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Stories: - All this and White Galaxy's Story - Story 1 - The New Beginning
- Valleystar's Loss
White Galaxy's Story - Story 1 - The New Beginning
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Pet's name: White Galaxy
Pet's name: Sea Horizon
Pet's name: Silvia
Pet's name: Chess
Pet's name: Coco
Pet's name: Dawn
Pet's name: Edgar
Pet's name: Tribe
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Intro: "You must go, it is your New Beginning, White Galaxy," A small yet powerful mare whinnied. "You are the of age of becoming a Guardian to a Human."
A tall, handsome, white stallion with bluey-silver swirly pattens stepped forward out of the gathering horses and ponies. "I am ready Sea Horizon. Who will my Human be?" The stallion neighed nervously to his leader.
"Only time will tell, White Galaxy. But remember, you must find a Human companion before sunset on the twelfth day of you arriving on Earth. The whole land of Hoofinia is depending on it, no one has failed yet, but if anyone does, they will know." Sea Horizon gave a final fair well before White Galaxy stepped through the Enchanted Oak Gateway...
He awoke in a stable. Warm with hay all around him, White Galaxy sat up. He looked around. "Good, not Hoofinia, must be Earth then," he whispered. As he got up he spied two other small ponies sleeping. A tiny brown foal with a white face and a black mane slept peacefully next to a silver, white spotted Shetland pony mare, his mother. White Galaxy looked at himself. His swirls had become less visible as well as he was more grey than silvery. My disguise? He thought. White padded over to the food baskets by the door and looked outside. There was a sales ring a few metres away as well as may more stables. His stable had his name printed on a sign along with two other names, Chess and Silvia, the other two ponies with him. The stables seemed to be called Grand Hoof Horse, Pony and Donkey Stables and Adoption Centre.
The humans would think he's been there forever, it's the Hoofinian's magic that does this. The other horses, however, will know that new horses and ponies just appear, they vaguely know about the magic.
At that moment, the tiny foal and his mother padded over to the food. "Hello, you must be another of those 'magic horses'. I'm Silvia," the silver Shetland whickered. "This is my son, Chess." She continued, nodding towards the foal. White Galaxy introduced himself. After his name and those casual things he began to explain what he must do in a way to keep it half secret. "I am here on a mission, I must find a Human to be my companion or all my friends' powers will be confiscated! They'd have to come to Earth and live normal lives. It may not sound that bad but we protect the Universe and beyond. If we affectively, well, died, chaos would reign over the whole entire space time continuum!" A single tear rolled down White's cheek as he thought of loosing his friends. One thing he'd left out is that his best friend, his leader, Sea Horizon, would be banished to the darkest corner of the deepest sea anyone can think of if he failed.
Silvia smiled at him, nudging his shoulder. "Don't worry, you'll find somebody. You've been put in our stable so we'll all either get adopted by the Human or by Humans sharing a stable." She smiled again.
A small young girl aged 11 years arrived at the Horse Auction Stables. She had long chestnut hair with very brown eyes. This girl was named Lilian (Lily for short) Wolf. She had just had her birthday. Her parents had promised her one HUGE present instead of lots of little presents. This was it, a horse!
The owner of the horse stables lead all the horses from stables 5, 6, 7 and 8 (paddock 2), 12 horses altogether (4 of which were ponies) into the auction ring. Silvia, White Galaxy and Chess padded out of stable 7, following the stables owner. White Galaxy spotted Lily Wolf, a new girl standing next to her. It was Lily's best friend, Harriet (Hatti) Ann. Lily's family shared a stable, paddock and field with Hatti's family, so Hatti was allowed a horse as well!
White Galaxy's nerves began to flow through his mind. Silvia was noticeably shaky too. Chess however was, well... being an energetic foal. They stepped gently into the ring, lined up side by side and stood still. Lily jumped into the ring followed by Hatti.
"OK girls, here's your pick. Six stallions, six mares. OK, these three horseies," he announced in a friendly way, pointing to White, Silvia and Chess, "have to be bought together. Rescued from a terrible situation, only had each other for a while. Two stallions and this lovely mare," he laughed tickling Silvia's chin. Silvia whickered happily. He introduced the other horses in the same way before the girls quickly headed back to the first three. "It's a no-brainer, Hats, we HAVE to take these! Two Shetlands are equal to one horse, well, Dad said so." She smiled at her friend wildly. Hatti nodded as both girls turned to their parents. "Pleeeeeeeeeeeese!" they chorused. Hatti's father shrugged. "I'm happy to pay for the two Shetlands. Rob?" Simon Ann asked Robert(Rob) Wolf.
"I'm ok with that. Girls are you sure?" He asked. Hatti nodded vigorously as Lily peered over at the horses.
White Galaxy watched Lily closely while Chess and Silvia whinnied and smiled at all the people willing to by all three horses together. He nudged Silvia with his leg. "That girl, the one wearing the sky blue fur," he whispered. "Jumper," Silvia corrected. White Galaxy continued. "She's perfect! She's the perfect one to be my Human!" Silvia nodded. "You sure? I mean there's plenty of other people to come around yet." She gave White a firm, serious look. He nodded vigorously. "And it seems THEY love us too! Silvia, she's the one and her friend is also perfect!" He galloped over towards Lily and nuzzled her shoulder playfully.
Soon it was arranged that White Galaxy, Silvia and Chess where to be taken to the Ann and Wolf's stables the following Monday after school had finished. It was only three days but both Hatti and Lily couldn't be an more exited, asking 'is it time yet?' every five seconds.
When the day finally arrived, another surprise was thrown in! The stable's owner came to the Wolf's door. Luckily, Hatti and Simon were there too, preparing for the stable move. Rob answered the door. "Hello! So, are the horses ready?" he asked cheerfully, opening the door to the stable owner.
"Yes they are! But this may be a problem, it may not. You see, we recently found out that Chess' father lives at our stables. We introduced Silvia back to him and...well...they won't leave each other's sides! His name is Coco. Firstly, is there enough room in your stable for one more Shetland?" the stable owner announced shyly. Rob thought for a second. "We could fit him in. In fact, we where going to share the stables with my cousin and her kids. So, yes, we have room for him."
The stable owner's grin widened. "Secondly, do you think you can take him as well as Silvia, Chess and White Galaxy? If not, there may be a problem..."
Rob looked at Simon as he walked up to the door too. Simon smiled. "I think we can. There's definitely enough room on our side of the stable. Rob, I'll pay for him and all that."
Rob shook the stable owner's hand. "You have a deal then. So, shall we pick them up now?"
The stable owner shook his head. "No need, we have them right here!" He said, pointing to two large horse boxes.
Rob and Simon each took a horse box and hooked one to each of their cars.
White Galaxy looked at the roof of the horse box. He smiled and whickered happily to himself. He'd found an owner, he'd found new friends and he'd completed his mission. Sea Horizon and his friends back in Hoofinia where safe. Well, for now.
Silvia lay down in the horse box next to White Galaxy. Chess snuggled down happily in front of his father, Coco.
"It's just so good to see you all again. I had no idea you lived at Grand Hoof's! Oh, I missed you so much!" He whinnied to his mate and foal. Chess just nuzzled into Coco further. "I missed you too!" He said joyfully. Silvia giggled at the site of the two boys. "How did you..well..we thought you'd died from that illness we caught from our previous owners." Silvia whinnied.
Coco shrugged. "I was in the treatment-vet type part of Grand Hoof's for a while but I was treated the same as you two, I just had the illness a little worse," he said.
Rob hopped into his car and Lily jumped in too. Simon and Hatti got into there car then the enjins started and they set off for their field!