by petrify » Tue May 15, 2018 1:50 am
&&& the results are in! i'd like to thank everyone for entering & letting me read all your lovely forms <3 before i get into who won, i'd like to compliment everyone else's forms first! i put them all in a random order so no, they're not ranked ! <3
@ inkliinqs: i was surprised someone picked emmaline due to her nature; but you did really well not only writing her, but the character you portrayed for this kal! there were some things that were a little off on emma - to be expected since you don't own her haha - but your writing on her was really well! & your writing in general is really lovely <3
@ Dawnstorm111: the story you wrote was really cute!! i like how bashful you made her at the end when her friend questioned her haha
@ SilentMelody: i really love how you incorporated her into your star trek au!! i think the universe you built there is really lovely <3 i also really loved the interaction the two had! i thought it was genuine & really cute :) & as always, your writing is phenomenal!!
@ fernmoon: whoa, i honestly really love reading alien abduction stories like this & yours was really good! i loved the atmosphere you provided before the abduction even took place & the way you described the aliens & how they acted. it left me wanting to read more at the end as well; what were they going to do with him? again, your writing is really well done; a reoccurring theme here haha
@ Meridiem: the story you wrote between these two was so cute to read! the personality you had for griffon was almost exact, which i really liked! your story was just wholesome & the ending along with the art you did warmed my heart :") very lovely!
@ junkratss: i love how you made her an alien believer! she reminded me a little of myself tbh hahaha. the story was just very well written (i keep saying that but all of you are such good writers?? ahhh) & i could practically see the town she lived in! & the ending, of course, was adorable! a three-eyed chameleon! wasn't an alien like she was hoping for, but in my opinion, it was even better!
@ IlluminatiConfirmed: ahhh this story really got my heart?? roman is based off of my favorite wrestler so i could only imagine the excitement huxley had after his initial fright! it was really cute & i love the extra tid-bit of info you gave on him! i really loved this story ;o; <3
@ Avisowl: whoa! i really loved this story a lot?? i really love the darker kind of stories, and you really captured that! i love the fact that the humans were the aliens and she didn't so much as find the aliens, but they found her and her people. it was so well written and honestly i was wanting more by the end of it. the art you did was also really precious, i loved it!
&&& that only leaves one person; the winner! :) you can probably already tell who it is buuuut...
congrats to Golden-Boy !
honestly, the relationship you portrayed between maverick and cammo was so damn perfect and i found myself going back to your form over and over. you did maverick's character a lot of justice and honestly probably wrote him even better than i could've haha. i love their complicated relationship and the fact that cammo cares about him a lot but is scared to really try to get closer to him considering their relationships status is already pretty clear; frenemies. i also love how cammo was trying to have maverick get his anger out in other ways such as dance-offs between the two boys, i thought that was really sweet and honestly a little heart-warming haha. and the letter cammo sent to him made me feel a bit bad - considering cammo just wants to help and thinks that he doesn't care - but it also was such a nice touch to the story you already wrote. i would love to discuss their relationship more in-depth if you'd like! i'm adding you to cammo's kit reference right now :)
again, thank you all for putting your time and effort into this competition! i really love all of your forms <3 thank you and good luck in all the other competitions you enter!!
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by bakuraas. » Tue May 15, 2018 2:06 am
aaaa thank you so much, I don’t even know what to say I’m just super excited to have won him! Honestly I loved everyone else’s forms too ;w; I’ll definitely send you a DM sometime today once I have more about Cam written up to work off of with Maverick! And Also once i get home from school haha!
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by sobble » Tue May 15, 2018 2:06 am
ayy congrats!! and thankyou for the lovely comments!! :0
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by CXIV » Tue May 15, 2018 5:25 am
congrats, @golden-boy! you deserve this lovely kal!!
also, thank you, @petrify, for the compliment on my form! i'm sad i didn't win camila, but i'm happy that you appreciate my form and choice for the kal to interact with!!
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