Re: 300 revamp

Postby Ravendarus » Mon Feb 09, 2015 3:07 pm

This is your hour warning <3
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Re: 300 revamp

Postby Ravendarus » Mon Feb 09, 2015 4:29 pm

Eeep I forgot to write. Closed for judging <3
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Re: 300 revamp

Postby Ravendarus » Sat Feb 14, 2015 5:00 pm

Alright guys, you made this pretty hard. There were only 3 finished forms and sadly that means there could only be one winner in the end. I judged personally on the story, not the looks, but the story and honestly, you all wrote amazing stories! I couldn't end up picking 1 winner because I felt bad and because of the lack of finished forms I couldn't just hand out ru's either…

However, I did pull in some guest judges to help me decide upon a winner through their opinions I managed to narrow it down and ended up picking a winner on a few different factors that I had to edit in. I will however tell you what I personally thought of your stories quq

Dissimulodeerling. - I loved the idea of Alrik and his nightmares. Alrik is one of my favourite names as well ironically! The pack of flame and shadows was a brilliant touch and I adored how he made his own named even though it wasn't his real name. Most importantly I loved the very end where we learned he was the evil that roamed the lands. It was an interesting story and I really did enjoy it! QuQ

Trollish - Let me just say this… your story creeped me out! I had chills running down my spine the whole time reading it! It was certainly and interesting take and I like the point of view you did for it, I loved the idea behind him literally being the Alpha and the shadows were included too which I found was cool, the Omega, the kidnapping of the viewer was really nice too. I enjoyed reading your story though I did wish at the time I read it a little earlier in the day and not at night x.x

aviate - Your story was so detailed I loved the amount of depth you went into and I enjoyed the style of the story that it was written in. I love the name Alistair and really felt a strong connection between him and his little butterfly I thought that was both cute and a really interesting concept behind him. You went through the different stages of his life and it really showed what kind of character he was and has become! owo

Alright then with that being said I will now announce the winner! There could only be one winner I am afraid and here they are!
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aviate!!!

I did judge on story and I found the one thing I was really looking for in a story, details. I wanted you to make the character, have a background and a concept I could really get behind. I didn't want him to just be the alpha! I wanted backstory! And you nailed it! Though I deeply enjoyed each concept that was presented and I loved reading them all I just found that yours had more character development on how he became who he was. I did however call in guest judges to help decide because I felt it was needed to just confirm that was the right choice. Thank you all for entering and I'm sorry I couldn't offer an ru x.x

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Re: 300 revamp

Postby bsktcase » Sat Feb 14, 2015 5:00 pm

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Re: 300 revamp

Postby Dissimulodeerling. » Sat Feb 14, 2015 5:31 pm

Grats Avi! I'll have to go back and read your story.
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Re: 300 revamp

Postby hypnowave » Sat Feb 14, 2015 5:39 pm

    eeee
    thank you so much Raven ;A;
    I'm still squealing right now omg
    my little Alistair - cuddles -
    i'll take good care of him I promise <33

    Neroro, if you're reading this could I be added?
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Re: 300 revamp

Postby GREML0RD » Sat Feb 14, 2015 6:24 pm

aviate wrote:
    eeee
    thank you so much Raven ;A;
    I'm still squealing right now omg
    my little Alistair - cuddles -
    i'll take good care of him I promise <33

    Neroro, if you're reading this could I be added?

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