[califournia]

Username :
Name of the Kit :
Origine of the name (optionnal) :
Gender :

Where did they get their second orb? (in less than 500 words)

[hurricanessong]

Username : hurricanessong
Name of the Kit : Ombre
Origine of the name : this is a term which means one color fades to another, this kits colors are perfect for that
Gender : female

Where did they get their second orb? : Ombre, you might say, grew up in a broken home. Her father had actually abandoned her mother when she was still young, and then, even before she got her childhood orb, her mother was killed in a accident. Because of this, Ombre's orb was made by distant relatives, she was supposed to live with them for a little while but she ran away soon afterwards.
As Ombre grew older, she grew accustomed to taunts that came about her orb, she didn't care much, she was used to it. Soon the day came for her to make her adult orb. She was excited to do so and quickly finished the job. "They can't laugh at my orb now!" she said cheerfully, feeling like she might fit in for the first time. She cheerily stepped out side to show off her new orb, full of pride when suddenly an all to familiar voice sounded from in front of her "Thats your orb? you think changing your orb will change our minds about you?" it laughed tauntingly. 'Oh no! not him' Ombre pleaded silently. It did no good for out stepped the one kit who had been one of the prime sources of her problems.
"What do you want?" Ombre asked as the brightly colored kit with the green tail came sauntering up to her. "I just thought you may want to see what a real orb looks like, I just made it today" his voice came out sweet as honey as he showed her his bright green orb "and do you know why, even now its better than yours? Because no matter how hard you try, you'll never escape from your past" He said with the calculating eyes ever watching. Ombre felt anger flowing through her and something snapped "You're right, I can't escape from the past," she said and the other kits smirk disappeared as she continued, anger from years of abuse coming out "but I can change my future and yours!" she yelled, leaping forward and yanking the other kits orb off. Immediately everything got quiet as the other kit seemed to just collapse without his orb. She looked down in surprise, but it felt somewhat good seeing the other kit helpless like that after all those years.
Somewhere in the back of her mind she knew she had to leave, and so she ran from the eyes that only held hate and scorn, ran until she couldn't any more. From then on, whenever she walked into a new area the other kits feared her and tried to stay out of her way.
Even now Ombre will honestly say she wished things had gone differently that day but she also will tell you she does like how everything changed so she is respected, but she isn't truly happy but she won't tell anybody what she truly wants.
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Personality : "One part of me knows I have a split personality, the other wants more proof" Ombre often uses this joke trying not to be to rigid. Ombre is generally shy when it actually comes to having a conversation. She actually is a generally nice enough kit. Her one problem is the stolen orb, everybody fears it. Ombre truly just wants to fit in with the other kits and her one true secret is that she just wants to be given the love she never actually had

[Wolf Prints]

Username :
~Fallen~Sun~
Name of the Kit :
Styx
Origine of the name (optionnal) :
Her mother was a kit who believed in the Greek gods, and the River Styx is a symbol of great power and truth.
Gender :
Female
Where did they get their second orb? (in less than 500 words)
It was her mother's, given to her when she died. Styx is a little protective over whom she tells.

[mars.]

Username : StarLight Fireflies (I Currently Have No Milky Way Kits And Am in Love With The Sea)
Name of the Kit : Aquina (Pronounced A-Queen-A)
Origin of the name (optional) : She Is Beautiful And Aquatic...
Gender : Female ( She Has A Little Spark To Me That Makes Me Think Of Her As A Female)

Where did they get their second orb? (in less than 500 words) She Met Her Mate At A Very Young Age And As They Grew Older They Grew Closer Till One Day After They Had Been Fully Become Mates Her Mate *Shade* Got Hurt Out Hunting And Protecting Their Den She Had Tried Her Best To Save Him But, It Was To Severe. The Last Thing He Had Told Her Was That They Would Forever Be Mates And Gave Her His Orb. Ever Since Then She Has Never Taken It Off. They Had Never Had Kits)\ So She Now Lives Alone. To Her The Orb Is The Only Thing Left That Truly Makes Her Happy

Note: Thank You!

[Newts]

Username :
CoolBeanz
Name of the Kit :
Kelp. Some people call him Seaweed or Kelpie, though.
Gender :
Male
Where did they get their second orb? (in less than 500 words)
When he was young, his father was very old,and his mother was dead. So his father made him an orb, and clipped a piece of his own tail off and made another orb for Kelp, so he would always have a bit of his father with him, even after he was long gone.

[Leafe]

Username :
Leafe
~non owner

Name of the Kit :
Nadezda

Origine of the name (optionnal) :
one with hope.
' In Czechian, the name Nadezda means- one with hope. The name Nadezda orginated as an Czechian name. The name Nadezda is most often used as a girl name or female name'
Read more:
http://www.meaning-of-names.com/czechia ... 31hqDo6Op&

Gender :
female

Where did they get their second orb?:

Nadezda loves the beach.
lways when she is here,she goes diving.
She wantes to find a second pearl/orb.
Why?
Because she dont likes her orb.
So one day she went to the beach again,
wanting t go diving.
She went under water.
The same time she saw more then hundert beautiful fishes!
But that couldnt stop her.
She dived deeper and deeper,searching for a orb.
But she didnt see anything and her air went away.
'I am going to diieee heeeeelp' she thought.
But then,suddenly she saw something glittering under her.
With her hopr she swam down.
It was just a fish .
But then she saw-the fish had a orb in his mouth.
She took it and swam as fast as she could to get some air.
-outside-
she found a band for her orb.
She happily ties it with the orb on her neck.
'never lose hope'
her life motto is.

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Thats it.
I hope the story is not too long,good luck everybody ♥ ^-^

[Toriguel]

This is now closed

[Toriguel]

And finally, here is the winner!

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"He will be Acheron,
named for the River of Sorrow,
the river of Tears."

Username :
~Myth~
Name of the Kit :
Acheron

Revenge is a River;

Origine of the name:

Strong yet sweet.

In Greek, Acheron means River of sorrow or River of woe. I felt this name suited this kit because of his oceanic design, and that the fact that he has two orbs meant he had to steal one.
Gender :
Male

Where did they get their second orb?

Acheron.

He was named for the brilliant river that stole so many lives. His mother had given birth next to this river. The rarity of having three kits hung over the she-kit’s weak body. She was ill, but she was so happy. Three! She hadn’t even thought it possible. But her happiness did not last. One of her kits fell. She fell into the river of tears, swept away before the mother could catch her. She had raced along the Acheron, following the current, trying to find her lost kit. But it was useless.

She returned to her remaining kits, weeping. They were crying as well, but not for their lost sister. They did not know of true sadness, not yet. They merely wanted food. So the She-kit fed them. She named them as they ate. The first was Oceanus. Beautiful, blue Oceanus. The other kit, she named Acheron. After the river that took his sister. The River of Sorrow.

His mother hardly spoke to Acheron. She favored Oceanus, and she pampered him. Poor Acheron was often left to his own devices. He grew jealous of his brother, who gained all the glory. He wanted his mother’s love, her attention, but all of it was directed to Oceanus. So, Acheron became a trouble maker. He would set traps. He would disturb and attack other kits, all for attention. But his mother gave him none. She wouldn’t rebuke him, she wouldn’t lecture him. For all she cared, Acheron had died in the river as well.

So, finally, Acheron decided that the only way to receive his mother’s attention, even for her to look his direction, would be for him to commit the ultimate crime. He didn’t care what the consequences were, he didn’t care if all she did was look him in the eye and weep. It would be enough for him. Acheron had made up his mind.

Acheron began his mission, on the darkest night. Oceanus lived near the river, and Acheron had memorized the route, having come here many times. He came to his brother’s home on silent paws. He could see the seaweed colored tail, and the blue of Oceanus’s fur. Acheron snuck up behind his sleeping brother, one side of his mouth curled up into a half-smile. His crazed, wide eyes searched for Oceanus’s most prized possession; his sea green orb.

It lay around Oceanus’s neck, calling to Acheron. ”I’m coming, precious,” he thought madly to himself. He slipped his teeth over the orb’s string, and carefully pulled it over his brother’s head. As soon as the orb left Oceanus’s possession, Acheron’s brother awoke in a panic. He jumped up, thrashing. “WHERE IS MY ORB?” He howled. Acheron quickly slipped the orb over his own neck, and snickered, smiling his insane smile.

He raced away, back to his home. He kept his brother’s orb as a trophy, wearing it proudly. Everywhere he went, the others feared him, but Acheron didn’t care. He had his revenge.

Word count:498/500

Spl/it Personality

Because of his second orb, Acheron has two different personalities. The dominant one, oddly enough is his second personality, the one given to him by his brother's orb. This extra personality often bleeds through in the form of boasting, and a terrible case of vanity. Acheron spends much of his time making sure his fur is sleek and perfect, his tail shimmers, and his orbs sparkle. And, seeing as all the other kits are afraid of him, Acheron will often tell himself just how fabulous he looks. This self-conversing is another side effect of his split personality. He does it all the time, just as much out of loneliness as out of insanity. Acheron never removes his second orb, so he has begun to lose his mind. This insanity makes up the whole of his other personality. His original character, his gentle quietness, had dissipated long ago, back before he begun to hunger so unceasingly for his mother's attention. Now, he was the poster child of insanity. He is a bully, enjoying taunting the young kits, pushing the middle aged ones, and spitting on the old ones. He is so crazy that he hardly eats, save when he just can't stand the hunger any longer. His unnatural thinness is one of the many things that frighten off other kits.

~Myth~ !
Your story and the personality you gave to Acheron are really interesting and I totally think it would suit him

I'd like to give an honorable mention to hurricanessong, who also had a great story for the second orb !

So congrats !

[AlaskanAlpaca]

Ohmigosh thank you so much!!*hugglez Acheron* I'm so happy now!

[hurricanessong]

thanks for the honorable mention!
and congrats for winning ~Myth~ I loved your story and it totally does fit this kit
have fun