Re: Parrapup #116

Postby Akami-chan » Tue Sep 16, 2014 3:16 pm

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Re: Parrapup #116

Postby Akami-chan » Tue Sep 16, 2014 3:43 pm

Congratulations to Glacier-Lily!
You've created a very interesting character with a thoughtful origin for the teacup!
I also really enjoyed the song you picked, very nice!
Below the quoted form is feedback on the other lovely forms submitted!


Glacier-Lily wrote:Name: Nikolai
Gender: Male
Song: Azur Ether - AuDen
Write about the following:
  • #116's General Personality
    Timid – Quiet – Observant – Careful
    Nik is very timid; he dislikes meeting new people, and avoids others like the plague. He doesn’t have many friends and politely turns down any invite to go anywhere. He is also quiet, in many ways. He talks only when necessary, and prefers silence. He makes a little less noise then a mouse, and speaks considerably less. He is very observant and enjoys taking in his surroundings. He can be a little impulsive about it, and needs to know exactly where everything is, and will become irritable when he sees anything that is out of place. Nik is also very careful. He walks quietly and measures every spoken word. From when he’s sweeping the floor, to creating a sculpture or teacup, everything is done precisely. He never trips, nor stumbles, nor knocks things over, and moves with the grace of a dancer, though he has never taken any lessons.
  • #116's tea/coffee cup
    Nik got his teacup when he was rather young. His parents made and sold teacups for a living, so he grew up learning how to make them. The teacup on Nik’s head is the first one he made that his parents would allow him to sell, but he opted to keep it as his first success. He actually has no idea why tea keeps pouring out of it, and cannot distinctly remember when it started, not that he minds though, as it is his favourite flavour of tea. Nik decided to follow his parent’s example and work with ceramics, as well as clays, china and porcelain. While he doesn’t exclusively make teacups, he enjoys making them most.
  • #116's favourite drink
    ‘Mom’s apple pie’ tea from David’s tea, because it tastes like liquefied apple pie, and is really yummy. There’s honestly no other reason, he just likes the way it tastes.
word count: 300

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@pterodactyl My favorite part of your form was the last section about his clumsiness! I can just see this mess of feathers flopping around, haha!

@Kirarya I really enjoyed the different point of views you provided in your form. I feel though, that the character does not have much dimension (she seems a little plain in that she is so perfect) in your next forms, I would work on adding some interesting quirks!

@IA-Chan<3 I enjoyed your song and your drink image! Your form itself was short though, I'd love to see it expanded!

@THEOrnithologist Your tea cup origin was also really cute! I love the quirkiness of the grandmother relationship. The actual personality of the Parra could be better worked out though!

@waterstar2002 I totally dig the party animal vibe, but I didn't like how the form was describing a human rather than a Parra! Even though most forms describe Parras in a humanoid way, I think it's important to have that ambiguity by leaving out descriptions of the Parra being a "man."
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Re: Parrapup #116 [CLOSED]

Postby ophanimera » Tue Sep 16, 2014 3:53 pm

Congratulations, Glacier-Lily!
Feel free to keep my art. I've fallen into a nasty habit of leaving my art stamp/tag off of things, so I'll probably wind up adding it for you later, if you'd like.

And thanks for the commentary, Akami. Much appreciated. c:
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Re: Parrapup #116 [CLOSED]

Postby Sora Kurai » Tue Sep 16, 2014 4:17 pm

Reallyyyyyyy~? Eeeeeee! Thank you so much! I'll try my best to take good care of Nikolai!

Thank you pterodactyl, I'd love to keep your art; but could you please put your watermark on it?

Erm, could you please add me Akami?
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Re: Parrapup #116 [CLOSED]

Postby Master of Nothing » Wed Sep 17, 2014 12:09 am

Congrats! You deserve him! :)
quitting cs soon, as soon as I get all my characters rehomed
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