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Crimson - a book about her life

Postby Lady Tuesday » Sat Jan 21, 2012 5:09 pm

<3Together forever, never apart
Maybe in distance, but never in heart<3


*CHARACTER LIST*
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Pet's name: Cato; Bella's husband

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Pet's name: Bella; Cato's wife

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Pet's name: Crimson; main character

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Pet's name: Dr. Clayton
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Chapter one, finding out

Postby Lady Tuesday » Sat Jan 21, 2012 6:12 pm

Lavender, my sister, she'd never leave me behind, but my brother, shadow, would never take me with him. Mom said I'm too old and Dad said I'm too young. Now it doesn't matter because they're nowhere near. Not even on the face of the Earth, as most of the population, they were flooded when the Master was angry at our people, for being here and not caring, for being here only to exist, with no real purpose, or at least that's what Bella said his reasons were.

Bella is the sweetest dog I've ever met, and her husband Cato, he is the most devilish man I've ever met, but I guess opposites attract.

"Cato, where is Bella? Will she be home soon?"I needed to talk to her, but what good could that do? Not bring back my parents, Not let me see their gentle faces agin that's for sure.

"She left this morning, she said she would be back around the usual."he wasn't going to help me at all, ever.

"Cato, don't be a pain in the butt. Where'd she go? I'm going to go ask around if anyone has spotted her recently."I turned to walk to the door when Cato grabbed my arm tightly, he only let go after Bella strode through the door in a flurry."Bella, I need t-"ouch! Getting poked with needles constantly hurts me, so they give me more shots to ease away all that pain, and I'm always afraid if i get stuck too much, I might loose feeling all over forever.
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Chapter one, finding out

Postby Lady Tuesday » Sat Jan 21, 2012 7:09 pm

As I sat up on the edge of my bed the next day, I realize Cato made a large cut on my arm with his claws. I touch it and wince from the terrible pain that keeps growing."Hello? What was that all about, Bella?!"

Bella got up and looked at my arm,"Will you be okay? Cato over reacted, he didn't mean to hurt you I sw-"

I cut her off before she could finish."I know, I'm used to that! I meant the shots?!"she knew what I meant but was trying not to give any hint to that."Bella! Don't lie to me! Please!"

She composed herself and then looked me in the eye."Your family is alive."

*will write more when I fully wake up XD*
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Re: Crimson - a book about her life

Postby Betta132 » Sun Jan 22, 2012 6:36 am

Oooh, cool!!
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Postby Lady Tuesday » Sun Jan 22, 2012 9:51 am

^^^reply^^^
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this is not part of the story!!!
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chapter one, finding out

Postby Lady Tuesday » Sun Jan 22, 2012 12:28 pm

I was shocked and couldn't make any words come out but a little squeak, and then I fainted.

My vision was so blurry I could hardly see Bella, Cato, and some other strange figure I cant even bring myself to describe, leaning over me, with some weird beep in the background."Crimson, you okay?" and again I hear *beep, beep*. I didn't even pay attention to the bed I was laying on, that it wasn't even a bed at all, but a stretcher, and I was moving fast.
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chapter one, finding out

Postby Lady Tuesday » Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:30 pm

Wh-what's happ-ning?" my words slurred and my tongue felt numb. Come to think of it, everything felt numb. What had happened, and why was I fainting so much? I never faint! EVER. This was all so strange. The only feeling I was experiencing at the moment was pain, a terrible, aching pain. And guess where these shooting stabs of hurt were coming from? My left arm that Cato had rudely sliced open. Then it hit me."Mom! Dad! Lavender! SHADOW!" All of their names burst through my gritted teeth, and I tried to sit up.
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chapter one, finding out

Postby Lady Tuesday » Fri Oct 12, 2012 3:00 am

"No, no, dear. You mustn't sit up yet. It isn't healthy." The tall black figure next to Cato and Bella spoke. "Ah, yes. I am Dr. Clayton, at you service. Young lady, however did you come by this terrible injury?"

That's when my vision came back, that's also when I saw the begging face of Bella trying to stop me from telling anymore.
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Re: Crimson - a book about her life

Postby Lady Tuesday » Fri Oct 12, 2012 11:52 am

"A doctor? Where are we? I need to speak with Bella... alone." Again I tried to sit up, causing the doctor to try to convince me it could wait. But it couldn't wait. It couldn't wait for a year, a month, or a week. It couldn't even wait for a day, let alone a few hours. No, it had to be now. I had to know the truth, and the sooner I did, the better.

"Is there any possible way I can speak to Bella? Have we stopped moving yet?" I couldn't tell, it still felt like I was spinning really fast. This whole situation made me want to puke. It was like had seemed like hours until someone spoke to me, and that wasn't the person I wanted it to be.

"You selfish brat! Your stupid injury has wasted my weekend!" His words were clumped and bubbly. His gnarly breath wreaked of alcohol, and his pupils were dilated. He was drunk... again.
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