[LostHope]

Rare unicorn

Handler: Sheiden
Gender: Stallion
Name: Cyanide
Height: 16.8 hands

[xXIgnisXx]

Handler: *~!Horses!~*
Gender: Stallion
Name:Eclipse
A story on how you acquired him:

One day I went for a walk down by the lake.I seen a strange glow in the shadows,so went to see what it was.It was a unicorn stallion purifying the water,to rid of some oil.I set an apple down by him and was on my way home.

When I got home I seen him at the edge of the forest.He nickered happily.I left some hay and water out for the night for him to eat if he wanted it.After that I fed Bear and went to bed.The next morning he waiting by the barn door.I opened the barn door and went in and he followed me.I patted him and continued doing my barn chores.When I finished my barn chores he was still near me, so I put a halter on him and he pranced around happily.

"I'm going to call you Eclipse?Okay"I said to him.

He nickered happily and went into and empty stall,so I put food and water in the stall for him,and he never lefted the barn only when I opened his door for him to go outside to the pasture.

[Eleski]

Handler: Sheiden
Gender: Stallion
Name: Cyanide
A story on how you acquired him:
There were a lot of rumors that a rare unicorn had been spotted in The Great Plains. Even though there was no proof, this still brought in a large crowd of people hoping to see it. They weren't bad people, but I found them to be a bit of a nuisance. I went out riding on my stallion Kamui even more than usual just to avoid them.
It was on one of these rides that we stumbled upon the unexpected. The sound alerted me before my sight could. An unpleasant noise, not unlike a scream, came from nearby in the bushes. Ignoring my urge to leave as quickly as possible, I dismounted and went over to investigate. What I saw made me stop in my tracks. There, right in front of me, was the unicorn that only moments before I didn't believe existed. He was gorgeous, but very angry and very dangerous. He thrashed about but he couldn't free himself from what appeared to be a tangle of barbed wire. It was likely left behind by some careless person, but how it got there didn't really matter at the moment. Something needed to be done quickly. I wasted no time running back to Kamui. Years of riding on the trails taught me that you always had to be prepared and that included keeping a small pair of wire cutters in your saddle bag. I cut the wires with swift ease then threw them clear as the stallion scrambled to his feet.
He was a little unstable from exhaustion but he was still magnificent in every way. He had calmed down quite a bit. I wouldn't have minded taking him home with me but I had nothing to lead him with. Satisfied that his wounds were minor enough and he could take care of himself now, I turned to leave.
I mounted Kamui but was surprised to see the unicorn start to follow me. I couldn't ride through town with a unicorn following me. I realized I was going to have to take the long way home. By the time I made it home it was nearly dark out. I wasn't sure the unicorn would tolerate being left in a barn so I laid some hay outside for him as well as a bucket of fresh water. Satisfied that there was nothing more I could do for him tonight, I went to bed. I didn't really expect him to be there in the morning but a quick glance out my window proved that he really did stay through the night. After I took care of Kamui and let him out in the pasture, I decided to see if the unicorn would let me brush him. As I stood there slowly running the bristles along his dark coat, I admired him. So dark and dangerous. His mane and tail like silver. I'd call him Cyanide. And I knew he was here to stay.

[LostHope]

Both are very well done. I'll have to wait until tomorrow morning to judge.

[LostHope]

Last chance to enter before judging starts.

It's going to be hard to choose...

[LostHope]

Handler: Sheiden
Gender: Stallion
Name: Cyanide
A story on how you acquired him:
There were a lot of rumors that a rare unicorn had been spotted in The Great Plains. Even though there was no proof, this still brought in a large crowd of people hoping to see it. They weren't bad people, but I found them to be a bit of a nuisance. I went out riding on my stallion Kamui even more than usual just to avoid them.
It was on one of these rides that we stumbled upon the unexpected. The sound alerted me before my sight could. An unpleasant noise, not unlike a scream, came from nearby in the bushes. Ignoring my urge to leave as quickly as possible, I dismounted and went over to investigate. What I saw made me stop in my tracks. There, right in front of me, was the unicorn that only moments before I didn't believe existed. He was gorgeous, but very angry and very dangerous. He thrashed about but he couldn't free himself from what appeared to be a tangle of barbed wire. It was likely left behind by some careless person, but how it got there didn't really matter at the moment. Something needed to be done quickly. I wasted no time running back to Kamui. Years of riding on the trails taught me that you always had to be prepared and that included keeping a small pair of wire cutters in your saddle bag. I cut the wires with swift ease then threw them clear as the stallion scrambled to his feet.
He was a little unstable from exhaustion but he was still magnificent in every way. He had calmed down quite a bit. I wouldn't have minded taking him home with me but I had nothing to lead him with. Satisfied that his wounds were minor enough and he could take care of himself now, I turned to leave.
I mounted Kamui but was surprised to see the unicorn start to follow me. I couldn't ride through town with a unicorn following me. I realized I was going to have to take the long way home. By the time I made it home it was nearly dark out. I wasn't sure the unicorn would tolerate being left in a barn so I laid some hay outside for him as well as a bucket of fresh water. Satisfied that there was nothing more I could do for him tonight, I went to bed. I didn't really expect him to be there in the morning but a quick glance out my window proved that he really did stay through the night. After I took care of Kamui and let him out in the pasture, I decided to see if the unicorn would let me brush him. As I stood there slowly running the bristles along his dark coat, I admired him. So dark and dangerous. His mane and tail like silver. I'd call him Cyanide. And I knew he was here to stay.

After a few hours of thought, I have made my decision. While both were excelent stories, there was one thing that sorta put me off with the first. It was just an edit from the last attempt at the pegasus.

Thank you both for entering, I really do hope to see you around. Don't get discouraged if you don't win, and keep in mind that my PopTart's Birthday Bash is going on. You may even win your own custom instead!

[xXIgnisXx]

After a few hours of thought, I have made my decision. While both were excelent stories, there was one thing that sorta put me off with the first. It was just an edit from the last attempt at the pegasus.

Thank you both for entering, I really do hope to see you around. Don't get discouraged if you don't win, and keep in mind that my PopTart's Birthday Bash is going on. You may even win your own custom instead!

I really did'nt edit my forum It was just what popped to my mind,I'm sorry if you did'nt like it though,I also thought the name Eclpise was fitting for eaither of them.

[LostHope]

After a few hours of thought, I have made my decision. While both were excelent stories, there was one thing that sorta put me off with the first. It was just an edit from the last attempt at the pegasus.

Thank you both for entering, I really do hope to see you around. Don't get discouraged if you don't win, and keep in mind that my PopTart's Birthday Bash is going on. You may even win your own custom instead!

I really did'nt edit my forum It was just what popped to my mind,I'm sorry if you did'nt like it though,I also thought the name Eclpise was fitting for eaither of them.

Oh don't worry about it, I wasn't trying to call you out. It was just very similar and that's what it seemed like. I'm sorry you didn't win, but if you'd like I can reserve the next normal GPE for you. There's one available no, actually. And there are two special one of a kind line-edits available too! While many will get a unicorn or a pegasus with the same wings and horns, they will never have one with these manes.

[xXIgnisXx]

no thanks it not a big deal ,and I want everyone to have a chance to get the GPE they want so no reservations required.