[Ralonica]

To win this Cretoz, write a poem about him. It doesn't have to rhyme!


Winner-

Owner: EvaLine!!
Name: Born This Way (aka Waya)
Gender: Male
Age: 6.5 years
Height: 19.3hh
Poem:

Paradise
I lie,
I fight
I own the night.
I run,
I scream
I have one single dream
Of winning you..

You, my paradise..

My toes,
My head
My familys dead.
My body,
My mind
My talent to find
The way to your heart..

You, my paradise..

A story,
A tale
A love thirsty male.
A promise,
A mare
A suspicious air
that blows you to me..

You, my paradise..

Betrayal and courage,
I have no knowledge.
That feeling is is new,
A feeling 'bout you.
For a reason, I
want you close by.
But your heart are in chains,
for another that pains.
He keeps you away,
but I will someday,
Fight for my love,
with strenght for above.
I will wait for that day,
when I'll take you away.
I will think twice,
before I show you my paradise..

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[Ember Sky]

Marking.~

[august rush]

Wow, what a beautiful boy o:

Owner: αυgυsτ гυsн
Name: Kakáo
Gender: Male
Age: 7
Height: 19.3hh
Poem:
Its a WIP. I wrote many poems down, but most failed in being about the Cretoz ._.

[sodafarts]

Owner: ~Just.Peachy~
Name: Bronwick, aka Wick ^^
Gender: Male
Age: 6
Height: 19.3hh
Poem: WIP <3

Gosh, he's gorgeous Ralonica <333

[Spoopy Season]

Owner: Fetcher007
Name: Cheif
Gender: Male
Age: 6
Height: 19.3hh
Poem:
I run
Nipping at my hoofs, the rocks pound at my soles
The glorious feeling of the wind through my mane
Today, my herd will travel with me
Following the grass
Deep in the rocky valley
Close to the creek
We run
Enter the pale light of the day
The sun beating down on my coat
I feel the warmth
I run
Free as the water that trickles down the hills
As strong as the mountains themselves
The happiest soul is I
I run

I gave it a shot

[VanWen]

Owner: <-Estelwen-{
Name: Weermag se Kind (Child of the Army)
Gender: Male
Age: 5
Height: 19.3hh
Poem:

Child of the Army
I was born when the blood fell to earth,
I took my first steps as explosions tore through the air,
I gained strength as nations rose and came crashing down.

I am the Child of the Army,
The child of a rising nation,
I am eager, I am thirsy.

I was fed on fear,
Fed on power,
Fed on greed and anger.

I am the child of the Army,
The child of a failing nation,
I am corruption, I am lies.

I am the war you make,
The war you made.
I make heroes,
But I'm the nightmare that haunts them.

I am the child of the Army,
The child of a forgotten nation,
I am the patron of a human's greed.

[CopperChaos]

Owner: copper96
Name: Ulamlume ("Oo- La - Loom - ay") Nickname: Ume
Gender: Male
Age: 4
Height: 19.3hh
Poem:

My Ulalume
My Golden Eyed One
His Pace one of Glory

My Ulalume
With White Flecked Cheek
And laughing Bray

My Ulalume
Thy Heartfelt Cloven Steed
My Feelings never Fadeaway

My Ulalume
Of Silkened Grullo
May you be truly Mine Someday

My Ulalume
Tinged of Brown
To never Unsay

My Ulalume
My Dreamed Cretoz
May you Ever Stay

My Ulalume
My Golden Eyed One
Be Mine This day

Forever more!

[Merlin's Heir]

Owner: TheHorseWhisperer
Name: Mountain Rosace
Gender: Male
Age: 9 years
Height: 19.3hh
Poem: When the moutains' reign comes to a close,
And the peaks are not longer topped with white lace,
Then will the hero of legend have rose,
A Cretoz stallion, Mountain Rosace.

Mountain for his noble stance,
From his hooves to royal nose,
Rosace for his kingly prance,
And color just like a rose.

His kingship will sprout wings and fly,
Through clouds of those great and brave,
All along the edge of the sky,
To the deepest, darkest cave.

A stallion with a pure heart of red rose,
This courageous, pure Mountain Rosace,
When the moutains' reign comes to a close,
And the peaks are no longer topped with white lace.

[£eviathan]

Good luck to everyone!

[Maysel]

I don't want to adopt this it's just that the end date for the competition is on ma birthday!!