Electric Male #6 by Tundra

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Electric Male #6

Postby Tundra » Sat Feb 02, 2013 4:50 pm

This Saber is:
ADOPTED


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Siegfried
Owner: KyuubiHiro
Gender: Male
Element: Electric
Characteristics:
Info:
~Hair can never lay flat, is always spiked
~has a natural static to his fur
~Abnormally good vision
~Longer claws(shaped like lightening bolts)









Hex Codes: #f2f611-#191919-#FFFFFF-#203e5d-#8c425e-#f2f6c4


"A Story is Meant to be Told"

One side of the coin, Siegfried is your typical war-veteran; a hardened male that has been taught lessons of battle that have made him wise yet enforcing. He isn't one for tolerance, and gets rather angry easily, but he knows how to channel it into controlled, yet raw violence, verbal or physical. It's hard to get this guy believing in nonsense. From what he's gained and lost throughout battle, he's become rather nihilistic. Which is, the fact that he has to see something to understand that it exists. He can see his opponents, therefore he knows they exist to stand in his way. Because of this, it's irritating to get this guy to understand the concepts of powerful emotions, such as love. It's also excruciatingly difficult to get this guy to slow down. He never sleeps, he's always out somehow, whether he's on guard duty, simply always on the move, or even training his skills.

However, there is a much deeper concept to the war hero that is hard to reveal. While its hard for him to trust, or in-fact, hard for others to trust him completely, he does have the desire of friendship. Siegfried doesn't always want to be a saber constantly haunted by his more daunting fights, and he's well aware his insomnia and thirst for fighting don't help. He's afraid of losing more people he cares about. And deep down, he truly knows what love means, but even then, this is something he just come back to grasp with. He's truly a man constantly spited by his nightmares, even when awake, and it's forced him to take on a tough guy role. Only it's gotten so much to his head that it's hard for the poor saber to even remember how he was like before the battles started to wear on him. Overall, he knows how to be kind and loving, he's just put on the war veteran mask too tight.

I have lived on this Earth for a long time it seems. To the average saber, they may just say I'm only a little above half-way till my end. Compared to some, I may be very old. To others, I'm practically still a child. But one-hundred fifty some-odd years enough for me to come to grips with the fact that I have seen enough in my time to give it all up. So many others, so many times, so many events, so much has happened in my life. They have all come and gone, like a beautiful comet. Of course, not all these things have ended up like a beautiful comet. I have had too much in my life happen to me, so I might as well give you the important gist. I was born to no one. My father left my mother, where she was killed because of me. I gained her nutrients. But she said in her final words that it was to give a better life, to have another chance. If I am her second chance, then let it be known that I've managed to stay alive in this stone cold world.

I was brought up, at first, by a grizzly bear. She was a kind and elderly bear, but she was still tough as nails. She taught me the basics of fighting and survival. I guess in a sense, you could call her my adoptive mother. I think her name was Ursana. She would always tell me to get my own food, but I knew it was for my own good. Age would soon take the poor bear, and I was old enough to take care of myself. She managed to raise me for a good 30 years, which was very old for the bear. It made me sad when she died, but she gave me a confidence I would never forget. And it was through his death that I saw a vision. A vision of the Original, a nameless Saber wielding the mighty powers of the skies. It was through this vision that I pushed my own lightning abilities, so I could protect those I would come to meet later in life. I gave Ursana the burial she dreamed of; to fly with the summer wind of the forest. I gave her what she desired. I reduced her body to ashes, and sent them into that that very warm breeze.

Afterwards, I pressed on towards the mountains more south. They weren't as cold, so I was used to the temperatures they gave. I found a pack of fellow Sabers. At first, I was far from welcomed, but with my skills, I managed to prove myself worthy and was given a warm welcome from their paws. From there on, I fought alongside them for the control of the mountains, fighting off and killing many, from wolves to foxes to rams to other Sabers. That powerful but bloody length of fifty-two years had brought us joy and strength. And it was by this time that I met an Air Saber by the name of Asenna. She was indeed the most beautiful creature I ever did see. She stole my warrior heart. And soon enough, during a blossoming spring five years post to our meeting, we became mates. Ironically, during the same time, the eldest of the pack, Gestorm, promoted me to pack alpha after he died. And with that, not only was I in command of of my fellow friends and fighters, but I was to be with Asenna. We promised a forever-long relationship.

However, a short five years swam by like a trout, and my days as leader would be coming to an end. Many bad things began happening to me. First off, Asenna was unable to breed. This brought us right down. It didn't help when other Saber packs began attacking like mad dogs wanting their food. We were being swarmed with attacks, many of our fellow pack members were dying, and worst off, we found the source to Asenna's inability to breed. She was suffering from an illness. And as if on cue, all of the other packs ganged up on us after Asenna passed on with my mother and Ursall. Her dying will was to tell me to keep living. By her word, I stood, and while I was prepared to die, I would refuse it. My closest friends and pack mates, a simple fourteen of us, we fought off what seemed like infinite amounts of enemy infantry. By the will, power, and souls of our ancestors, we charged, we fought, but nobody won. I had lost them all; all of my friends, my family. Everything that was dear to me was gone; except my will. With that alone, I slaughtered the remainder of the enemy sabers. And I disowned my position as leader, and for now, I have been traveling, dealing with even simple common criminals in forests or anywhere that would need my help. Just so i wouldn't fail my pack. Or my love.

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Re: Electric Male #6

Postby Tundra » Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:47 am

I have to say I'm glad for the turn out for this sabers competitions. Hardly any incomplete forms, and overall all forms were nicely made. but only one can win, and Its posted above who did.

Paint
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Art:
You did quite nice on the art, though i feel you could have done more in the time you had with this contest. Only one colored image, and no armor to represent the saber. I'd like to see more effort put into the entry with the time you had to make more art.

Personality:
Your personality is well described, I'm able to feel the saber and who he is.

Other:
The name is nice, I like that you included its history and what it meant.
There is a min 3 attacks, but yours were well described.


KyuubiHiro
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Story:
Some main things to point out. Polar bears are not in the WAS community. Sabers are not "given" their powers, and there are no other gods. In fact sabers don't have gods per say, they follow mother earth, or the first saber who gave the original sabers. Otherwise your story is quite nice, near the end though you started rushing it. I feel you could have spent a bit more time.

Personality:
Well described, no tips needed here

Other:
Your armor could have had a drawing to back it up. The lack of description to describe what it looks like didn't help here at all.
Art would have been nice.


Revalva
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Art: Nicely made, your other image though is a download instead of a link to the image. You making a full body shot would have been nice. Overall though the head shot you made is lovely, well placed together and flowing with the curves of the skull.

Story(s): Humans are gone, or in small numbers. Thus, would not live in Antarctica. Your story is lacking though, i feel you could have added a lot more about the saber. I would have liked to see more points in the life of the saber. To help me see who he is and why he is that way.

Personality:
Its quite nice, though i feel it could be described more. Be direct on what you want the personality to be, then describe each aspect of it.

Other: Your armor is described nicely
Your attacks are well described
You special ability is unique, I like it.


Estrella.
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Art:
Just a head shot, though accurate isn't really enough to get a good score here. I want to see full body shots of the sabers.

Story(s):
Lacking, it would have been nice to see multiple time points. Though the one point you focused on was nicely described. I could picture the situation the saber was in. I feel though more could have been added.

Personality:
More description...is all I can say. It was described enough to get the jest of what he is like though.

Other: Your attacks were nice, needed a bit more description.

a l e r i e;;
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Art:
I would have liked to see a full body pose of the saber. Your art is nice though, accurate and portrays the saber as I came to find him.

Story(s): Your saber can not be around when humans were flourishing. At the moment only one saber is old enough to have seen those days and that is the Earth saber. Though everything else was fine. I feel though you could have described the area better, gave a feel for where the saber was, what he was doing, WHY he was there. Telling a story from his point of view instead of yours always helps with this i find.

Personality:
Well described, made points on both sides of who he is. I have nothing to add here


Disqualified or Withdrew
maclew13(Withdrew)
mountains.(didn't finish form)
hobbit geek (withdrew)
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Re: Electric Male #6

Postby Sakhmet » Mon Feb 04, 2013 1:27 am

[b]Username: maclew13
[b]Name: Vixor
[b]Age :unknown
[b]Personality: He may seem like the "i'm sexy and i know it" kind of saber, but really he is humble, and cares deeply for the innocent. Though he tries to keep a cool outside appearence. Though he is also quite funny, and loves to joke around and lighten up the mood.
[b]Attacks: he uses his immense strength to overpower his enemies. He has powerful, outbursts, taking his strokes in precise rock hard blows.
[b]Special Ability: he has the ability to electrify his hide like an electric eel, and any of his foes that touch him get an extreme shock. He can also use his electric powers as bursts of super speed.
[b]Armor Type : considering his great strength, he prefers heavy armor for the conducting properties, and the extra protection.
[b]Story/History: (he is an heir to the electric servant, just like Syndra, so same story about the servants and anti's) He was hidden in a thunderstorm cloud, where he honed his electric skills with the lightning nymphs of the storms. After awhile the anti's found nymphs and slaughtered them. Vixor easily killed the servants of the anti's and fled. He started tracking the anti that sent the servants. He found one of the main generals of the poison anti, and set up his attack. Right as he was attacking, another saber burst in in a glowing orb with a fierce roar. Assuming she was a servant of the poison anti, he went to intercept her. but froze as she lept over him with graceful agility and pounced on the servant. Quickly recovering from his surprise, he join in on the attack and they quickly killed the servant. Afterwords he talked with the strange saber and they each explained their predicament. They both agreed that since they were the last heirs, then they should stick together and destroy the anti's. At first they didn't know what heir he was, but during one of the battles, Syndra got hit pretty hard and got knocked out. And before the servant knew what had happened, Vixor was over there and was electrified. He had run the span of a football field in 1 second, and had electricity flowing all over him almost like the current was alive. After that they got even closer. Secretly Vixor has a crush on Syndra. Now they travel all over the world trying to help all of the people and all of the creature get free from the darkness of the anti's.
[b]Some Facts on WAS: new and improved warrior armor saber pound was started jan, 4th.
[b]Art of it: can't do art
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Re: Electric Male #6

Postby Jean. » Wed Feb 06, 2013 11:03 pm

Ima withdraw :/
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Postby diamonds;; » Thu Feb 07, 2013 2:03 pm

i'm just going to post this for ease. ideas © to me, mountains.


      username wrote:
      THE PUPPETEE :
hello! my name is mountains., but you can call me mounty or red, even velvet if you wish; whichever floats your boat really. I am posting here simply because i have fallen in love with this saber, and i will do my best to try and win this spectacular and handsome beast. i feel as if there is so much potentional in his eyes, i could write a novel on him.

      saber's name wrote:
      HE'S CANG :

      Frederick Douglass wrote:
      It is not light that we
      need, but fire; it is not
      the gentle shower, but
      thunder. We need the
      storm, the whirlwind,
      and the earthquake.


the name raiden is from mythology and comes from rai meaning thuder and den meaning lightning. it is a masculine name and is also japanese. it can be spelt in different forms rayden. Rayden is somewhat popular as a baby boy name. The name has been growing in popularity since the 2000s; prior to that, it was of irregular use only. Its usage peaked modestly in 2011 with 0.013% of baby boys being named Rayden. It was #830 in rank then. Among the family of boy names directly related to Rayden, Raiden was the most frequently used in 2011. It was 82% more frequently used than Rayden in that year. i chose this name because i thought it suited him very well and so did the meaninng due to the element. he is very masculine physically so the male name will suit him. i also love the name and i had to search the internet to find one which meaned something when i saw his image.

      saber's age wrote:
      OLD AS TIME, HIMSELF :

      saber's personality wrote:
      A STORM IS BREWING :

      attacks wrote:
      ADVANCING ON THE BATTLE FIELD :

      special attack wrote:
      VICTORY IS IN A MILE :

      saber's armour wrote:
      CHAINMAIL ARMOUR :

      story wrote:
      TALES OF THE PAST :

      facts on was wrote:
      KNOWLEDGE IS KEY :

      art / peoms wrote:
      THE FINAL MASERPEICE :
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Re: Electric Male #6

Postby Tundra » Fri Feb 08, 2013 12:24 am

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Re: Electric Male #6

Postby Hobbit Geek » Sun Feb 10, 2013 2:06 am

Username: Redtail<3
Name: Zeus
Age : 10 years
Personality:
He is kind, understanding, sweet and caring to everyone. He can get snappy or mad and might lash out like white fire at times. He is wild and free like a mustang, shy, sensitive and caustous like a meerkat, sweet and caring like a mouse, brave, loyal and firece like a lion and beautiful and graceful like a Phoenix. He takes time to play with cubs and is always gentle with them. He would protect anyone in need at any cost to himself.
Attacks:
Lightning Strike:
He shoots lightning out of the sky at an enemy and he could either put it up to full charge and really wound the bird or put it low and just daze them.

shocking gash:
He puts a lot of energy into his claws and brings them down on an enemy. it leaves the bird like creature with a large gash that is shocking them every 10 seconds, and only lasts for about 10 minutes.

Blow out:
He uses his larges paws and lightning to make the bird creature black out, the animal will only be asleep for an hour though it is harder for him to do then the others.

Special Ability:
Master bolt:
This is hard for him to do yet it works the best, at the moment he does this his yellow marking will begin to glow and his eyes will become a more Ocean like color. the fur tuff's/mane on his legs, back and neck with stand more on end then it does most of the time. there is five seconds until there power is up at full charge and must be released or he might die (It is unknown what will happen since he never refused to release it once he had the power) when the power is released there is a flash of yellow light and the bird creature is found dead, burned by hundreds of lightning bolts
Armor Type : gold greek battle Armor
Story/History: Sorry but I cannot write another story but I will give a short history of ten years..
so he was born in the fall, on 9th day of the 9th month on the 2003rd year. His mother raised him and he was ready to leave her and train his powers at the age of 5 months. He trained harder then any other saber dared and he grew stronger by the day. by the time he was 10 years old (now) he has mastered his powers to their extreme limit. He is feared by the Bird creatures and is loved and feared by the sabers.
Some Facts on WAS:
They bond so perfectly with nature, these sabers took on amazing powers such as control of ice, fire, water, earth, air, psychic, darkness and poison. Along with the gift of these elements, the sabers took on forms relating to their element. With these powers, the sabers ensured harmony was kept even in the darkest of times.
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Re: Electric Male #6

Postby Tundra » Mon Feb 11, 2013 2:31 pm

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Claude --

Postby CLUMSY » Tue Feb 12, 2013 11:04 pm

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My username is Paint, but I was formerly known as Painteh.

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Claude, <Clahd> which means "bolt" in Latin. I searched countless words in all different languages on Google Translate, and took many others into consideration. But while choosing, I kept referring back to this wonderful reference. Seeing how brilliantly it went with his sharp, metalic colors, spiked black fur, and all of the ideas I had planned for him, my heart fluttered; and right then I knew it just had to be. It felt like finding the one missing peice of a puzzle, I knew it was perfect and fit right in to this jigsaw of a form.

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I've decided that Claude will be around 50 years old. I don't kow exactly why, but it felt like a resonable age for how I've planned him and his personality.

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Claude has quite the personality. He's a grump most of the time, easily irritated and enraged. He normally keeps to himself, so you could think of him as the grumpy, silent, tough type. He likes to work independently, thinking that others will mess everything up. Kind of like the idea, "If you want something done right, do it yourself". He likes to have time to be quiet and by himself, often thinking out battle strageties; his favorite thing. If you disturb him while he's thinking... well, you probably shouldn't do that if you like your head on your shoulders.


Matthew Henry wrote: After a storm comes a calm.


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Hook zolt
Claude pounces on his foe, hooking
his lightning-bolt claws into place so
they're stuck. He then electricutes his
foe, teporarily paralyzing it and leaving
deep gashes from his claws.


Chain wrap
Claude manuverates his body
around to wrap his foe in his
armour's chains; if possible
around their neck. The
electricity in the chains
slightly shock his enemy,
and while they are trapped
in the chains he is free to
attack as he chooses; as long
as he can reach from his position.


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Paralyzing Gaze
When Claude has
enough electric energy
stored, He can focus
all of the excess
power to use in
his gaze. If he
locks gazes with
his opponet for
atleast 5 seconds,
he can paralyze
them momentarily.


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Iron, with silver chains to
let the electricity flow
throughout it.




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∙Sabers are 7 ft tall, 6 at shoulders
∙Family oriented
∙Has a liter of at most 4 cubs
∙Prides have 20 or more sabers in one location
∙Armor can be made of any and all materials excluding platinum


Dean Thorpe wrote: Hear the thunder rumble, a sound from miles away
Is it getting nearer, or over for today
A flash of blinding light, electric in the skies
Looking out the window, it really hurts my eyes
After comes the rumble, the clash of cloud on cloud
Feel the floor vibrating, that one was really loud
Still more lightning flashes, it hit's the old oak tree
Lightning in the garden, now that's too close for me
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Re: Electric Male #6

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