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Postby midnight133 » Wed May 02, 2012 3:32 am

drum roll please... and the winner is (long pause filled with tension and dramatic music) Rain Cloud' with Dyson
(well done to te people who entered the forms were really good :) )
User Name: Rain Cloud'
Name:Dyson
Nickname: Dax ♥
Color: palomino
Pattern: grey strioes
Mane & Tail Stripes: white and grey
Eyes: grey
Hooves: grey
Gender: male
Personality: Caring, Persuasive, Noble, Giddy, Thinks He Better, No Fear, && Very respectful.
History:
Dyson wasn't supposed to be born into a world with bunch of other horses like himself. His mother, Dina, who was a beautiful Tre, made the biggest mistake of her life at a young age. Dina's coat was Palomino with the slightest tint of white. Dyson's father was Gray with the slightest tint of black & white spots. Noble like his father but respect like his mother.

~ In The Beginning ~

Dina was a very young foal around the age of 8 months nearly close to 1 year old. She was wild and very beautiful known to kind. She used to flirt and be very kind to brutes, which got her to where she is now with Dyson. One day, she was wondering away from her pack at the age of 10 months and found a very young looking brute named Zenos. He wasn't young as he looked but he was very flirtatious like Dina was. The two fell in love with each other, which was a dangerous sight for such foals.

Dina was away from her pack for many years leaving her mother & father worried sick about her. Dina was then 2 years old. She was a full-grown mare. As beautiful as said, her coat shined even more brighter than usual in the sunlight. Zenos was a gray but very-dull brute. His personality changed toward Dina one day and she was forced to stay away from her family, even when she didn't want to. At the age 2, she, herself, Dina, had the make the hardest choice between her love or her family who brought her into this world. And out of stupidity, she chose love.

One day, when Dina wasn't herself. She and Zenos went off by themselves making them do a very romantic move together. They didn't know the outcome.. since they were only 3 years old in Tre years. They both didn't want a foal til 5, but instead of that "foal" being born years later.. It was then born months later being named Dyson.

Dina regrets her moments. She is now stuck being a mother of a foal named Dyson nicknamed Dax. Zenos didn't like the idea of being a father, so he vanished when he went hunting. Dina was then stuck alone being a single mare of a Foal with no tribe or food around to survive.

~ Dyson's Life Of Survival ~
Dyson was now 8 months with his mother of 4 years-young. She was very ill but wasn't ill enough to leave the very earth she stood before. "Dyson, come here, my son." she called out sweetly as a mother should. Dyson stoppered knowing he would stagger. He was very wobbly on his legs but somewhat steady as well. His coat was the most cleanest and yet shiniest beside his mothers. He was such a mama's boy since his father left the minute he was born. He never knew what his father looked nor acted like.

As time went on, Dyson grew older and became much stronger. He loved his mother but the time had came to where he had to leave his mother to move on in life. Start his own herd, family, and become leader one day. No one knew Dyson would soon be leaving since the way he was spoiled and tormented by others but that day finally has come and he proved everyone wrong.

Dyson was now 2 years old, he was a wild horse; Quiet, Shy, and yet intimidated. He wouldn't be able to make friends as quite as normal as a horse would be able to. He was big and built. His muscle showed on his coat and his eyes brought out his true personality but hid it from those who looked like they could kill a fly. Dyson was very thin but he was strong. His survival skills weren't as good as everyone thought. When it would rain and trees would fall - he would ran in fear. Fire; He would stamper away in a near by bush for it to go away. Food; never found. Even though it was around him everywhere. Water; He found but never drank as much as suppose.

Dyson's life was coming to and end since his health was awful. Skinny as can be, dehydrated, and very pail. But one day, a thunder storm rolled in and scared him half-to-death which made he ran quickly in the direction of the meadow, which where he finally saw a beautiful mare like his mother but more gorgeous than he'd ever seen before. It was love at first sight for Dyson.

♥ Unforgettable Moment ♥
( Gonna Skip This. The ♥'s In The Title Give Away Of What's Gonna Happen Anyways Between Victoria & Dyson. )

~ Mothers death ~
Dyson was out one day with his mate, Victoria, wondering and wondering what to do in the future for their new herd. He hadn't heard from his mother in a while, which isn't normal for her to just forget about him like that. He became worried but Victoria knew what was wrong. She stopped by the other day seeing his mom's illness take control of her body. She didn't have much longer to live and didn't wanna tell Dyson til she knew it was time. Dyson read Victoria's expression which crushed him to pieces and knew he didn't have much time to spend with his old herd and especially, his mother.

Victoria was pregnant with two twin foals, and couldn't handle any stress or sadness, but Dyson's stress and depression was one thing she was willing to deal with. The foals were soon to be here and mostly delivered but she didn't mind as long as Dyson was happy. She felt the kicks and the moving which made her tired but she was more worried about her mate.

Dyson knew Victoria was pregnant so they both set out to the herd of which his mother was in. "Are you alright, Dear?" he asked nuzzling her. "I'm fine, love." she replied softly as Dyson nuzzled her. "I'm just really exhausted." she gave him a cute smile, which always got to Dyson. "I see. Well, you can rest and I'll return with the news, I promise." He knew he was lying about the 'news' but the returning to Victoria was the truth. He wouldn't leave her side for nothing. "Alright, Dyson. I trust you. Please be back. I will be needing you for these two when they arrive." She said as she layed down in a patch of flowers and nibbling at her stomach.

Dyson watched as she lied down in the patch of flowers and he ran off in the direction of his mothers den and soon enough he didn't have enough time. He got there too late which killed him inside but did not show it. They did not know what was killing her, so they assumed of old age. "Mother.." he said under his breathe, nuzzling her nose and moving slightly, even though knowing she would not reply back. He lied next to her body placing his head over hers and crying. Losing someone is like losing a loved one. Losing a loved one is like watching someone stab your heart in front of you. Ever since his mother has passed the very day he reached her without saying a fellow goodbye.. He has not been the same. But seeing a Gray horse with the slightest tint of black & white spots was the best day of his life. He finally has met his father, when he had no hope since he lost his mother.

The Day Of A Choice Of Leadership.
Dyson wasn't himself anymore due to the following month or so that passed of his mother's death. He wished she was here to see the happy ending in his life. Dyson was now a beautiful father of a young foal named, Mayson. She was as beautiful as Victoria. He leaned down to nuzzle the foal as she wobbled. Victoria grazed at the grass as Mayson nursed from her. Dyson protected the land and his herd. His father, Lucifer, was still around in the plains of his new home. He knew the day would come when he would have to chose love over family or family over love.

Dyson had weeks to choose. He thought hard. The only family he had was his mother. Who has passed. Love? Love is his new family now. Mayson & Victoria. He was happy and finally not in pain like he was. No longer suffered from being upset or thinking he was alone. Mayson. His little princess was his new prior and everything to protect. That day had came when Victoria, his mare. Had been doubted to be sentenced away from his father. Along with Mayson. Dyson had to choose now or never see his baby or Victoria, again. Dyson was foolish.. He chose love.

Dyson's father, Lucifer, was beyond range. He didn't want Dyson to make the same mistake his mother made. He remembered making the move on Dina. He regrets it. But seeing Dyson with his family. Upset him the most.

Dyson then sentenced his own father, Lucifer, away from his lands. He did it for Mayson & Victoria. He thought he was cool with his father. He loved him very much.. But realizing what he was doing to his family. He now knew why mother always hid him away when father would come around.

[ ;;Flash Back

Dyson was griffled and pushed behind a tree or his own mother when a big horse came around. His mother, Dina, was always furious but loved the horse very much.. Which gave Dyson ideas it was his father. Dina stamped, snipped, and gave an argument to stay away from her foal. "Is this a joke or is she protecting me?" he thought to himself. As the big horse, with the coat of gray with the slightest tint of black & white spots walked away, Dina, his mother, became very upset. Dyson always thought it was his father.. He was smart but didn't want any trouble. So he stood hidden behind the tree til his mother came and gave him the 'OK' to come out, again. Dyson couldn't bare to see his mother upset.. So he watched as she mopped away.. and as he turned to the side the big horse was gone into the shadows. ]

Dyson was then the ruler of the new lands which was proudly his. "Land Of Goddess" was finally his. Land full of peace, love, and laughter. Nothing such as violance ever came around neither did chaos.

[ ;;Horrible Memorie

Dyson was about 3 months. Surviving. Dina, his mother, always had trouble with a big horse named Lucifer. She never mentioned anything to Dyson since he was still very young as of age. One day, Dina went hunting and left Dyson alone. She was gone for quite awhile. He was alone and scared but knew he was safe. "Mother." he would call out. He would get hyper and happy hearing footsteps from her. Assuming she was coming home one night. He stepped out like his mother told him to do when he would hear return. The footsteps were heavier and much louder than before. It wasn't his mother. But the big horse.. was behind him with no sight of a "Hello" but beated red eyes ready to kill. Dyson was frightened. He was saved from his mother jumping in front of him and snickering at the horse loudly. Dyson was happy but asshamed for jumping to quickly for the footsteps. ]


If I see anyone steal my form or idea of the headings.. I will report with no words.
Don't take the name Dyson or Dax and switch it around. Goes for the story as well.
I will report with no words. Thank you.
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Re: by midnight133

Postby Pasa Fino » Wed May 02, 2012 1:42 pm

User Name: Pasa Fino
Name: Andvari (( meaning alertness, light breeze))
Color: palomino
Pattern: grey strioes
Mane & Tail Stripes: white and grey
Eyes: grey
Hooves: grey
Gender: male
Personality: Strong, caring, noble, gentle.
History: I will get on it but i worn you...its looooooooong!
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Re: by midnight133

Postby Amethysts » Sun May 27, 2012 1:11 am

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Username:
Rain Cloud'

Tre's name:
Dyson

Nickname:
Dax ♥

Gender:
♂ Male ♂

Personality:

Caring, Persuasive, Noble, Giddy, Thinks He Better, No Fear, && Very respectful.




History:

Dyson wasn't supposed to be born into a world with bunch of other horses like himself. His mother, Dina, who was a beautiful Tre, made the biggest mistake of her life at a young age. Dina's coat was Palomino with the slightest tint of white. Dyson's father was Gray with the slightest tint of black & white spots. Noble like his father but respect like his mother.

~ In The Beginning ~

Dina was a very young foal around the age of 8 months nearly close to 1 year old. She was wild and very beautiful known to kind. She used to flirt and be very kind to brutes, which got her to where she is now with Dyson. One day, she was wondering away from her pack at the age of 10 months and found a very young looking brute named Zenos. He wasn't young as he looked but he was very flirtatious like Dina was. The two fell in love with each other, which was a dangerous sight for such foals.

Dina was away from her pack for many years leaving her mother & father worried sick about her. Dina was then 2 years old. She was a full-grown mare. As beautiful as said, her coat shined even more brighter than usual in the sunlight. Zenos was a gray but very-dull brute. His personality changed toward Dina one day and she was forced to stay away from her family, even when she didn't want to. At the age 2, she, herself, Dina, had the make the hardest choice between her love or her family who brought her into this world. And out of stupidity, she chose love.

One day, when Dina wasn't herself. She and Zenos went off by themselves making them do a very romantic move together. They didn't know the outcome.. since they were only 3 years old in Tre years. They both didn't want a foal til 5, but instead of that "foal" being born years later.. It was then born months later being named Dyson.

Dina regrets her moments. She is now stuck being a mother of a foal named Dyson nicknamed Dax. Zenos didn't like the idea of being a father, so he vanished when he went hunting. Dina was then stuck alone being a single mare of a Foal with no tribe or food around to survive.


~ Dyson's Life Of Survival ~
Dyson was now 8 months with his mother of 4 years-young. She was very ill but wasn't ill enough to leave the very earth she stood before. "Dyson, come here, my son." she called out sweetly as a mother should. Dyson stoppered knowing he would stagger. He was very wobbly on his legs but somewhat steady as well. His coat was the most cleanest and yet shiniest beside his mothers. He was such a mama's boy since his father left the minute he was born. He never knew what his father looked nor acted like.

As time went on, Dyson grew older and became much stronger. He loved his mother but the time had came to where he had to leave his mother to move on in life. Start his own herd, family, and become leader one day. No one knew Dyson would soon be leaving since the way he was spoiled and tormented by others but that day finally has come and he proved everyone wrong.

Dyson was now 2 years old, he was a wild horse; Quiet, Shy, and yet intimidated. He wouldn't be able to make friends as quite as normal as a horse would be able to. He was big and built. His muscle showed on his coat and his eyes brought out his true personality but hid it from those who looked like they could kill a fly. Dyson was very thin but he was strong. His survival skills weren't as good as everyone thought. When it would rain and trees would fall - he would ran in fear. Fire; He would stamper away in a near by bush for it to go away. Food; never found. Even though it was around him everywhere. Water; He found but never drank as much as suppose.

Dyson's life was coming to and end since his health was awful. Skinny as can be, dehydrated, and very pail. But one day, a thunder storm rolled in and scared him half-to-death which made he ran quickly in the direction of the meadow, which where he finally saw a beautiful mare like his mother but more gorgeous than he'd ever seen before. It was love at first sight for Dyson.


♥ Unforgettable Moment ♥
( Gonna Skip This. The ♥'s In The Title Give Away Of What's Gonna Happen Anyways Between Victoria & Dyson. )


~ Mothers death ~
Dyson was out one day with his mate, Victoria, wondering and wondering what to do in the future for their new herd. He hadn't heard from his mother in a while, which isn't normal for her to just forget about him like that. He became worried but Victoria knew what was wrong. She stopped by the other day seeing his mom's illness take control of her body. She didn't have much longer to live and didn't wanna tell Dyson til she knew it was time. Dyson read Victoria's expression which crushed him to pieces and knew he didn't have much time to spend with his old herd and especially, his mother.

Victoria was pregnant with two twin foals, and couldn't handle any stress or sadness, but Dyson's stress and depression was one thing she was willing to deal with. The foals were soon to be here and mostly delivered but she didn't mind as long as Dyson was happy. She felt the kicks and the moving which made her tired but she was more worried about her mate.

Dyson knew Victoria was pregnant so they both set out to the herd of which his mother was in. "Are you alright, Dear?" he asked nuzzling her. "I'm fine, love." she replied softly as Dyson nuzzled her. "I'm just really exhausted." she gave him a cute smile, which always got to Dyson. "I see. Well, you can rest and I'll return with the news, I promise." He knew he was lying about the 'news' but the returning to Victoria was the truth. He wouldn't leave her side for nothing. "Alright, Dyson. I trust you. Please be back. I will be needing you for these two when they arrive." She said as she layed down in a patch of flowers and nibbling at her stomach.

Dyson watched as she lied down in the patch of flowers and he ran off in the direction of his mothers den and soon enough he didn't have enough time. He got there too late which killed him inside but did not show it. They did not know what was killing her, so they assumed of old age. "Mother.." he said under his breathe, nuzzling her nose and moving slightly, even though knowing she would not reply back. He lied next to her body placing his head over hers and crying. Losing someone is like losing a loved one. Losing a loved one is like watching someone stab your heart in front of you. Ever since his mother has passed the very day he reached her without saying a fellow goodbye.. He has not been the same. But seeing a Gray horse with the slightest tint of black & white spots was the best day of his life. He finally has met his father, when he had no hope since he lost his mother.


The Day Of A Choice Of Leadership.
Dyson wasn't himself anymore due to the following month or so that passed of his mother's death. He wished she was here to see the happy ending in his life. Dyson was now a beautiful father of a young foal named, Mayson. She was as beautiful as Victoria. He leaned down to nuzzle the foal as she wobbled. Victoria grazed at the grass as Mayson nursed from her. Dyson protected the land and his herd. His father, Lucifer, was still around in the plains of his new home. He knew the day would come when he would have to chose love over family or family over love.

Dyson had weeks to choose. He thought hard. The only family he had was his mother. Who has passed. Love? Love is his new family now. Mayson & Victoria. He was happy and finally not in pain like he was. No longer suffered from being upset or thinking he was alone. Mayson. His little princess was his new prior and everything to protect. That day had came when Victoria, his mare. Had been doubted to be sentenced away from his father. Along with Mayson. Dyson had to choose now or never see his baby or Victoria, again. Dyson was foolish.. He chose love.

Dyson's father, Lucifer, was beyond range. He didn't want Dyson to make the same mistake his mother made. He remembered making the move on Dina. He regrets it. But seeing Dyson with his family. Upset him the most.

Dyson then sentenced his own father, Lucifer, away from his lands. He did it for Mayson & Victoria. He thought he was cool with his father. He loved him very much.. But realizing what he was doing to his family. He now knew why mother always hid him away when father would come around.

[ ;;Flash Back

Dyson was griffled and pushed behind a tree or his own mother when a big horse came around. His mother, Dina, was always furious but loved the horse very much.. Which gave Dyson ideas it was his father. Dina stamped, snipped, and gave an argument to stay away from her foal. "Is this a joke or is she protecting me?" he thought to himself. As the big horse, with the coat of gray with the slightest tint of black & white spots walked away, Dina, his mother, became very upset. Dyson always thought it was his father.. He was smart but didn't want any trouble. So he stood hidden behind the tree til his mother came and gave him the 'OK' to come out, again. Dyson couldn't bare to see his mother upset.. So he watched as she mopped away.. and as he turned to the side the big horse was gone into the shadows. ]

Dyson was then the ruler of the new lands which was proudly his. "Land Of Goddess" was finally his. Land full of peace, love, and laughter. Nothing such as violance ever came around neither did chaos.

[ ;;Horrible Memorie

Dyson was about 3 months. Surviving. Dina, his mother, always had trouble with a big horse named Lucifer. She never mentioned anything to Dyson since he was still very young as of age. One day, Dina went hunting and left Dyson alone. She was gone for quite awhile. He was alone and scared but knew he was safe. "Mother." he would call out. He would get hyper and happy hearing footsteps from her. Assuming she was coming home one night. He stepped out like his mother told him to do when he would hear return. The footsteps were heavier and much louder than before. It wasn't his mother. But the big horse.. was behind him with no sight of a "Hello" but beated red eyes ready to kill. Dyson was frightened. He was saved from his mother jumping in front of him and snickering at the horse loudly. Dyson was happy but asshamed for jumping to quickly for the footsteps. ]


If I see anyone steal my form or idea of the headings.. I will report with no words.
Don't take the name Dyson or Dax and switch it around. Goes for the story as well.
I will report with no words. Thank you.
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Postby midnight133 » Mon May 28, 2012 1:44 am

Its really good so far, im looking forward to seeing the end :D
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Postby NatureHeart » Thu May 31, 2012 6:04 am

user name: =^_^=
tre's name: Link
peronality: He is a great friend and loves adventure. If somebody is in danger, he will fight for them! He loves adventuring to new places and helping out. He is a very god friend with the foals and colts. He loves jumping things but also likes to just relax under a tree.
history: As a colt, his mother and father died. He had to live with his grandmother and his sister. He once ventured away from them, and when he came back, he was almost dead. But he saved another filly named Zelda. Neither of them told that though. He was very smart, and was good at stopping the other colts and fillies from trying his adventures. When he was older, he ventured away when a member of the herd got lost in a deadly storm. He came back days later very hurt, but the member only had a few scratches. Now he is a very good defender. He is still very smart but not good at persuading.
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Postby midnight133 » Wed Jun 13, 2012 6:22 pm

This will end on the 21st, but they are really good, I'm not quite sure how I'll judge them : )
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