Re: Adopt #7

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Fri Nov 26, 2010 3:21 pm

Awwww...poor ROT...get well soon.
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Re: Adopt #7

Postby sad magic » Fri Nov 26, 2010 3:38 pm

Aysan1 wrote:Username:Aysan1
Adopt's Name:Adovoker
Gender:Female
Why you want it:Cause ya make aswome Doggy...colorer
Animals History:Adovoker as a pup was very shy and caring, though that was only as a pup, but as she grew up her life was filled with heart ache and pain, she started macking less contact with others and feeling sorry for herself though life was horrid for her easy to see endearing colors made her valnerable to preditors. The way she felt now related to her past, as a pup she was teased constantely for her colors then a thunder struck killed her mom and she though it was because she had run away in fear of being teased all her life. Her father had left at her birth and her sibling all ran away as thiere mom died leaving her all alone fully though she though they all had came together aftewards leaving her out of the group. Now she travels through around forests and human homes trying to make herself comforteble, she has gone through alout of trouble and yurning to get to a not even safe enogh safe zone to be her Haven. Even though she does not know she will have an encridble 'mate to be' soon wich she falls in love with though he's reluctent he takes her in and help he in her waekest state making him fall for her aswell. Her life was horrid as she believed all the horrid facts and doubted all the Lucky one's one Christmas Eve shje met Holly another Scene Wolf wich helped her but got lost in the porgress though she will find the all soon as a *Miricle* mite just happen to bigin, she will find Kin that were lost,A Lover and Mate to have pups with, pups to Love and get Love from and also a Best Friend wich will stick to her forever as even though she mite look different she is still great in her own Speciel and Unique ways.

Her eyes glistened in the moonlight as she padded nthrough the brush nstenctecly her tail drooping as it usaully did, her paws were wet from the dew and she shivered in ther cold night air then she sw something some berrys to be pracise they were big and juicy beside some samll and shriveled ones, near a cave whier she herd paw steps and other noises. She ran towards the berrys and glugged down only one practically chocking on it as she swallowed then sigh
ed but then a pang of pain went through her as she fell to the ground and rolled only slightly then stopped as a Male Wolf stepped infront of her with a fierce look "what idd you do" he asked her with a growl. She was on her back so she only put her paws to her muzzle as her stomach grumbled in pain though he just ghlared at her "look now...yo've just eaten the posioness ones...what am I sapposed to do know...help you...no you can take care of yoreself he said" his tone firey ith anger. She obbayed instantely and stummbled up as he walked into his cave like den and stared out in secret at her worried, she wobbled after a few steos then fell beforegetting up and the falling again thumping hard into the ground, he could'nt look so he waked in but turned around as he herd a wimper the padded out as he herd a whine. He saw her laying on her stomach her head covered by her paws as she stared to cry an the tears soaked the Earth. "COme on now" he said sympathetically trying to help though it barely did anything good though help hr brocken heart only a teeny tiny bit, as it had to much pain to uphold in one sitting.
I Aysan1 promise to take care of my awesomesauce scene wolf.
Rain was here...and so was I




Wow, you don't know how hard this was. Although SinfullRose's was the longest, Aysan's story just spoke to me. Congratulations Aysan!


Special mention to Sinfullrose, the longest of the forms!

Thank you for entering everyone!
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Re: Adopt #7= Adopted!

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Fri Nov 26, 2010 3:50 pm

Awww...thank you...I know it gets hard reading so much, and then you feel exhusted...but when i'm bored reading can get me out of it, and i'm trying to be a writer so I like getting more expreance.
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Re: Adopt #7= Adopted!

Postby sad magic » Fri Nov 26, 2010 3:52 pm

I loved your story. Good job, and good luck on you wanting to be a writer. C:

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Re: Adopt #7= Adopted!

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sat Nov 27, 2010 9:14 am

Hey since you like it so much...want me to countinue ?...heres a link, if you want me to countue then tell me.

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