l y r i c s

[Brittle]

just you

When they call your name, my eyes meet yours!
I feel like you open up every door...
That's just you...But that's just you...

When we touch, I feel sparks fly!
When you turn away I get paralyzed!
But that's just you...mm. That's just you....

My friends call it obsession, but I call it love.
Maybe I'm not that worthy at all...
Bu that's just you...mm. That's just you...


When will you, take the hint?
Our little staring contests are getting old, oh.
Maybe that's just you...or maybe it's just me...oh oh oh...
Maybe, it's just me...

This could be, all in my head.
You pretend you don't notice, but I have the scars.
To prove my love to you...
But maybe it's just me...or maybe it's just you!
Darling give me a sign before I______

Am I the one pretending? 'cause I thought you cared.
This love is becoming something that I cannot bare!
Plead tell me this, will not be a tragedy! Tragedy!

My friends call it obsession, but I call it love.
Maybe I'm not worthy at all...
But that's just you...mm. That's just you...


copy right me.

[Brittle]

Fore score, and seven years ago.
My love for you, had started to grow.

But baby, this is the twenty first.
Century.


'Cause....Baby baby, oh, baby baby, wasn't
our love just a game? Messing around without any shame.
But baby baby, oh, baby baby, our love was nothing new!
You and I were players in this game of hearts!

Two can play checkers, Yahtzee, and chess. One can play darts,
the other will stress!

work in progress.

[Jinzelle]

I absolutely love it, I can relate so much to the 5th stanza, and the last line is amazing. Keep on writing, please!

[Brittle]

Thanks so much!

This was written at 1 'o clock in the morning so don't blame me for grammar mistakes!

It's not finished yet while I was going to sleep I had just logged off and then I started humming, one thing led to another and then this! Thisks my first time writing song lyrics so...yeah. I'm having trouble with the rhyming part. I know that all 'poetry' doesn't have to rhyme but it doesn't make it a song without a few rhymes

Thanks for the feedback
~Brit

[aspiration.]

♥ ;; Actually, Brit, songs don't need to have any rhymes in it.
I've written a ton of songs before - well, changed lyrics mainly
to make it my own - but none of the originally songs actually
have rhymes to them. The rhymes are just in your imagination.
I can post on a topic a song I had to do once involving Romeo
and Juliet.. If only I can happen to remember where I put that
paper that had everything on it..

[Brittle]

wha???

OMG, aspiration! This changes everything! Uou!!!

[aspiration.]

♥ ;; How so? *is confuzzled*

[Brittle]

lid screwed on tight, guess I am going
to blow. messed up so bad, maybe it's my time, oh oh.

Cost me an arm and a leg to get here. Will you stick by
me? Oh woah...

Eating lunch in the restroom wasn't that sanitary,
but those girls' filthy words dirtied me up enough!

Cheering me up wasn't necassary,
we both knew those boys would just burn me down
again.

Unscrew that lid and let your emotions out.
I want to here you scream! I want to hear you shout!!!!
To the world to the world to the world
that you're going to be Daring! Daring!
Those adolescent devils weren't going to
put you down forever...

wip

[aspiration.]

♥ ;; xD Well, it's easier to make a song if you have,
like, a beat you're specifically looking for. But
that's just easier for me. I was actually coming
Up with a beat sorta thing a few moments ago.
xD But, is the song a fast, upbeat like song? Or
is it a slow-like song? Just so it's easier for me
to add anything else if it possibly needs it.

[Brittle]

hm...well...

Kind of in between. It goes through some fast parts but overall it's just slowish...yeah.

I'm trying to come up with a beat but it just comes off as a beat based on the songs, "Chasing the sun" and "The one that got away,"