[PurpleKakashi]

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[PurpleKakashi]

Alright my non-owners! It's gonna break my heart to pick a winner, but lets see if your stories make me weep..

Username: froststarthewolf
Name: Near
Gender: Female
Song: Like a stone by audioslave
Break my Heart: Lucia didn't get her heart broken by some other Parra. She got her heart broken by herself. How you ask? She broke her friend's favorite necklace out of anger. She has been upset about this ever since because the necklace meant so much to her friend and she shattered it. Loosing her friend and pride.

Her name is Near, but you call her Lucia in the story... O.o' Not too much heart break in the story.

Username:Galaxy~nova
Name: Maria
Gender: Female
Song:Rixton - Me and My Broken Heart
Break my Heart: Maria has always considered herself a tomboy- except the fact that she hates spiders or any bug for that matter. One day her boyfriend came over and they climbed their neighbor's magnolia tree until she got to the middle with her boy. They held hands for a while and talked. He admitted that he had never met a girl like her. He gifted her a necklace, the one she wears everyday. She clutched his hand when she saw the spider on her hand. Screaming she fell dragging her boyfriend behind her. They fell and somehow she fell on him. He was rushed to a hospital but it was useless. She blames herself for his death everyday. She wears the necklace to remind herself to not fall in love with anyone. Her wrist guards were a result of the fall reminding her that all love gives is pain. The second time she had broken her heart was when her mother bought her a puppy. She was overjoyed. In fact so overjoyed she almost took of her wrist guards. Then they took her puppy to the vet. She'll always remember her fun filled face turn into a wretched snarl when the vet told her that the puppy had a severe condition and had to be put to sleep. She remembers vividly the touch of the bone-chilling metal as she wrenched the door open and ran out to her car and drove off without her mother.

Wow. That puppy part was super sad ;n;

IceyWolf


Shira


Female


Broken


Shira was a very caring and loving person before her heart was broken,
she still can be but it is seen very rarely. Shira is pretty antisocial so she's
never really had any relationships, not that it matters because she does't
want to trust or love others anymore. Now Shira never knew her father,
but she was extremely close with her mom. You'd never meet someone so
close with one of their parents, than she was. They were like pieces of a
puzzle that fit just right. Everything was great in Shira's life until the one
she was closest with died. It all happened so fast. Her mom had become
extremely ill and she was given medication to cure this sickness. Now she
just happened to be extremely allergic to this certain medication. The worst
part was she died in her sleep and Shira never really got to say her last words.
After Shira's heart was broken she lost all of her friends. She then vowed to
never give her heart to someone again, for it was just too painful. The ear
cuff and necklace she wears were both her mothers and the metal wrist guards
were a gift given to her from her mother when she was very young. She is never
seen not wearing these accessories, for she feels she must honor and remember her
mother.

Nicely organized. The lose of a parent is something not recovered from easily, I like that you've given the items a small story as well.

Down by the river, by the boats, where everyone goes to be alone.

Username
Samuel Beechworth.

Name
Allison.

Meaning: Of the noble kind; of the noble sort. People with this name tend to initiate events, to be leaders rather than followers, with powerful personalities. They tend to be focused on specific goals, experience a wealth of creative new ideas, and have the ability to implement these ideas with efficiency and determination. They tend to be courageous and sometimes aggressive. As unique, creative individuals, they tend to resent authority, and are sometimes stubborn, proud, and impatient.

Gender
Female.

Song
"Riverside" by Agnes Obel.

Break my Heart
Allison got her heart broken in several ways all throughout her life. The first time was when her mother and father, and a little sister, drowned in the river by accident, the second was when her first, and only, best friend moved away, and the third was when she found her partner was only with her looks and skill with a bow and arrow. Now, she spends most of her time by the riverbed, staring into the water that seemed to have ruined her life. She believes that the river is cursed, and swears that sometimes she can see faces and hear voices crying out for help in the water. They call out to her and torment her to no end, and she has fallen into the river and nearly drowned several times trying to help them out of the cold, rapid water.

I can tell by your eyes, you've never been by the riverside. Oh my God, I see how everything is torn in the river deep, and I don't know why I go the way, down by the riverside.

That picture is really moving.. So much heart breaking in one go ;A;

username: kirarya
name: eirwen
meaning 'white as snow'
gender: female
song: hedwig's flight
don't hate me owo
i thought it appropriate

break my heart:
disclaimer: noname is a fictional parra

the woman shoved the last of her clothes in the suitcase that was too full. the only item left to be packed was a small crystal necklace that was chipped in a few places, but that meant the world to her. she tenderly lifted it off the bare table and stroked the chain it hung from. the longer she held it, the more she remembered him... them. the woman shook her head. she couldn't afford any distractions now. their time was done. she quickly zipped her suitcase shut and placed the necklace in her pocket before closing the door to her apartment forever.

outside rain poured into the street as cars rushed by still trying to get to work. only the occasional person walked past and the spring morning lacked the mellifluous chirping of the usual song birds. groaning, the woman pulled her jacket tighter around her and gripped her suitcase firmly before rushing towards the street to flag down a taxi. she didn't hear the clatter of the necklace as it slipped out of her pocket and fell to the concrete sidewalk.

"excuse me miss!" a gentleman cried from behind her. she heard footsteps jogging towards her and turned to see what it was he wanted. "i believe you dropped-"

a small gasp left the woman's mouth. "noname?" she asked quietly. silence descended as the man stared at the necklace he had salvaged from the urban mire. long seconds passed. the couple continued to be drenched in water before his gazed moved up to her face.

"eirwen? i... wow..." noname stuttered. he was absolutely speechless. it had been years since he last spoke to her and they hadn't ended on good terms. in fact, she said that she never wanted to see him again. he awkwardly shuffled his feet, trying to think of a casual way to start a conversation. "so... how have you been?"

"fine. just fine. i've been pretty well actually," she said curtly. internally she fought to suppress how she really felt. the formality of their conversation unnerved her. she and noname had never held back anything they wanted to say to each other in the past, so why was she starting now?

"that's good. hey... since it's valentine's day and all, maybe you'd want to grab a bite to eat with me?"

"i'm sorry noname, i need to go," she said as she swung her suitcase into the taxi. her wet hair clung to her face from the rain but she pushed it away delicately with one hand, revealing her electric yellow eyes. the eyes that had captured rowan's heart the moment he met her. he almost had to force himself not to cup her face in his own hands like he used to.

"where to?" he asked instead.

"the airport. i'm moving to new york."

"what? why?"

"i'm engaged. his business is moving to america."

at the sudden news noname took a large step back. his chest felt like a thousand bricks had barreled into it and the pain was he felt was unmatched to anything he had experienced before. eirwen... his eirwen... was getting married?

"and you didn't bother letting me know?" he asked through gritted teeth.

"i didn't think it mattered," she lied.

"didn't think it mattered? eirwen, i love you!"

she was taken aback by what he said. "you... you what?"

"i love you. i'm sorry about what happened five years ago, but not a day goes by without me wishing you were still mine." eirwen's eyes widened, but she looked away. she was afraid that if she apologized she'd want him again.

"it's too late noname."

"no!" he refused. "this necklace tells me otherwise." eirwen lunged and grabbed the crystal from his hand.

"we were only eighteen. it wasn't love, just a foolish child's game," she said as tears began to fall from her eyes.

"then you won and i lost," he shrugged. "but you know what? i want a rematch."

eriwen shook her head. she needed to leave, now, before he crumbled her defenses any further. "noname... i can't. my fiance-"

"will have to understand. eirwen, love like ours is only found once in a lifetime. why else would fate have delivered me here, at this very moment?"

"fate. that's funny."

"eirwen, give me another chance!" he felt exasperated.

"no... no, no i have to g-" her response was cut short by the inevitable: a kiss.

"excuse me," the taxi driver interrupted, "but are you getting in or not?"

noname watched eirwen, waiting for her answer. she looked from him, to the cab, then back to him. "to the airport please," she said as she swiftly threw the rest of her bags into the car. "noname i'm sorry, but it's over." she closed the door and before she could help herself tears were steadily falling from her face. the cab pulled away from the curbed it had been stationed at and she turned around just once to see a blurry figure watching as the car turned the next corner and he left her gaze forever.

846 words

First SONG *sob* and then you did as I asked... that was so detailed, and well love story-ish?? I liked it, all I'm say.

Username: husky.
Name: Petra
Gender: Female
Song: Symptoms by Atlas Genius
Break my Heart:

Petra had a good relationship with her boyfriend - they shared common interests that they'd talk about for hours on end, their personalities mixed well and they were really close, kind of like best friends. Their third anniversary had just passed, and things were going along fine, though Pet had to admit that it had been a little slow lately. She hadn't had that thrill in her chest when she saw him, nor had she felt compelled to give him an all-encompassing hug as a way of greeting. She couldn't quite put into words what was happening, but she felt they were losing their touch, seeing things differently.
She brought it up first - he didn't seem all that surprised. They unanimously agreed to go their separate ways, maybe even to stay friends. After that, things were going okay for Petra, she wasn't too broken up about her first love going downhill. It had to happen someday, and why stress over the inevitable? That was, until she saw him with another parra.
Her heart felt like it was going to tear straight out of her chest, and her breath wouldn't come. She just stared at the couple - at the way he looked at her, the way he had looked at Pet all these years; the way their shoulders bumped in a cute first touch sort of way and how their eyes were locked in a silent moment just between them. Petra couldn't feel anything but that sinking feeling deep in her gut, and then she felt something else, like she was burning on the inside.
Her heart was torn and her soul was distraught, and she realised that she still hadn't let go of her so called 'love'. Her jealousy for this new parra was immense, and she had to fight with herself to keep the hatred at bay. She could be a better parra.
Her first heartbreak was when she found herself not without her partner, but when she saw her partner loving someone else.

That's pretty sad, you made it really realistic.

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Username

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xXAmberlilliXx
Name
Omaha - New moon
Gender
Female
Song
Evanescence - Bring Me To Life
Break my Heart
I grab my keys and walk up to the apartment. It was mine and my boyfriends 3rd anniversary. I slide the card through and open the door.

"Honey?" I call, flicking on the lights, "Are you home?"

I walk into the kitchen and see a note taped to the fridge door. I cupped my hand over my mouth and began to sob.

My Moon.
I'm sorry that I had to end us like this. I found someone else...

You will always find a place in my heart.

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-Your Lover

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Well that was a fast break ;n; lord.

username;; hello, im serlalklller, and i do not own any parras!
name;; emmalyn
gender;; female
song;; ugly heart
story;; emmy is a basic teenage girl with lots of emotions and obsessions. oh, boys she likes those. she's a player, and has dated more boys than she can count. their relationships only often last a week or so. sometimes she just dates because her friends say so, she is popular after all, so she can only date popular boys, that's the invisible "rule." emmalyn has been slowly falling in love with an- imagine it, not a popular boy! her friends say she can't do that, so she keep it a secret. might as well forget it, it will never happen. [100 words total]

I don't honestly see this as heartbreaking ^^' I apologize but it makes her sound really shallow...

username; Curious

name; Odette

gender; Female

song; Stronger

break my heart; Odette once had a friend she knew for a long, long time. They got along well, and they had their fights, but they were always buddies. True friendship. Until one day when Odette had to move away. It tore her heart to leave her friend, and she never got to say an official goodbye. She never saw the friend again.
Based off something that happened to me.

Gonna need to know more about the song.. first. Sorry about your tale :<

Username:
AnnaROUaT

Name:
Fírinne {Translates to "Truth" in Irish. Goes by Fir for short.}

Gender:
Female

Song:
Find Me by Christina Grimmie {Not the youtube version - the recorded version's better}

Break my Heart:
Fir moved after living in the same town for 8 years. Of course, she was brokenhearted. She was bullied in her new town, until she met someone who changed her life. This someone became her best friend, protecting her from the bullies, lending her a shoulder to cry on when it was needed. They laughed together, cried together, told secrets together, grew together. They were together almost constantly for a year, until one fateful day.

That day, Fir and her friend, Aspen got into a fight. It was a small bicker, their first fight, in fact, but Fir lost her temper and told Aspen's secret, which she had promised to keep. This secret destroyed Aspen's reputation. Aspen never forgave her...And Fir never forgave herself.

A sad tale as well :< and it always sucks to loose a friend, but I feel like it could have gone further.

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So our winner is.. kirarya!
Thank you all so much for entering, seriously keep at 'em guys! I will release more for non-owners. Keep an eye out.

[Tyrant001]

Thanks for the feedback on the form PK and congrats! ^^ Take care of this girl!~

[Kirarya]

ahhhhh, thank you so much! imma take great care of this bby. <3

[Curious]

Congrats. ^^