TEZARI WILD - #3 by Kosciusko

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TEZARI WILD - #3

Postby Kosciusko » Thu Aug 17, 2017 1:47 am

Totally wasn't making this horse instead of studying for a 3 hour exam tomorrow!
(Update on my exam: Slept in and got 0 - winning at life)

To win this little man, tell me a story (minimal - 500 words) of his life in the wild.
(Adding extra things is welcome, but I'll primarily be judging based off of the story)


.Lone Wolf. wrote:
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    Usᴇʀɴᴀᴍᴇ: .Lone Wolf.
    Tᴇᴢᴀʀɪ Nᴀᴍᴇ: Spirit Warrior of the Night \\ Cheveyo
    Gᴇɴᴅᴇʀ: stallion
    Cᴏʟᴏᴜʀ: black leopard appaloosa
    Gᴇɴᴏᴛʏᴘᴇ: Ee/aa/Lplp PATN 2
    Hᴇɪɢʜᴛ: 13 hhs
    Sᴛᴏʀʏ:








The full-moon rose over the desolate landscape, illuminating a single stallion. His muzzle pointed upwards, searching the stars. His nostrils flared, breath visible in the frosty air. Caution is his main priority right now. Below his watching eyes rested part of his herd. His heart ached from the events of last night causing him to split his herd up, and leaving his ethereal mate. He knew they'd follow them, the vile humans, tearing his family apart. Shaking his mane, he trotted down to his herd below, nickering softly to wake them. Rearing one last time, he took off with his herd behind him, wishing he could go back before all of this. Before the humans came.
*flashback*
XXXXXThe night before will be a night I will never forget. It was chaos. Wild and tamed ran against each other, humans astride the tamed trying to chase us. My mate ran alongside me, her white body glistening with sweat, eyes wide in fear. We always had a plan for if something like this would happen, but we never expected it to. My heart ached for her, and I reached out one last time to say goodbye, nuzzling her neck softly, breathing in her sweet scent. Rearing up, I neighed shrilly and charged the humans, scattering them, and the herd knew then. The young foals and their mothers followed my angel, while the older ones followed me. We lingered though, to give the others a chance to run to the hidden cove, far from here where no human would find them. My group then turned and ran, myself in the back. As the humans chased us, I knew I couldn't let them find the hidden cove. I raced to front of the herd, and led them in the opposite direction, away from home.
*end of flashback*
XXXXXThey continued to race onward, away from the humans. He knew that they would eventually be caught if he didn't do something. Something that'd save his herd. He stopped the herd by a small lake to quench their thirst, but he knew they couldn't stay. The humans wouldn't stop until they've captured something. Looking down, he looked at his own reflection, his coat matching the stars above him. Snorting, turned and trotted to his good friend, a stallion with a coat black as night. Touching muzzles, they both understood what was going to happen. The black stallion would lead the rest of the herd to the cove, and he, he would go rouge, and continue to lead the humans away from his herd. The wild Tezari's gathered around their leader, nuzzling, and saying their last goodbyes. Stomping his hoof, he turned, and trotted away from his herd, looking back for the last time, then galloping forward, towards the humans that would change his life.
With his herd behind him, and now he, a lone wolf raced across the dunes, until he reached their camp. Those stupid humans give away their position from miles away, with their fire, and loud noises. He continued forward until he reached the edge of their camp. All eyes were transfixed on the stallion of stars at their camp. They all rose, ropes at the ready to catch the wild stallion, but he was ready, and with a flick of his tail, he turned and ran, giving them the chase of their life. But this, would be his demise, and would end in his capturing... His heart, the spirit of a warrior.

word count: 575 words
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Re: TEZARI WILD - #3

Postby noreptiles_ » Thu Aug 17, 2017 3:15 am

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    Usᴇʀɴᴀᴍᴇ: .Lone Wolf.
    Tᴇᴢᴀʀɪ Nᴀᴍᴇ: Spirit Warrior of the Night \\ Cheveyo
    Gᴇɴᴅᴇʀ: stallion
    Cᴏʟᴏᴜʀ: black leopard appaloosa
    Gᴇɴᴏᴛʏᴘᴇ: Ee/aa/Lplp PATN 2
    Hᴇɪɢʜᴛ: 13 hhs
    Sᴛᴏʀʏ:








The full-moon rose over the desolate landscape, illuminating a single stallion. His muzzle pointed upwards, searching the stars. His nostrils flared, breath visible in the frosty air. Caution is his main priority right now. Below his watching eyes rested part of his herd. His heart ached from the events of last night causing him to split his herd up, and leaving his ethereal mate. He knew they'd follow them, the vile humans, tearing his family apart. Shaking his mane, he trotted down to his herd below, nickering softly to wake them. Rearing one last time, he took off with his herd behind him, wishing he could go back before all of this. Before the humans came.
*flashback*
XXXXXThe night before will be a night I will never forget. It was chaos. Wild and tamed ran against each other, humans astride the tamed trying to chase us. My mate ran alongside me, her white body glistening with sweat, eyes wide in fear. We always had a plan for if something like this would happen, but we never expected it to. My heart ached for her, and I reached out one last time to say goodbye, nuzzling her neck softly, breathing in her sweet scent. Rearing up, I neighed shrilly and charged the humans, scattering them, and the herd knew then. The young foals and their mothers followed my angel, while the older ones followed me. We lingered though, to give the others a chance to run to the hidden cove, far from here where no human would find them. My group then turned and ran, myself in the back. As the humans chased us, I knew I couldn't let them find the hidden cove. I raced to front of the herd, and led them in the opposite direction, away from home.
*end of flashback*
XXXXXThey continued to race onward, away from the humans. He knew that they would eventually be caught if he didn't do something. Something that'd save his herd. He stopped the herd by a small lake to quench their thirst, but he knew they couldn't stay. The humans wouldn't stop until they've captured something. Looking down, he looked at his own reflection, his coat matching the stars above him. Snorting, turned and trotted to his good friend, a stallion with a coat black as night. Touching muzzles, they both understood what was going to happen. The black stallion would lead the rest of the herd to the cove, and he, he would go rouge, and continue to lead the humans away from his herd. The wild Tezari's gathered around their leader, nuzzling, and saying their last goodbyes. Stomping his hoof, he turned, and trotted away from his herd, looking back for the last time, then galloping forward, towards the humans that would change his life.
With his herd behind him, and now he, a lone wolf raced across the dunes, until he reached their camp. Those stupid humans give away their position from miles away, with their fire, and loud noises. He continued forward until he reached the edge of their camp. All eyes were transfixed on the stallion of stars at their camp. They all rose, ropes at the ready to catch the wild stallion, but he was ready, and with a flick of his tail, he turned and ran, giving them the chase of their life. But this, would be his demise, and would end in his capturing... His heart, the spirit of a warrior.

word count: 575 words
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Re: TEZARI WILD - #3

Postby what the hecky » Thu Aug 17, 2017 10:20 am

      work in progress !!

      Username: xayah.
      Tezari Name:
      Gender: Stallion
      Colour: Black Leopard Appaloosa
      Genotype: Ee/aa/Lplp PATN 2
      Height: 13 HH
      Story:
hi im grace & i love naps

talk to me i love u
hmu if u play league

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used to be xayah.
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Re: TEZARI WILD - #3

Postby /Aster/ » Thu Aug 17, 2017 2:40 pm

Username: BlueThrush
Tezari Name: Notes on a Page // Mizik (means musical in Haitian Creole)
Gender: Stallion
Colour: Black Leopard Appaloosa
Genotype: Ee/aa/Lplp PATN 2
Height: 13 HH
Story: (sorry it's messy and short school being chaotic and all may fix if possible)

The young stallion quietly returned to the band taking his time as he approached feeling the crisp autumn winds of the mountains in his mane. A gray stallion named Hanen trotted up to him "how did scouting go" Hanen asked "fine, I found a new river we can travel to soon" replied Mizik "excellent, welcome back" Hanen said turning back to the band. Night fell fast and next thing Mizik knew he was asleep.

Mizik had dreams of his family before he left his birth herd. His mom and sisters running around him he wanted a herd like that and was determined to accomplish it. After all, within a month they would travel to the big lake were all herds meet perhaps he could win a mare there. Start a new family have foals of his own.

Suddenly he was violently jerked from his dreams it was early morning time and he heard panicked whinnies and the scuffling of hooves. Hanen raced up to him smelling of fear "the two legs are coming" he muttered looking strained "we need to leave now"! Then 3 two legs on horse back shot out of the sparse trees. "WoooooooooooooooWeeeeeeeeee!" the one shrieked as he dove to the left side of the band the other one shot to the right and one stayed towards the back. Before Mizik knew what he was doing his legs were carrying him alongside the band away from the strange two legs. By the time Mizik realized his mistake he was trapped alongside many others in a round pen panicked and angry. Where would Mizik's fate carry him now that he had been taken from the only place he had ever called home?
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Re: TEZARI WILD - #3

Postby bears » Sat Aug 19, 2017 5:24 am

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Gender: Stallion
Colour: Black Leopard Appaloosa
Genotype: Ee/aa/Lplp PATN 2
Height: 13 HH
Story: wip uvu
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Re: TEZARI WILD - #3

Postby SaturnMourning » Sun Aug 20, 2017 6:11 pm

Username: BayHorse
Tezari Name: Song Of The North (Phantom)
Gender: Stallion
Colour: Black Leopard Appaloosa
Genotype: Ee/aa/Lplp PATN 2
Height: 13 HH
Story: I had been looking for a good 'project' horse for a while now, and what better way to find one than the annual Tezari auction? (Not a thing, I know :3) I stepped out of my truck, looking back at the trailer I brought just in case, and told myself that "Today was the day." I listened to the crunching of gravel as I made my way over to the auctioneer waiting to register new buyers. As I finished telling the burly man my information, he grinned manically and said I was allowed to look at the animals, but not to touch them. I slowly walked down the dimly lit isles, dust swirling in the hot breeze. Stopping at each stall, I inspected the horses. They all stood calmly, half asleep, and were all very well groomed, with their manes properly clipped and their tails banded. Most of these horses would end up with a lucky girl or boy because they all appeared well trained and gentle. After over an hour of searching, I sighed, thinking I would never find the perfect horse. Soon after, a panicked whinny caught my attention. I followed the sound and neared the back of the auction barns, catching sight of some pens hastily assembled out of panels. The sight in front of me took my breath away. There were Tezari of all different colors, most of which never even seen before. None of them had trimmed manes or bands in their tails, and they were all pacing restlessly and neighing to each other. I admired the various appaloosas, roans, and what appeared to be a few Dominant White horses. But one horse out of all the others caught my attention. A black leopard trotting around nervously and who had the same whinny I had heard earlier. He was so dirty that the white parts of his coat appeared brown. Despite this and a mane and tail so tangled it resembled dreadlocks, I found myself drawn towards him and I slowly leaned my arms against the panels of his pen. He turned to look at me and snorted nervously. I held my hand out and patiently waited for him to approach, as I could tell curiosity was getting the better of him. He hesitantly stepped forward and stretched his neck out as far as he could. His warm breath ghosted over my fingers and I smiled, excited that he felt safe enough to be that close to me. After all that searching, I finally found the one I would take home, and I could tell that he would learn as much from me as I would from him.
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Re: TEZARI WILD - #3

Postby Starwindrider » Fri Aug 25, 2017 11:29 pm

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Gender: Stallion
Colour: Black Leopard Appaloosa
Genotype: Ee/aa/Lplp PATN 2
Height: 13 HH
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Re: TEZARI WILD - #3

Postby Kosciusko » Sat Aug 26, 2017 8:16 pm

Just a heads up: You've a day to finish those forms.
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Re: TEZARI WILD - #3

Postby /Aster/ » Sun Aug 27, 2017 2:20 am

Stupid question when you say 500 words can it be only up to 500 words or does it have to be 500 words exactly
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Re: TEZARI WILD - #3

Postby Kosciusko » Sun Aug 27, 2017 4:40 am

Fair point.
Minimal of 500 words.
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