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Hello!

This is another Native Spirits Ranch horse! I thought it would be cool to put a peacock feather... Win or Fail? Anyway if you want to adopt this cutie here is the form:

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Username:
Horse's Show Name:
Horse's Barn Name:
Gender:
Short Story: (At least 6 sentences)

[The_Shadow_Ghost]

Username: My username is The_Shadow_Ghost, but you can call me shadow or ghost

Horse's Show Name: This little girl's show name is lightning sparks. It was given to her by her trainer when she was a filly. She has used it in all show's she took part in up till now.

Horse's Barn Name: This girl's barn name is Shadow Dancer, it bears no resemblance to her show name at all. She responds more to this name than her show name.

Gender: Shadow Dancer; also known as Lightning sparks, is a mare.

Short Story: Shadow Dancer has a twisted past. Her mother was born and raised in a breeding barn. When she was three month's pregnant she managed to escape, after her rider took her for a stroll and fell out of the saddle. She managed to stay safe until Shadow Dancer was born, but it was a difficult birth, and she didn't make it through the night. Orphaned and weak, Shadow Dancer didn't have the strength to resist when the men came. The captured her and brought her back to the breeding barn. She was left there, and spent the first year of her life as a wild filly. No one bothered to tame her and she was left to her wild roots. Eventually, at a year and a half in age, Shadow Dancer was bought by a kind woman, who presented her to her daughter as a birthday present. There, she was half tamed, still semi-wild, she was entered in some races- and always ranked high. She was sold off again, and again, and again. Eventually, when she was three years old, she found a home with a couple, who were interested in her roots more than her racing skills. They left her out in the paddocks every night, and she worked out a plan. She escaped after weeks of scheming and ran wild for two more years. She took a fall though, and injured her ankle. A blind woman found her, and took her in. She loved her, even though she couldn't see her. Shadow Dancer became her eyes and the woman; who is called Alice, who cares for her in the best way. She is allowed to wander freely and openly around the area, there is always food, water and shelter available nearby but she would never leave Alice's side.

[kiah]

Username: kiah

Horses show name: Shadow Whisper

Horses barn name: Whisp

Gender: This horse is a mare.

Short story: Shadow Whisper was alone all of her life. She had no family, no friends. All she had was the forest, her home. Everything she used to love and treasure was gone. She was the only one left from her family. When she was just a foul, there was a terrible forest fire and she was the only survivor. Shadow Whisper lived off of a murcky pond, and the little grass that was left. She had little hope that she would live through the next year. She was so skinny that bones almost poked through her skin. She was determined to make the journey to her birthplace, even though she was sick, to die where her family died. One day in April, she found her birthplace. She wnt to her old home, and lie down to die where her family, so long ago had. But suddenly, a bush started rustling. Whisp was to tired to move. A young girl came out of the bushes and exclamied something. 2 other people came. They rapped me in something warm, and they lifted me into some strange moving thing, it was huge. The next time she woke up, she was in a warm barn with another horse, there was fresh hay, and clean water. Whisp stood up, feeling healthy and warm, and walked over ang got a drink. The other horse said "Good luck!" Whisp said "why"? and the other horse just smiled. Later that day, Whisp was taken out by the girl, and was giving her a ride. Whisp liked it. Little did she know, one day shed be Shadow Whisper, a beautiful champion award winning mare.



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[~JayFeather~]

username: ~JayFeather~


Show name: Freedoms Song

Barn name: Freedom

Gender: a young beautiful mare

Story: Freedoms song was born in the warm spring of May in the Savanah of Africa. It was a beautiful plain, with grass, trees, all kinds of animals, and a lake. She had a mother and a father, and an older sister. Her family named her Freedoms Song, to remind her of her speed and freedom, but everyone called her Freedom. When she was one, her sister was three, and left to live on her own. Freedom decided she would leave the next May when she turned 2. When that time did roll around, she said goodbye to her parents, and left to live alone on the Savanah. She had a happy life there, getting fresh water from the lake, and eating fresh leaves and fruit from the trees, along with some of the long plain grass. She loved racing other horses there, and even some Ostriches! One day when she was wandering around, she saw some humans. There was 3, two grown up males, and a young girl, 16 or so. Freedom was a very curious mare, so she walked closer and closer to the humans, very cautously... The girl saw Freedom, and said something loudly, grabbing one of the male humans arms and pointing at Freedom. The man smiled and gave the girl a a round red thing, that looked like a huge berry. Freedom could smell it, and the girl was holding it out to her, and she couldnt resist, so she took a bite. The girl smiled, a spark in her eye. Freedom stood there after she had finished, staring questioningly at the girl, and the girl reached out her hand and rubbed Freedoms head. After that, the girl put something over Freedoms mouth, she didnt like it at first, but then got used to it. Then the girl put something on her back, it was a little heavy, but Freedom didnt care. The girl got on with help from the bigger male human, and the girl taught me what to do. She pulled the long string handle on the bridle left to make me go right, and right to make me go left, and pulled it back to stop, and gently pressed her foot against my side to make me go. She took me home and at first i was scared, but now i live in a barn, with hay and water, and its wamr in there. Every day the girl takes me out riding and training to race, and my name was always kept Freedoms Song, a reminder that i was free.

Personality: kind,swift,shy,bold,noble and sweet.




WIP WIP WIP if i can toehrwise just judge it as is