by meerkatgirl » Thu Sep 16, 2010 10:43 am
I got lazy halfway through and stopped doing the design. The opposite side is gray with white circles in the exact same pattern, except for above her right eye, which has grey circles. I have already filled in some things in the form which I would like to stay the same.
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Cat's Name:
Cat's Gender: [b]She cat (female)[/b]
Cat's Age: [b]Young adult[/b](feel free to give exact age)
Background story:
Other: [b]She is blind in both eyes, due to cataracts, which give her eyes a milky blue-grey color. They glow faintly in dim light.[/b]
It started and ended with a man.
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by Eukaire » Wed Sep 29, 2010 7:39 pm
Cat's Name:
Cat's Gender: She cat
Cat's Age: 1 year in human years
Background story: Born in a rabid cat clan, i run away from them and find one of the two-leg's houses. i sneaks in like a dragonfly- unble to hear me- and feels my surroundings with her one unblind eye and and doesnt see a two-legs in the kitchen. she got caught and tried to run and run. couldnt find the invisible wall as the cats call it. two-legs seem to call it the "window". dont know. can barely see. getting hot. dizzy. hear something-turned around and looked up. worst idea i've ever had. the male two-legs hits my other eye with a long stick thing that looks unatural from the other ones. pain in my other eye. i faint into the darkness in my head. woke up in a huge hole outside. i can tell cause i cant find a way to get out. blind in both eyes. finally feel something to hang onto. cant see- can only climb. it gets more bright. i think im smiling. but when i get out of the hole- i smell a dog. looked up. can tell. smells like old chicken. must be a big dog because i hear his voice above me. i stare upwards to the sky. he turns me around, grabs me by my neck. takes me into the darkness of the forest. I can feel the cool breeze on my wet fur already. few days later we're alone in a small cave just for him. stray dog. asks me why im not looking at him. tell him im blind. he says "yeah you have cataracts. just making sure you new you were blind. and not a fake." he leads me to water and tuna- eat it up quickly. starving. can barley feel my legs. I fall asleep on the harsh cold floor by him after he says he'll protect me forever. (i think i got too into it

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Other: She is blind in both eyes, due to cataracts, which give her eyes a milky blue-grey color. They glow faintly in dim light.
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by meerkatgirl » Thu Sep 30, 2010 8:33 am
your story was a little hard to understand - you switched from past to present tense and from her point of veiw to someone else's. Also, you said she was blind in one, but if you actually read the form, you would realize that she is blind in both eyes. Sorry, but you're not going to get her.
It started and ended with a man.
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by Eukaire » Thu Sep 30, 2010 11:30 am
*cough*
pain in my other eye. i faint into the darkness in my head. woke up in a huge hole outside. i can tell cause i cant find a way to get out. blind in both eyes. finally feel something to hang onto. cant see- can only climb. it gets more bright. i think im smiling. but when i get out of the hole- i smell a dog. looked up. can tell. smells like old chicken. must be a big dog because i hear his voice above me. i stare upwards to the sky. he turns me around, grabs me by my neck. takes me into the darkness of the forest. I can feel the cool breeze on my wet fur already. few days later we're alone in a small cave just for him. stray dog. asks me why im not looking at him. tell him im blind. he says "yeah you have cataracts. just making sure you new you were blind. and not a fake."
might wanna read that part over :I it tells how she gets blind in both eyes. one was already blind then when the human hit her in the other eye with the stick she got blind.
and its not only her point of view -_-
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