that we are Alicia's target."
Ty smiled and lied down. "Duh! I wish I could join the swim team!" Ty looked around. She looked out the window. "Wanna hit the beach?"
"Totally." I pulled out my one-pieced swim suit and changed.
Ty grinned. "I knew you would. So I wore mine already."
"Predicter!" I teased as I pulled my hair up into a pony tail.
Ty pulled my arm and led me out my back door. I grumbled.
ALicia and her gang were there. She smiled.
Ty rolled her eyes. I at Ty's surf board. "Darn! I forgot mine!"
Ty shook her head. "We are going to try with only one."
I smirked. "Ok. " In a deep voice I said, "Fatality."
Ty giggled and placed the board onto the water. This was our way to get on. Ty tried balancing the board and stood on one side. I smiled. She was going to fip. I tried getting onto teh other sdie. Finally I stood up. We both were shaking. I frowned as a wave passed by. The board shook and Ty fell. Suddenly the board was unbalanced. I fell backwards. The water fell onto me. I felt the sand on my back. I sighed. Ty was caught in a guy's arms.
Ty laughed. She smiled. I ran toward Ty. I brought the board with. I tripped a couple of times. It is quite hard to run in the water with a surf board.
Ty smiled. "Hello!" she said. "Damon caught me." she frowned. "To bad nobody caught you."
I smiled. "I really don't care." The wind blew my salty soaked air.
"Look at Alicia." Ty whispered. Alicia was smirking at us. "I bet she thinks we are nerds." Ty frowned. "Thanks."
I shrugged. "When did you care about what people thought of you?"
"Um always!" Ty snapped.
"Oh..."
Ty looked at Damon. "Wanna get a drink?" she asked.
"Sure." Damon replied.
I watched Ty and Damon walk off, with Ty's surf board.
......

"You made us look like a fool!" Ty snapped when she entered my dorm from the back door.
I looked up from my laptop. "Oh yeah." I muttered not really paying attention.
"I'll just ahve to explain that you are the nerd and I'm not." Ty commented rudly.
My focus shot up to her. "What? Excuse me?"
"Nerd! You are! And Cassie, I hate that name!"
I winced. "It doesn't matter by my name! You think I like the name Ty?!"
Ty gasped. She slipped out of my room quickly. I insulted her. Our friendship had gone to an end bitterly. I sighed. It was time for pay back. Alicia had transformed my best friend into a witch.
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Re: Unnamed- A story

Postby longlive » Thu Aug 12, 2010 12:26 pm

I watched slyly as I saw Ty with Alicia, Willow and Cathy. Damon slipped into the seat next to me. I was totally unaware. I was watching Ty and her new friends to intensly.
"Earth to Cassie!" Damon said waving his hand infront of my face.
I bounced startled. "Oh! Sorry!" I cried. My cheeks were bright red.
"You're a really good swimmer." he remarked.
"Why thank you." I blushed.
"And a good flipper." he added teasinly. He laughed at his own joke.
I grinned. "Haha, very funny." I could tell Ty was glaring at us, watching us have a happy chat. Lunch was over. Great. Back to torture.

Another thing I hate about my life is that when you think you found a guy but they turn against you when they here you're new best friend that's a nerd. So? All she was, was smart and didn't dress that well! Her name was Carrie. Frizzy blonde hair and earnest blue eyes with modern looking glasses.
I looked at the cramped halls from the history class doorway. Did I really have to go out there? People were yelling at me to move on. I just stood there. Suddenly a force pushed me down. The stampede of people made me feel like I had been run over.
I heard Carrie running toward me. She held out her hand. I took it and pulled myself up. "Thanks." I could here Alicia and her squad snicker. Whatever. I really didn't care.
I slammed my dorm's door shut. My room used to be Private but then their dorms were full so I had to share.I was sharing with a new girl. At least I hoped it was. I slept by myself until this new person came. The dorm was big and the beds were far apart. It was like an mini apartment with only a bedroom. I sighed and flopped onto my bed. I heard two voices next to my door.
"Take it easy man. Maybe it is a guy." a guy's voice said to another guy.
"Dought it." another voice grumbled.
Great. It was a guy. I seriously don't get why this school also allows guys and girls to share a dorm. Isn't that just like wrong?
The door opened. The glare went immediantly on me. It felt like it stabbed me. I gulped. "Uh hey..." I said. The guy had black hair with some dark blue.
The guy walked to the other bed and set his stuff down. "Uh, hey." he said with a sigh. He flopped onto he bed and took out his ipod.
I got up and closed the door. "Next time close the door." I muttered. I flipped open my MacPro. I went onto face book to communicate with my old friends.
The guy moved uncomfortably on the bed. "Uh is there any book to read?" he asked.
I turned over and raised an eyebrow. "What kind?" I grabbed my book bag.
"Uh fantasy?"
I handed him an 'Artemis Fowl' book. "There. Did you ever read the series before?"
"Nope." he said wistfully and sat on the bed glaring on the cover.
I rolled my eyes and looked at him. "Since we are going to be room mates I want to know you're name." she said with a thoughtful look.
"Uh, Adam." he muttered, opening the book.
"I'm Cassie." I said. I put my Mac aside and walked toward the door. "Bye. Gonna hang out with some people."
Adam jumped out of bed as if he had sat on a pail of thorns. "Count me in. I wanna know some people too."
I shrugged. "Sure." I walked out. The halls were cramped as usual. I spied Carrie talking to another one of her friends. "Hey!" I cried waving.
Carrie glared at me and smiled. She walked over, tying to pass the crowd. Her mouth dropped open when she saw Adam. "So you're the guy Ty and her new BFFs were talking about!" she smiled.
I could feel the heat of Alicia's squad's glare. Uh-oh.
Alicia did one of her famous smiles. "Hey! So you must be Adam! I'm Alicia caption of the Cheerleading Squad!" she giggled.
Adam turned their way. "Hey. I'm Adam." he grinned.
Better not fall for those brats. I thought. I waited and glared at Damon. He left me cause I was a friend of Carrie's. I really don't think that makes sense.
I tapped Adam on the shoulder. "Let's go to the cafe." I muttered.
Adam turned around and followed me, leaving Alicia red-faced.
o o o

I sipped my latte. "Trust me. Those girls are mean. Plain mean. I mean they are nice to cute guys, but nerds, emos, goths, done. They tease till you want to commit suicide!"
Adam raised an eyebrow. "How do you know?"
"Carrie's a nerd. She has been here longer than me and her friends had to force her to put the knife down. And I, well they tease me cause I joined the swim team."
"Isn't that-
"Yes. I joined too" Carrie finished for me. She pulled up her glasses and gazed out the window. "Wow. Practice starts soon." she said. I looked at the clock. Yup. We had twenty minutes.
I glared at Carrie. "Did you ever want a makeover?"
Carrie glared at me in disbelief. "Really? Where can I get one?!" she squealed.
I giggled. "Me. My mom taught me some pretty cool tricks. We'll go tomorrow morning and let's see if Alicia would want to be you're friend."
"Then she'll be wondering where the nerdy Carrie has gone." She threw her hollow plastic bottle away.
Adam sighed. "Let's go." I giggle and followed him.
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Re: Unnamed- A story

Postby longlive » Thu Aug 12, 2010 12:27 pm

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Re: Unnamed- A story

Postby longlive » Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:38 am

You should of seen Alicia's eyes twinkle with jealousy when she saw Carrie. She was elegant and different. Her attitude was the same. She would always be a nerd in the inside but the outside she was a mini- Alicia, without her attitude. After that I made a fortune of giving make overs.

As soon as it was quiet left I walked out the back door and along the beach. I sucked in the salty smell and walked in the water. It was cold, but I liked it. It gave me a energetic feeling. I walked for five minutes then went back to my dorm.
o o o

My first gaze was Adam kissing Alicia on my bed. My. I raised an eyebrow. "That is my bed." I said sweetly giving them a fake polite look.
Adam looked up. "It just happened ok? No need to get mad."
I rolled my eyes. "Cause you're kissing some bully on my bed?!" I suddenly was aware that Alicia was reading my texts. I grabbed my phone and landed on Alicia who winced. I backed off. "This is just gross. And Alicia could you please leave?"
"Nope." Alicia smirked. "Unless Adam comes with me."
"What are you? Are magnet?" I asked sounding annoyed.
Adam got up and sighed. "Night Ali." he mumbled.
I waved at Alicia, who grumbled and got out.
When she left I turned to Adam. "What the hell was that for?" I asked sharply.
"She just barged right in and hopped onto you're bed." Adam shrugged as he poured himself a cup of coffee.
"See?! She is rude and disrespectful." I concluded. I shook my head. "Anyways night." I pulled my pajamas out and changed in the closet and looked at Adam. "You're turn."
Adam nodded his head and walked in and walked back out.
"How can you change that quickly?!" I asked.
"My skill." Adam winked and belly-flopped onto his king-sized bed. "Ahh...." he said with a dreamy sigh then laid down to sleep.
I turned the light off. I was about to fall asleep when a bright light flashed in my eye and a 'beep' noise sounded. I grumbled and turned on the lights. I saw Adam playing his ipod touch. "Seriously dude?" I asked.
Adam looked at me. "Sorry. I just have to beat- OH YEAH!" he cried. He put his ipod down and shut the light off.
Trying again, I fell asleep. Adam again crashed the lamp. I screamed as I felt glass touch my cheek leaving a big gash. I put a pillow against the board and leaned against it. "ADAM!" I cried. "What now?"
"Uh, I needed to go to the bath room."
I rolled my eyes. "Yeah- well turn the light on next time k?"
Adam sighed. "Hey I lied."
"About what?"
"When I told you I was going to the bath room-" he held out a picture of Alicia.
"Lair." I muttered. "Ok fine. Why don't you just leave me alone and share a dorm with her?"
"Cause its full." Adam sat on his bed. "Hey look, Cassie. I never meet these people around here. They have a unique personality."
"Like?" I shut the light off again.
"You."
"How am I unique?!" I banged my head against the board when I tried to lay my head on the pillow. "Oww...."
"Don't know. You're friendly."
"Isn't everyone?"
"Nope."
"Whatever. I need some rest." I put a pillow on my head and fell fast asleep.

o o o

People were buzzing around. Carrie came up to me. "We get to go home!" she squealed.
I laughed. "Everyone's going to the park to celebrate, wanna come?"
"Nah- I rather see my family." Carrie hugged me. "I'll miss ya."
"Same. Buh-bye!" I dashed off to see Jared, my stupid older brother, my mom, and my older sister, Casey. I glanced behind me at Adam. "Why so sad?"
"Cause- I'll miss you."
I smiled. "I'll see you sometime soon!" I frowned. "But then you have the weirdest excuses." I shook my head. I found my mom, Sara and Jared standing next to this stranger who was flirting with Adam.
"Hey!" Sara cried. She pulled me up into a hug. I laughed and backed off. I glared at the girl. "Who is she?"
"Scarlett- aka, Casey." Jared scoffed. My sister was different. She used to be a tomboy now she is a girly-girl? What is wrong with life?!
"Scarlett!" Jared cried in her face. My sister jumped.
She glared at me and walked toward me. She smirked. I always used to have a warm feeling when she walked toward me, but since college had changed her so much I had a guilty feeling. Scarlett grabbed my plaid shirt. "You haven't changed one bit sis." she said. Scarlett sighed and shook her head.
"So? Who said I should?" I snapped. I pulled away from my sister's grip. "C'mon lets go home." I walked to the car. Jared just stood there glaring at Scarlett. "C'mon people!" I cried.
Scarlett smiled and turned around. "I'll catch you later." She waved.
Jared waved. Now was he a magnet to Scarlett? Did he love his sister that much? I nodded my head even though I didn't approve of his answer.
Sara smiled and went into the car. I did the same and looked at her. "What's up with Jared?"
"He- don't know."
Sara started the car and backed up. She drove home. Great. Now I had to hang out on the first day of summer vacation alone. Fun. Sara dropped me off and drove back. "I'll be home in about in three hour. You can invite Ty." and she left before I could protest. Rude. What the hell has been going on in my life?! Sara would always escort me into the house. Now, I guess I was older. Like I said, I want to stay a preteen.
I waved at a stranger. What? I was bored. He waved back. I dropped my stuff through the window (the door was locked). "Hey."
"Hi."
"I'm Cassie."
"Dillon." he said.
"I smell mint."
"I ate one."
"Oh. Really? It smells glossy."
"What guy puts lip-gloss on?!" Dillon asked with disbelief.
"You." I snapped.
"Me?! Like I said I ate a mint."
"Oh. Positive?"
"Positive."
"This conversation is going in circles!"
"I know, you started it."
"No! You said my breathe smelled like mint."
"And now we are fighting- so you started it."
Dillon groaned and rolled his eyes. "Boy are you annoying."
I nodded my head. "Everyone says that. My sis says I should be more mature when I left for the boarding school."
"Oh." Dillon pulled out a box. "Mint?"
I nodded my head. "Thanks." I popped it into my mouth. "Hmm....minty."
He nodded his head. "Yeah....yeah."

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Re: Unnamed- A story

Postby Fawnie » Thu Aug 19, 2010 12:55 pm

Very nice! ^^;

A bit of critizim, if it's okay.

I suggest giving the reader a bit more understanding of where the character is. Description is key. And since it's in first-person view, it gets a bit confusing of where you are.

Try and grab the reader's attention! Make it Unique :3 Give it a little... umph! xD I loved your story, hope I helped! :D
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Re: Unnamed- A story

Postby longlive » Fri Aug 20, 2010 1:32 am

I wandered around with Dillon until Scarlett and Jared came home with a bunch of college kids. Scarlett smiled. "As I have mentioned- this is my lil sis."
They smiled. 'Hey s' and 'hi s' floated in the air. I shrugged. I was pretty immature for my age. But I looked older for my age. Problem. Right? WHich causes a bigger problem- then a bigger problem-then a bigger- Ok. I think you get the point.

I gave Jared a cookie. "For not being silly." I said, what I had right in my mind.

He looked confused. I just dropped it and picked it up. "GET IT!" I cried with an annoyed frown and took the crumbled cookie into my brother's hand. I smiled sweetly and walked out of the kitchen into the living room, which was technically in the kitchen. But you know, I'm weird. I plopped onto the couch and flipped through a fashion magazine- which was Scarlett's of course- but I was bored so I read it.

Since Sara came home right after Scarlett came, her college friends had to go- 'bye-bye'. You see, Sara is really sensitive who is around her. She doens't like, dirty, bad-mouthed people, she likes kind, obedient people, which none of us are- sadly. Anyways I think I should focus more on what she's is trying to tell me right now. =)

"What?" I asked, my attention popped right into her.

Sara sighed and put her hands in the air. "How many times do I have to tell you, that you are going to stay home alone tomorrow!" she grumbled.

"Sorry- I wasn't really paying attention. And on staying alone- I really don't want to." I got up.

"Why not? I have to send Scarlett and Jared to there friends house then I'm going to work. Maybe I could send you over to Carrie's?"

"Erm- fine." I muttered. It would be nice to see how Carrie was getting along. I sighed and waved. "Night Sara."

Sara hates it when I call her Sara. "Mom." she corrected and scuried off somewhere.

I rolled my eyes and walked slowly up the stairs. I walked to my room. Like always it was a mess, like I had left it. Sara neve cleans up after me. So thats why its the same as before. I threw my books on the floor and flopped onto my bed. I looked at the sky, my ceiling was made of glass, since I insisted. It was dark and gray with a glittering, silver moon for the finishing top.

I didn't bother to change. I suddenly fell asleep. A dream.

I was in a dark, pitch black tunnel. Moving rustles and slippery areas. Where am I? A dragon pops out. I awake. Sara tapped my shoulder. "Sorry to awake you- but clean up your room bfore you go to bed bed."

I grumbled and shook my head. "Tomorrow." I muttered half-asleep. Ok, so she ruined my dream. All I had was a blank, dull dream- which was technically nothing. I woke up from the familiar bird's call. I always thought of that goldfinch annoying- but you get used to it after a while.

Up to Carrie's. Am I correct? I think so. I bet today is going to be another day of drama.

I sighed and picked up a random graphic tee, black sweatpants and a dark red hoodie and flopped into my closet. I closed the door and changed. I slipped out the door and walked into the kitchen. I saw Sara. She looked frustrated. As I approached, she looked up.

"What took you so long? It is nine 'o' clock and I am three hours late!" Sara picked up a slice of cold toast and handed it to me. "C'mon- lets go." She opened the door.

"I have to brush my teeth!" I reminded. Well Sara didn't seem to care. SHe gave me a sharp look and I looked down and slowly walked toward the door. As I neared, Sara pushed me, I almost fell. "What the heck was that for?!" I asked as I entered the Cadillac.

"You needed to learn what it feels like- when you are late and you are in a very urgent stage." Sara snapped. She got in and started the car. I rolled my eyes. Someone was in a negative mood. So I decided to stay silent the rest of the car ride. Which made life much easier. I could just picture the thought of me and her fighting. God. That would of never stopped. The car pulled up on the drive-way. I opened the door. Carrie was no where in sight. The car started to move. I jumped and backed away. I closed the car-door as it slithered past me. Okay. She was in a rush.

I started up to the house. I rang the door-bell. I recognized Carrie. She smiled. "Hey, Cassie." she opened the door. "Come in!"

I entered the household. Woah. A neat freak, this place was. Everything was in place. It had a flow, like a stream. "Hey. So hows everything?"

"Great! So erm- wanna go hang out with someone?"

"Who? Do you have a guyfriend?" I asked tauntingly. Carrie grinned. Grins always meant yes. "When? Where?"

"You'll meet him- smartypants." Carrie giggled and pulled me into the living room. Again a neat freak house. A guy with with shaggy blonde hair and brown eyes stood in front of the couch. "Awkward." I glared at Carrie.

"His name is Derek." Carrie announced proudly. "He is Alicia's brother."
"You searched Alicia's house?" I asked disbelieving.
"Yeah-why not? Alicia is all over Adam. Maybe you should go for him." Carrie sat on the ouch and patted a spot for me.
"When did you get all romancey?" I asked. Yes, a made up word.
"When I learned, you don't want to end up like a lonely soul." Carrie smiled.
I grinned. "To bad. Never going to happen."
"I can tell Adam likes you."
"Seriously. Damon broke up being friends with me, when I became friends with you." I said. "Seriously."
Carrie looked down. "Well I don't think Adam's the same." she muttered. "Anyways, lets go upstairs. Derek can just lounge around."
As I followed Carrie upstairs, I thought for a moment. Should I fall for Adam?
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Re: Unnamed- A story

Postby longlive » Sun Sep 12, 2010 11:38 am


"CAN WE DO SOMETHING?!" I shouted in Carrie's ear. Carrie put her finger to her lip. I had been shouting like this for about the whole I have been here, which was.....three hours. Not very long, but I am bored out of my mind. Carrie is talking to 'Derek' even though he's downstairs. Seriously. What is wrong with her freakin' brain? I cried in her ears. "PLEASE!"

Carrie sighed. "Just a second." she put the phone down and stared at me. "Cassie- juust shut-up and leave me alone. Ill be done soon." she snapped. She put the phone to her ear. Her voice faded from snappy, to sweet.

I lay down on her bed for a second. I got up and huffed. "I can't stand you. I am going out forever." Carrei just gave me a shrug and went back to- Was it flirting or talking? Oh yes, flirting, with Derek. I dropped down the stairs. I caught a smirk from Derek as I passed by.

Idiot. I thought with a grumble. He grinned. I looked away and slammed the door closed. God she was getting on my nerves.

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I walked around bored. I kicked a rock away from my pathway. As I looked down, I bumped into some guy. "Sorry." I muttered.

"HI, Cassie." the guy said ignoring my apology. What the hell?! I looked up. A familiar guy stood in my way. "Hey. And when did you appear in this neighborhood?"

"When did you?" I asked. ADam grinned. "Yeah- to stalk Alicia down." I shook my head. "SHe lives next door to me, which is really annoying, cause everybody from that boarding school seems to live here."

Adam waved. "Great so now I can stalk you."

"NOPE!" I cried. I wasn't aare of Alicia's approach.

"Whats the drama?" Alicia chimed in. She smiled at Adam but her face seemed pouty at me. This girl is hard to explain. "Oh yeah, you got into a fight so I keep Adam." she added.

I rolled my eyes. "Thirteen, seriously? You date at thirteen?"

"It's called an early relationship, Cassie." Alicia remarked. Her hair flickered in the wind. "ANyways, Adam came to see me, not you." Alicia turned over to Adam adn trailed away. As they were far, I could see Alicia holding Adam's hand. Ain't that sweet?

Another bornig day...till night fall. I realized tomorrow I had to go back to school. Yes, it was a two day vacationm just to see your family. But whatever. I guess school isn't boring.

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Re: Unnamed- A story

Postby longlive » Thu Sep 16, 2010 9:20 am

Author's Note-

I know this chapter is short but the next one might be longer.

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Re: Unnamed- A story

Postby longlive » Thu Sep 16, 2010 9:21 am

There was a tap on my door. It was silent and gentle. It wouldn't of woken up usual sleepers, but I have very good hearing. At least my opinion. I blinked at the clock. 4:01 shined in my eyes. I pulled the sheet cover over to not be blinded. Great. Another long, boring trip to school. We had to get to school at 5:00 sharp. The door creaked open. Sara stepped in.

"Hurry up, Cassie- we gotta go." she whispered. I nodded my head. Sara smiled and backed out and closed the door. I slipped into skinny jeans, a random tee and another pair of my famous converse. As I popped my head into the kitchen. I smelled a fresh scent of homemade blueberry muffins. Sara always made them when I was a kid. But she never had time now.

My vision cleared. Woah. Was I really standing in front of a homemade muffin? I picked it up and twirled it around with my fingers. 3-D. Absolutely real. I smiled warmly at Sara. As I finished the heart-warming muffin, I go ready for school, which included brushing my teeth, combing my hair, etc.

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The ride was silent. It was already dark. I saw Carrie's mother's silver Honda back-up from the drive-way. I sighed and leaned my elbow against the arm chair outside, looking outside the window. It looked haunted. All the streets were filled with a deep gray-like color. It looked so, so, gloomy. Well I guess I was kinda too. For the next few hours, I carried away trying to whistle or put the music on. It was silent like Christmas night. Atlast, we got to the school. The sun was peeking through the shade of my window. As soon as the car pulled to the stop. I pushed open the door. I waved.

"Bye." Sara muttered and drove away, letting the other cars pass by.

I sighed and dragged my feet to the enterance. Suddenly a voice neared me. "Why so gloomy, Cassie?" Did Adam always have to poke his nose into my business? I looked at him.

"Casue, its gloomy around here." I said with a grin. Ok, I don't know why I grinned since I was gloomy. Now, don't think I like him........errr, well maybe I do.

"Hmmmm....." Adam grinned back. He pulled my hand. "C'mon- lets go to our dorm, gloomy girl." He teased and started running up the hall. I dragged behind first, but second, I realized I would fall onto the floor and get a rug burn, so I followed him.



Our dorm was same as normal. I looked around. As soon as my eyes hit the window, the sun's rays seemed to directly blind me. I quickly pulled my sleeve to protect me.

"Its not gloomy at all." Addam said. Hey! Well it was when I was outside, but it might of gotten sunier! I rolled my eyes.

"We have a meeting in the auditorium." I reminded and this time, I pulled him to the auditorium.



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The auditorium was loud and smelly. I pinched my nose. I felt like my eardrums were going to break. Mr. Hoppins the principal, clapped his hands very loudly.

"QUIET!" His voice boomed. The echoes were monstrous. I sighed. "WELCOME BACK TO CARTIN ACADEMY!" He smiled. "I HAVE A VERY BIG ANNOUNCEMENT TO MAKE!" he began. "Cassie Larker, has been changed to another dorm- she is with....." he looked at his list of people? I don't know. He looked up. "hmmm......the Casson guys."

Adam sucked in his cheeks. "Not good at all....."

"Why?" I asked. I knew that voice. It was when he was scared. Nervous.

"They are-

"Move out of the way, Adam." three guys pushed Adam away. I backed off. Ok, I think I knew what he was saying. They all were, I don't know, cute..... But I guess they were proud brats anyways. Suddenly I realized I had to share of dorm with them.

"I get what your saying." I muttered, thinking they were gone.

"Get what he's saying what?" the familiar voice rose. He jumped up in front of me. He smirked. "Oh...so your Cassie Larker?" he raised his hand to touch my face.

"Yeah, whatever." I blocked his touch. The guy smirked.

"Hey, Tyler!" another one of the brothers pulled the guy who's name was Tyler. He stopped when he glared at me.

"Pretty." the other guy smirked.

"I know, right?" Tyler smiled. Oh-gosh. Did this mean I was stuck with people who think I was pretty, and I might of had a bigger chance of- God I can't think about this.

"HEY, CAN I STAY WHERE I AM?!" I shouted at Mr. Hoppins, trying to overcome the noise.

From my sudden outburst, the auditorium was as silent as a mouse. "Miss Cassie," he cleared his throat. "It is up to your new roommates." he pointed to Alicia. "If you don't want Cassie Larker, you get Alicia."

The Casson brothers looked at each other and shook their heads. "Nope."

I groaned. I heard a chuckle escape Adam's lips. "Excuse me!" I snapped. Adam glared at me.

The bell rang. It was a Sunday morning. Yes, we went home on Friday. So I guess we got to rest.

"Good-luck gloomy girl." Adam sighed and turned away to leave.


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I sat in my dorm, panting, since i had to drag all my stuff to this dark, creepy, unknown room. It had four beds lined properly.

"Hi, Cassie." Tyler waved. He grinned.

"Haha." I muttered not in a mood for something playful.

"Cheer up. We're not so bad as our jerky cousin." Tyler sighed and leaned against the bed.

"Who is this 'jerky' cousin?" I asked even though I knew the answer.

"Adam. He's adopted from his family, hope you realized that."

"Well, duh, since his last name isn't Casson. But still adopted people are the same as any normal person in this world."

"Whatever- Kevin's back." Tyler looked through the small window.

"Who the hell is Kevin?" I asked, sounding miserable. Another brother. I thought with a big, long sigh.

"New roommate eh?" Kevin asked. He looked way different from Tyler.

"Please don't tell me the third is coming." I covered my eyes with my hand.

"Sorry, but-" there was a little sigh. "He is."

"Well I know." I muttered. I NEED TO TALK TO MR. HOPPINS ABOUT THIS! I got up from my chair and jogged slowly toward the principal's office. As soon as I reached it, I knocked on the door.

"Come in." The deep voice was familiar jut from his long sigh before he even talked.

I opened the door. It hit a china vase. I gasped at the shattered pieces. "Oh-gosh! I'm so sorry!" I picked up the shattered pieces one by one.

"Leave it- I wanted to get rid of it anyway." Mr. Hoppins smiled. "Now, what brings you here?" he bed me to sit in the seat in front of his desk. I came up and stiffly sat down.

"Erm- well, why'd you have to change me? Why not someone else like Alicia or anyone?"

"Well, Cassie." Mr. Hoppins inhaled the air. "You are a very special student. I placed you with Adam cause I Knew he would be the right guy for you. Your mother pays me fifteen dollar a month to place you somewhere, where you might find love."

"I'm happy with Adam!" I cried in my medium voice tone. "I like him too!" Now, I didn't realize that he had just passed the door and heard me.

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Adam stopped. He looked at the principal's office. He went in without an invite. "Did someone just say they liked me?"
SInce Cassie was the only one there, he glared at her. Cassie's mouth twisted shut. She gulped. He sighed and backed off. The door shut behind him.
She likes, me. SHe seriously likes me.
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Re: Unnamed- A story

Postby longlive » Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:09 am

~Alice wrote:
Feedback please? (Honest opinion.)

Oh and that chapter the post above is not done. Oh and sorry for the spelling errors or punctuation. I plan on
revising it today.

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Chapter above is done!
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