[Spirest]

Oh, gosh
is this
I hope so

Now ladies and gentleman,
THIS is what you call a reserve.

name:Maximillian(Max)
gender:male
Character:(max.5 words)
Relation to his siblings:
Art:( already have an armor)



3 facts about Woi:

[laces]

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[HopelessOutsider]

So this is only non-owners? *Crys* Whoever gets him, he is a lovely boy <3

[Starlight109]

Maximillian

Gender: Male

Character:
-Dignified-Stubborn-Reserved-Caring-Respectful

Art:

By me:
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By others:
aspiringartist97
Mikaces---->

Explaining the personality I set for him:

I am aware of his old personality given to him which consisted of mostly being shy but also lonely. I didn't believe that it really suited his design. To me he seemed more like a noble, a prince, composed and serious, dignified in other words. But not as serious as his brother Rayo whose fits that trait better than Max in my opinion. The name Maximillian to me carries a sense of nobility adding to my cause to give him such a dignified personality. With this princely like Max i decided to give him two complimenting traits as well as two you could say flaws. I made him caring to all those you need it, deserve it, or earned it. And also respectful which i think somewhat adds to the dignified personality trait I gave him. The two flaws per say is Stubbornness for one thing, everyone has a certain level of stubbornness and for Max it's pretty mild not to the extreme but it could get him into trouble. The second would be reserved which is kind of like being shy but instead of being timid towards others he is slow to reveal his emotions to others.

Relation to his siblings:


Rayo

In Max's younger days his relation towards his brother had been clouded with uncertainty and concern. Rayo was always a serious fellow more than Max himself and its was not unknown of Rayo's hatred for Kronadors. Max had thought that his strong hatred would cloud his own judgment and lead to his demise. This fear coming from the grief of the death of their father, Mardelius to a monstrous Kronador. This silent uncertainty faded rather quickly though when Rayo proved himself countless times, most of the time scaring Max though by putting his pack in front of him effectively ignoring his own well being as well as risking everything for it at times. Now a days trusting his brother, Max sets aside his stubborn personality for him. Accepting Rayo's leadership qualities he fully trusts and respects his brother's decisions and will loyally follow those decisions without question and fight those who disrespect his brother.

Dax

Ever since they were pups Max had always been a tad annoyed with Dax. Max's more serious demeanor contrasted Dax's lighthearted personality. So Dax had a habit of getting under Max's fur multiple times especially when Dax decided to show off. Whenever a bad day arose for Max however, he normally would go and confined in his brother for some comfort. Dax always knew what to say to lift his spirits back up, a characteristic the brute possessed. In return Max would take up a duty Dax had, for the warrior to have some free time he loved so much.

Foalon

Maximillian has always been very protective over his sister even if he doesn't show it directly to her. Since they were very young Foalon has always been a little on the weak side which led to others making fun of her to her face and behind her back. Now since Foalon can hold her own and fight off those who dare say anything directly to her, Max has given himself the job to ruffle up anyone he hears talking behind Foalon's back. He'll make them see the hyperactive, friendly, smart and so much more that is his sister so they'd hopefully respect her for who she is.

Tira

When both were younger Tira was Max's favorite sparring partner or really opponent in any competition they would do. They helped each other by improving each others fighting skills, even though it turned mostly playful. As well as taking up Tira's time since she hated having nothing to do. Now as adults Tira's free time is mostly taken up by her mate and pups. But on the days were Tira has nothing to do whatsoever Max will propose rather awkwardly something simple to at least spend some time with his sister. Most of the time its a nice run since Max knows she likes those. Sometimes it develops into a race or playful fight like old times. Max doesn't care which one it is as long as he can be in Tira's life sometimes.

Short Story:

"Fall of a Leader"

Max raced across the land, chest heaving with the effort to gather enough oxygen to move on. For once the silver armor that always seemed to glow with pride on his body darkened with the gloomy atmosphere. Just before one of Max's fellow pack members had brought him the urgent news about his father. Now Max could only hope that he'd get a chance to see him once more. Tears started to stream down his cheeks his emotions finally catching up with him. He was never one to express his emotions but at this time with his father dying he couldn't help himself. It wasn't long till he found his family and the motionless battered and bloody form of his father. Max finally came to a stop unable to take his eyes of his father's form, his mother nestled against him her anguished cries heart-breaking. All of his siblings sat huddled together close by, pained expressions and fresh hot tears rolled down their faces. Out of all of them though Rayo looked the most composed. It was an act, Max could tell from where he stood. Rayo's eyes revealed that pain and tears slipped out. Still though he remained calm as though trying to hold everyone together. To be stronger for them at this time, even though he needed it as much as the rest of them. As Max approached sitting besides Dax and leaning heavily into him for comfort he noticed that Mardelius was not fully gone to them yet. Even though his broken form couldn't move his eyes bore into each and everyone of them, as if getting one look at who his pups have become. A warm glow settled into his bi-colored eyes filling with pride. Finally he rested his gaze upon Rayo.

"My son...." Mardelius croaked weakly needing to take a minute before proceeding. "I leave you....to lead...the pack....take care of them." And with a content sigh Mardelius passed. A dreaded feeling rose in Max's heart a whine erupting from him in despair. He watched with his own eyes as Rayo's brave face finally broke and crumbled his own tears and anguishing cries breaking out joining the others. As night settled in the era of one leader ended. And in the morning it rose for Rayo.

(385, with title it's 389)

3 facts about Woi:
Fact1:
Every Woi has to go through a initiation through the forest and to a cave to obtain their special armor, this armor having been made my the extinct human species thousand of years ago.
Fact 2:
The biggest enemy to the woi and the ones they are protecting their land from are the kronadors, chimera like creatures that don't posses anything special and only use their body to attack.
Fact 3:
During the first Ur-woi's on Isket some members left for unknown reasons, the past forgotten over time. These ex-members known as the unkown lived in different parts of Isket. Some young pups and teenies from the unkowns will end of back into the pack.

[TheWolfsgirl90]

Is this boy only open to those who don't own a WoI? I'm just a bit confused, because of the conversations on the thread and the previous WoI adopts being open for owners as well. :B

only for peopel woi don´t or own 1 woI

[HopelessOutsider]

name;
Maximillian (Max)
gender;
male
Character;
Positive
Leader
Shy(just a little with females)
Wise
Kind
Relation to his siblings;
Rayo;
He is very close to Rayo, they where close ever since they where born. They
share a close bond no one can explain. They where close since birth, but when
Mardelius there father died, they where scared and became a close net. They'll
never forget there father and that may be why there so close. Sometimes Rayo
and Max will fight side by side, and look as if they where twins. Max can sometimes
feel Rayo's pain, and happiness.
Dax;
These two have been best friends sense pup hood, although they can butt heads time
to time. These play buddy's often spar and play fight, but that is because there brothers,
you can find these to together all the time and there relationship is deep. They share there
fathers strengths and honesty and loyal ship, this is what they will share tell they die.
Tira;
Max loves teasing her, they love tussling. Though they love each other they are quite reserved,
and don't share to much with each other, but when they where young they where very close but
no one knew what happened to them.
Foalan;
Ah the to trouble makers, when they where young, Max never got in-trouble without Foalan.
But these to but heads and often fight with each other(not fiscally), but nothing that takes there
friendship apart.
Feyson Loki(adopted brother);
He see's Loki as a evil soul and never care to much about him, as Loki is
to him. They have been known to fight drawing blood, but this only happened
long ago. You can rarely find them together without them turned from
each other.
Sly;
Almost the same as Loki, but its not as bad, you can find them together
talking, but never "playing," and they rarely share good thoughts.
Art;
(by) Me
Rayo and Max(by) Rohan.
Brothers Bonds (by) Me

3 facts about Woi;

1. Isket is without peace
2.Their revivals are chimera's who are a mix of horse and reptile, also known as Kronadors
3 ."Lost WoI" almost always forget their past

Sean Clips;
(Something fun, that takes lots of parts of stories, I decided on this because everyone does "stories")


Max's eyes flew open to Rayo's stare, "Brother?"(max) "You where crying again."(Rayo)
"It was father...I can't shake it, Rayo....I just can't." Mardelius shoulders moved up ward indicating he had woken. "Max? What wrong son?"(Mardelius) Max's eyes open wide and he jumped on Mardelius, "Your not going anywhere right, father, right? Because your not going!" Mardelius chuckled, "No Max, I'm here, and even when I'm gone I'll be with you." Mard smiled, "Go to sleep, son."
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"Gone? What do you mean Rayo? Father is never gone. He lives in us Rayo he lives in our hearts, in our soal." he said touching Rayo's side, giving a small smile. "Max how can he be here?" Rayo spat back. "He said he would never leave us, on the night I had the dream. Remember?" Max's red eye's glowed at Rayo. "Even though we can't hear him or see him, he lives in us. "And look at the stars, can't you see him looking down upon us?" he said touching Rayo's heart.
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Max looked up at the sky, two star's where there, looking down at Max. 'Protect me in this battle, father.' Max's armor shined hard against the moon, as he and Rayo charged into a fight. "For ISKET!"
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(Maybe more to come! ;3) [/size]

[Raviolli]

Maximilian
Max

Meaning || Greatest

Gender || Male
Age || 5 years old
Birth Month || March

Rank || Sub Alpha

Armor || Here
Fighting Style || Head on and normally right
in the middle of the battle field.
Weak Point || Known to go into a rage.

Character ||

- Harsh.
- Closed off.
- Commanding.
- Keen.
- Blunt.

Likes ||

- Keeping his fur clean.
- Having space and being alone
- He likes to have structure
- Enjoys watching the sunset
- Butterbirds

Dislikes ||

- Loathes Kronadors (especially their leader)
- Characters trying to get close emotionally
- Disorder and disobedience within the pack
- Disrespect towards him and his rank
- Fighting within his family

Favorite Colour || Different shades of Orange
Past Time || Normally off by himself thinking
Attracted to || Unknown

Art Starring Maximilian ||

*All work is copy written to
respected owners.*

Image || By Me||
Image || By Me||
Image || By Me||
Image || By Me||
Image || By SearraLee||
Image || By SearraLee||
Image || By ParanoidRussian||
Image || By Dirtypit||
Image || By Dirtypit||
Image || By Grifforik||
Image || By Grifforik||


Relation to his siblings ||



Rayo; Max looks up to and has a respect for his older brother like any younger sibling would; Max knows that Rayo is a respected leader but doesn’t often believe in all the decisions that are made. He has a different opinion towards things and won’t be afraid to speak his mind against Rayo. He isn’t always the greatest at following what Rayo says but when it comes down to the good of the pack or when corporation is needed Max will obey without a second thought. He does slightly envy Rayo for all that the male has but doesn’t dare admit it.



Darzek; The two have history together and not all of it good, Max can often be more rash and aggressive towards Darzek but deep down he cares deeply for his brother above many within the pack. He feels a slight rivalry towards him and often strives to best the male where he can. He is a little jealous of how many look up to this male and does understand why at times. They have an odd love hate kind of relationship but Max will always have Darzek’s back in a battle. You could say these two are close in their own way.



Tira; Max has never been close to Tira, as he was often too busy with training growing up and has never been one for getting close as an adult to create a relationship the two might could have shared. The male has always looked out for her on the battle field and been impressed by her speed ever since they were pups. They are able to share a laugh or two at times and he does enjoy competing against her on occasion. Although they don’t share history together, Max does care of his sister and is amazed at how strong she has become as a warrior.



Foalan; Being the weakest of the litter Max has always taken it upon himself to keep an eye on his sister. He is known to be a little protective of her but has learned as they grew that she is just as much a warrior as anyone else. He does his best to show some kind of affection towards her although it never really turns out the way he’d planned. Since they have grown and his siblings have moved onto family life he has distanced himself more from them so this doesn’t happen as often as it use to.

Featuring:

Maximilian
Darzek owned by Neara

Blood dripped from his wounds, staining the lighter part of
his pelt, his body felt like hundreds of needles stabbed at him has he pushed
himself forward. Everything around him was a blur as he raced past other warriors
who were fighting for their lives against the enemy. Red eyes filled with rage as
he lunged himself against the body of a Kronador, the impact causing the creature
to stumble and fall to the ground. Rather than stay to finish off the best the
armored canine jumped away and racing off once again. Having only one thing on
his mind; search and destroy.

Blinded by rage and sorrow Max continued to move deeper into enemy territory
knowing that was where the beast would be hiding. He didn’t realize nor hear the
warrior calling to him as he foolishly left the safety of numbers to take his revenge.
He couldn’t believe the words he had been told moments before racing off.
Mardelius. Their alpha. His father. Had fallen in battle. The pain of the loss was
more unbearable then of the wound on his neck. He would be the one to kill the beast
that preyed on his father.

He dodged a few of the Kronadors that charged towards him, leaving them in the
dust as he climbed up a rocky ledge to get a better view of the area. Quickly scanning
the battle field in a frantic attempt to locate the beast but the moment he spotted it
he felt his body collapse to the ground as the warrior who had been chasing after him
had finally caught up. “Max!!!” He snarled, trying to snap the male out of his rage.
“Darzek! Get off of me!” Max replied harshly, pushing against his brother’s body in
an attempt to get him off.

“You idiot! Are you trying to get yourself killed? He is gone! There is nothing we can do!”

His red eyes glared up towards his brother’s face as the two snarled towards each
other. “Don’t be a fool! Live to fight another day! He wouldn’t want you to run in
foolishly!” The large tan male growled down towards him. As silence washed over the two,
sounds of the battle finally began to once again become clearer. Finally managing to get
his older brother off of him, Max stood himself up, knowing what he had heard was
the truth. Lifting his muzzle into the air and letting out a haunting cry he warned the
beast that it’s day would come when he too would fall.

Word Count: 425

3 facts about Woi ||

--The original alpha Mardelius was
the only warrior to battle against and scarred the leader of the Kronadors, however
lost his life in the battle. His mate, Laurona soon passed on due to an illness.

--The land of Isket has only three seasons;
Summer, Spring and Winter. It is covered with blueish grass, plants, white rivers
and reddish mountains where network of tunnels make up the packs den site. The night in Isket is normally longer then the days, leaving
the warriors in the dark most of the time.

--As a Teenie begins training they are
given wooden armor and will wear it until they are old enough to become a
Rank candidate. They must earn their true armor by taking a ritual mission each
warrior takes and will find the armor deep in a cave. The style of armor represents
the position a WoI is in; Heavy armor is for the regular warrior and generals
(normally larger), Lighter armor is for the hunters and scouts to allow them more
movement. Each warrior’s armor will have Rayo’s symbol and something written that
only the warriors know how to read.


Add-ons ||
--Extra Character Info
--Short Story

[laces]

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Name: Maximillian

Gender: Male

Character: Loyal to those he cares for, shy, trustworthy, can be moody, and pure.

Story: {Extra 1}
●Apprentice
Max panted, looking up at Dax. "Wow, you really need to work on your contact. All you've been doing is running from me." Dax laughed at his brother, who gave a small glare. Quietly, he huffed back, "I just don't want to fight is all." The aspect of harming, even killing, another living creature really horrified the black and white teen. "Whatever." Dax turned back to the instructor, who gave the tan and grey teen a nod of approval. When his gaze slid to Max however, Max couldn't help but notice the disappointment. Max slid back to the den he shared with his parents and siblings, hoping no one saw his failure. After all, his father was the leader. And the greatest fighter out of all of the pack. And he was afraid to even spar with his brother.
●Rank Candidate
The way to get armor was rough. Max knew this. He just hoped he could run fast enough that the Kronadors wouldn't catch him. Cries of good luck wafted to his ears as he padded into the forest. Max let out a shaky sigh... "Let the fun begin." He huffed as he began to pick up speed. After a while, his nerves wore off. He guessed it wasn't so bad. Maybe even enjoyable. But when he smelled the musky, ugly scent of a Kronador his optimism wore off. His paws sped up, going the opposite way of the smell. Thank goodness he was still on the overgrown path.
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The cave was vast, larger than Max anticipated. It took his breath away, all the armor piled up neatly and undisturbed except for pawprints in the dust from other warriors who had come here. Not too many did, but he was sure other packs knew about this. A shine of grey and silver caught his eye. The teen walked over to it. As soon as he saw it, he knew it was his. Max laid on his side and wriggled into it.
●Return
Max stepped softly onto the blue Isket grass, looking up to the red mountain that he called home. His armor felt heavy on his back, but it was comforting. He hoped that retrieving his armor and coming back alive would prove to his father and family that he was truly a warrior.
Dax padded up to his brother, in his own armor. "Congrats," He quirked a grin as Max sighed.
{{400 words}}


Relation to his siblings:
●Dax- Max and Dax are fairly close as brothers. Max has turned to Dax in a few times of need, like after their mother died. Dax helped Max in training as teens and rank candidates. They are kind to each other and loyal in battle.
●Rayo- Max has a lot of respect for his other brother. He knew that his brother was fit enough to be leader over him after their father died. He doesn't have a bond with Rayo as much as he does with Dax, but it doesn't stop them from talking. Overall, Max respects his brother's decisions and stays out of his way.
●Tira- Tira and Max were always playmates as pups and are so even in battles now. Tira always tries to cheer up the moody Max when he is down, and it always seems to work. She was a bit bossy, even now she is, but Max doesn't seem to mind it.
●Faolan- Faolan and Max used to be very close before she had her own family. Then she drifted and began to talk less and less with Max. They still talk at times, and laugh and joke, but Max knows she has her own family. There might even be some jealousy when he sees them all together, but he hasn't made an active ploy to find a mate.
●Feyson Loki (adopted brother)- Max isn't too sure about Loki. He still shows him the love and respect he shows the others, but he is definitely cautious.

Art:
By Spirit
By Spirit
By Rohan.

By Paint

3 facts about WoI:
1. The WoI live in Isket, which is a beautiful land full of blue grass. They live in huge red mountains, in a network of caves that cannot be eroded easily. It is mostly dusk all the time.
2. The seasons in Isket are spring, summer, and winter.
3. Their armor is left in a cave 8,000 years ago by humans. It is a test to earn their armor, apprentices must go through a treacherous forest full of Kronadors and Unknown WoI. When they return, they are made rank candidates and their rank is chosen based on the armor they returned with.

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[Emma-Chan]

I may just try to reserve and work on one ^^ I've loved him since I watched the first litter ^^

[Wlyrout]

Reserve.