Re: Write About Your Dream Makoatl! - Ends Tomorrow

Postby -TheBigBlueBear- » Sun Sep 06, 2015 5:46 pm

SORRY ON THIS!
I had forgotten to end this competition on time so I've made a slight extension

Ends tomorrow September 6th at Roll over! (6:00 PM MST)

Thanks so much for participating! I hope all forms get finished in time ^^
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Re: Write About Your Dream Makoatl! - Ends Tomorrow

Postby Novi » Mon Sep 07, 2015 9:29 am

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I am indeed an owner <3
Makoatl Name
Abigail
Makoatl Gender
Biologically female; identifies as anogirl (one whose gender fades in and out, but always returns female)
Physical Description
Abigail is an off white Mako with long, multi colored pastel hair (like this). Her bangs cover her bright cerulean eyes, and keep them hidden away. She has light grey circles under her eyes, and little black dapples/O's freckling her body. Her legs gradually fade into black, and ink seems to drip off her paws. She has a very long, wiry tail - longer than most Makoatls' tails. Her design sort of looks like that of a panda, and as if to encourage this thought, she wears a panda hat.
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Story -NO PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION- [Limit 500 Words]
"...So I leave for two minutes, and you kill him."
Abigail nearly choked on air as Nandalia tapped her foot impatiently, motioning towards their Irish friend who was currently lying in a heap on the ground. "N-no! It's not like that at all!" the younger girl squeaked, holding up her hands in defense. "I meant - well I didn't MEAN to - it's really - oh...."
Nandalia pinched the bridge of her nose and sighed heavily. "...Alright, what happened? You have ten seconds to explain before I--"

"Okay," Abigail said quickly, backing away almost immediately. "So I just wanted to pull a prank on him, right? I-I didn't know he scared so easy! He was walking, a-and I wanted to sneak up on him and jump on his back - cause I thought it'd be funny, y'know? So I yelled 'boo', right? And he FLIPPED OUT-" at this, she made an extravagant motion with her hands "-and SCREAMED, and then I screamed, because he scared me, and...and..." By this point, the poor dear was hyperventilating. Nandalia cleared her throat impatiently, and Abigail blurted out, "And he fainted and oh my god I think he's dead oh god oh god oh god I'm so sorry!"
And with that, the girl began sobbing hysterically.

Nandalia grumbled irritably - this was no time to be acting like a pathetic idiot - and stalked up to the crying girl, proceeding to whack her in the back of the head, and effectively earning a sharp yelp in response. "Alright, alright!" Nandalia snapped. "No need to panic, stupid. Did you make SURE he was dead?"
Abigail paused quickly, eyes widening. "...Uhm..."
Nandalia slapped her forehead, groaning. "You moron..." And with that, she walked over to Sean's side and promptly kicked him in the stomach, earning a gurgled shriek from the Irishman. "Hey, stupid. Wake up."

Sean looked up groggily, rubbing his head. "Oi... What happ--"
THUD.
Both Sean and Nandalia glanced over in alarm when Abigail dropped to the floor. Nandalia hesitantly walked over, placing her hand on the other girl's forehead and muttering slightly.
Sean blinked. "Uhm...?"

"She passed out. Wimp."

(351 words)
Now that the existential crisis has passed, I'm not leaving! Sorry for the momentary scare, folks!
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Re: Write About Your Dream Makoatl! - Ends Tomorrow

Postby -TheBigBlueBear- » Tue Sep 08, 2015 8:45 am

This is officially closed for Judging!

Any form edited after this point will be disqualified.
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Re: Write About Your Dream Makoatl!

Postby -TheBigBlueBear- » Tue Sep 08, 2015 12:58 pm

Judging is complete!

Thank you to everyone who's waited this long! I apologize for the delay in everything. My life has been pretty crazy and hard to keep up with and I've been forgetting dates for online stuff because I have too many dates to worry about in real life right now *sweats*

However without ado I'd like to congratulate our winner and our runner ups!
These were picked by the staff based on the story and description [but mostly the story]

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Runner up goes to-
adventureswordtora

Your story was really good but it felt unfinished and left us hanging 8,)
We're not entirely sure if it was intentional or you didn't finish but still it was really good C:
You'll receive 1 chocolate chip token and 2 of each other token C: [total count of 11 tokens]


Third place goes to-
Roman Torchwick!

I personally loved your story ;v; <3 It was super great
Really sucked me in personally /o\ <3 (which is hard cause I bore easily)
You will receive 2 chocolate chip sea star tokens and 2 of each of the other tokens [total count of 12]


Second place goes to-
Uchuujin!

Your story was unique and swayed the staff C: Great job *thumbs up*
You will receive 3 chocolate chip sea star tokens and 2 of each of the other tokens! [total count of 13]


First place winner is --
Lioncourt!

It was a unanimous decision among the staff members who judged!
Your looks and personality in the story flowed well together and made a very coherent piece
As grand prize winner your writing and descriptions will be turned into a makoatl like the one you've written about!
You'll also receive 3 chocolate sea star tokens, and 3 of each of the other tokens! [Total count of 15]


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Congratulations!

Everyone who Finished a form will also get 1 of each token for participation [5 tokens in total]
Please give me some time to update the bank!

Thanks so much!
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Re: Write About Your Dream Makoatl! - Winners Announced

Postby saka. » Tue Sep 08, 2015 1:05 pm

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Re: Write About Your Dream Makoatl! - Winners Announced

Postby witchcrafting » Tue Sep 08, 2015 1:06 pm

    Congratulations to everyone ;; v ;;
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Re: Write About Your Dream Makoatl! - Winners Announced

Postby Luscinia » Tue Sep 08, 2015 1:07 pm

        Oh my gosh, thank you so much!!! Ah, you really don't know how happy this makes me as a writer >w< I'm really happy all of you liked it.

        Just... Just thank you all so much. I really can't express the amount of gratitude I have. vuv And many congrats to the other winners as well <3
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Re: Write About Your Dream Makoatl! - Winners Announced

Postby Relicarn » Tue Sep 08, 2015 1:12 pm

Congrats Lioncourt! I can't wait to see your new mako!
And thanks Cole (and the other judges!) for third place!

Congrats to all the other winners too!
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My name's Relicarn and I hang around
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I work as the Archivist for the wonderful
species Makoatls, and I can often be
found over on DA.

Other than that I'm massive Undertale
trash, and I love to RP!

I don't bite, so feel free to PM me, I'm
always up for a good chat!

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Re: Write About Your Dream Makoatl! - Winners Announced

Postby Roadhog » Tue Sep 08, 2015 1:12 pm

congratss!!! omg
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Nobody on here talks with me , is friends, and I try to chat on the FR thread but nobody responds much.
Quitting CS and flightrising.

All my fr dragons/stuff went to one of my real life best friends, so don't ask for my FR stuff.
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Re: Write About Your Dream Makoatl! - Winners Announced

Postby Krist Fullmetal » Tue Sep 08, 2015 1:16 pm

Congrats!
Just here to browse some forums here and there ;u;
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