by tekkai » Sat Feb 23, 2013 10:32 am
Username: Sleipnir
Name: Aeolus
Age: 52
Gender:Male
Story Working on it now :)
I'm sorry if it's terrible ^^''
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Aeolus pawed the ground angrily, his soft grey coat glistening in the faint moon light. Bowing his long lean neck, the silver stallion blew a burst of war breath in to the crisp mountain air.
The fur on his tail puffed in an attempt to enlarge himself and to intimidate the palomino stallion who’s heard he was attempting to overtake. However threats would have no affect on the palomino, for he had defended this heard for the past 60 years, and had no intention of submitting to this rouge bachelor.
Then in a burst of speed Aeolus lunged at the palomino, teeth bared and hooves lashing out towards the older stallion. Aeolus fought valiantly for over eight minutes with the palomino, but history has a habit of repeating itself. This was the second time Aeolus had challenged this male, and marked his second defeat to the palomino.
Retreating with a quick beat of his large grey wings, Aeolus gazed lazy at the palomino, before snorting in disdain and retreating into the clouds line above.
Once he was out of sight, Aeolus glided over to a cliff overlooking the palominos heard. The heard was not one of any particular interest, and many stallions would have even bothered to threaten the palomino let alone fight him twice, for its sake. It consisted of only two mares, one with a gangly colt in tow.
Aeolus guessed that the heard was once much larger, but recent droughts had caused the heard to disperse. The mother, a bright ruby colored chestnut, must have been the palominos mate. So the colt, he figured, was their son.
Aeolus then let his eyes wander to the roan grazing apart from the chestnut and her son. Based on the interactions he had witnessed, he assumed that she was the daughter of the palomino. He hadn’t caught her name but he was fascinated by her. The way she wind would tussle her long mane and the way she’d fly ever so close the lava, just to feel its heat. It fascinated him.
If only he could get past her father he might have a chance at speaking with her, and to him, just hearing her voice and being near her would be worth the fight.
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(Best of luck to everyone who entered :D)