by booklover789 » Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:20 pm
snowflop's runner-up design!
Hope you love her, snowflop!
snowflop wrote:Username: snowflop
Pony's Name: Hidden Paradise
Pony's Gender:
Female
Pony's Talent: Finding beautiful places and things that are hidden to others. Pony's Favorite Thing to Do: she loves helping others to see the pockets of paradise she discovers. How Did This Pony Break Her Horn? (Write it in the form of a story.)
Before
paradise was always very unique pony, her vibrant color and strange ears made her stand out in a crowd. However the strangest thing about her was that she couldn't use magic. This made her foal-hood rather depressing because her parent, both unicorns, couldn't stand her. They were always pressing her to use magic when she couldn't, eventually they gave up on her and left her at an orphanage. Despite being treated bad paradise was always kind, doing her best to make other ponies happy and cheer up the other foals living with her. Because of her chipper nature and great attitude an earth pony family soon adopted her. They were jungle explores and she often went with her new parents on exiting journey into the jungle. On one such trip she found an incredibly rare flower and earned her cutie mark.
The loss
paradise looking down into the crevice. It was very small and she probably wouldn’t fit in it. But she could see a beautiful patch a moss just at the bottom. She could almost reach it, if only she could do magic. She stepped away with a sigh, being a magic-less unicorn was hard. Suddenly she slipped on the wet jungle ground; she went tumbling down into the small crack. On the way down her horn caught on a boulder and snapped but she was so scared and disoriented she didn't notice. When the world finally stopped spinning she carefully got up. The crack had widened at the bottom and she was standing in an underground cavern. As she looked around she saw to her surprise her horn lay on the ground nearby. Not her entire horn, simply the very tip. She walked over to it and slumped to the floor. "Well it was useless anyway" she though sadly looking down at the shattered remains. She tried for what felt like the thousandth time the levitation spell. To her surprise the splinters of her horn lifted from the ground. "Yahooo!" she yelled, "the irony of it all! I had the break my horn to find my magic". At that point she wasn’t thinking of how she was going to get out or what she was going to do next, she was simply happy.
After
After levitating herself and of the crevice, paradise returned home to her family. They were quite surprised and concerned about the loss of her horn. However after they heard her story and saw her magic, they were just as happy as she was. The whole family, which included paradise, her adoptive parents and several tropical birds, had a celebratory dinner of jungle fruits. In the days that followed paradise learned to use her magic to enhance her talent, finding even more rare and beautiful things than ever before.
End? Finish This Pony's Cutie Mark! art by me C:
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=88&t=2104315
a sketch by me.
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?t=2106615
