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Sorren - For Adoption!

Postby doodleswiftly » Thu Dec 22, 2011 10:48 pm

Sorren is a Forest Sorofox. Her dream sequence is of robins in snow. I need 1 short story of her, and 1 piece of art of her (Drawing or colouring!)
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hey there! the name's doodleswiftly, but you can call me doodle, swift, or whatever you feel like!
i love to chat, rp, draw and be a nerd, so if you want, by all means shoot me a pm and we can talk! <3 i don't bite!

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Re: Sorren - For Adoption!

Postby Taybri » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:05 pm

She's so adorable! =D I'll write the short story and post a picture later, since I can't do it on this computer.

Story:

Sorren stepped carefully out from under the bed, her auburn ears twitching a little. She leapt carefully up the bed and over to the window, pushing it open. She felt a soft winter breeze and she jumped out onto the high snow below. She leapt through the snow, her small paws slipping into the snow slightly. She spotted a small cardinal flutter around above, but that's not what she wanted to see. A different bird was what she wanted. She raced through the beautiful backyard forest, sniffing the air for the familiar scent. She finally found it! Christmas luck. A robin! Normally, she could only find cardinals in the yard. Creeping carefully around a pine tree's trunk, she gazed into the clearing. A single bird was laying in the snow, one so small she would've only seen it if it was in a nest. Sorren's eyes widened. It must have fallen out of a nest. A nest! She looked up at the trees, searching to find what she was looking for, her eyes looking around hopefully. She finally spotted it, a little bundle of sticks and twigs. She could see a small feather, identical to the stranded robin's sticking out of the nest. She scampered over to the bird, picking it up carefully in her mouth, ignoring its tweeting, and she carried it over to the tree. She carefully leapt from branch to branch, holding the bird, till she reached the top. The nest was just a couple steps away! She placed the bird carefully in its nest, with its siblings. Might as well, so I can see more robins! She thought, gazing hopefully at the birds. She felt a shivver run down her spine, and glanced over at the house. The girl would be getting back soon! Sorren ran excitedly towards the house. Once she reached the window, she carefully climbed up the bricks to the window, reaching it just as the girl entered the room. She glanced under the bed, and Sorren quickly jumped on her back. The girl giggled and rolled onto the bed, and Sorren leapt off the bed. The girl held her tight and pulled her under the covers with her. Sorren felt the warmth under the blanket, though she knew she needed to go back under the bed once the girl fell asleep. Being on top of the bed discerned her, but she would enjoy the moment anyway. She closed her eyes, remembering everything that had happened today. It definitelly was the best Christmas eve.


It that okay ^^

EDIT: How am I going to end this? *facepalm*
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Re: Sorren - For Adoption!

Postby doodleswiftly » Sun Dec 25, 2011 12:00 am

.:: t a n g l e ::. wrote:She's so adorable! =D I'll write the short story and post a picture later, since I can't do it on this computer.

Story:

Sorren stepped carefully out from under the bed, her auburn ears twitching a little. She leapt carefully up the bed and over to the window, pushing it open. She felt a soft winter breeze and she jumped out onto the high snow below. She leapt through the snow, her small paws slipping into the snow slightly. She spotted a small cardinal flutter around above, but that's not what she wanted to see. A different bird was what she wanted. She raced through the beautiful backyard forest, sniffing the air for the familiar scent. She finally found it! Christmas luck. A robin! Normally, she could only find cardinals in the yard. Creeping carefully around a pine tree's trunk, she gazed into the clearing. A single bird was laying in the snow, one so small she would've only seen it if it was in a nest. Sorren's eyes widened. It must have fallen out of a nest. A nest! She looked up at the trees, searching to find what she was looking for, her eyes looking around hopefully. She finally spotted it, a little bundle of sticks and twigs. She could see a small feather, identical to the stranded robin's sticking out of the nest. She scampered over to the bird, picking it up carefully in her mouth, ignoring its tweeting, and she carried it over to the tree. She carefully leapt from branch to branch, holding the bird, till she reached the top. The nest was just a couple steps away! She placed the bird carefully in its nest, with its siblings. Might as well, so I can see more robins! She thought, gazing hopefully at the birds.

It that okay ^^


Sorren's not going any where in a hurry, so you've got loads of time! :D :lol:

Wonderful!!! :D :clap: :clap: :clap: Could you possibly write a little more, and kind of finish it off? No offence but "Might as well, so I can see more robins! She thought, gazing hopefully at the birds." isn't much of an ending... :oops: It's lovely, otherwise! :clap:
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hey there! the name's doodleswiftly, but you can call me doodle, swift, or whatever you feel like!
i love to chat, rp, draw and be a nerd, so if you want, by all means shoot me a pm and we can talk! <3 i don't bite!

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Re: Sorren - For Adoption!

Postby Taybri » Tue Dec 27, 2011 1:32 pm

Sorry, I was having problems thinking of an ending, still am. *thinks a little more*
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Re: Sorren - For Adoption!

Postby doodleswiftly » Wed Dec 28, 2011 2:11 am

.:: t a n g l e ::. wrote:Sorry, I was having problems thinking of an ending, still am. *thinks a little more*


That's okay! :D I'm sure it'll be awesome!
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hey there! the name's doodleswiftly, but you can call me doodle, swift, or whatever you feel like!
i love to chat, rp, draw and be a nerd, so if you want, by all means shoot me a pm and we can talk! <3 i don't bite!

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