[zet137]

❖ this will be ending in a few hours!!

[makuu]

username;
paradox ;
but call me dox
it's shorter c:

dokii name;
Gerbill.
Howewer,this is
only a nickname,
his real full name
is unknown :c

gender;
malemalemale ;u;

their phobia;
Gerbill is a wonderful guy.
He's caring,sensitive,
always helpful and generous.
He's just a bit shy,but
he tries to hide that.
Though he has a little secret.
A secret about friendship,
precisely about some friends.

He's friend with mice.

Yes,he loves those small
sweet creatures,they're
his special special friends
from when he was a little
dokii.
They're the only ones with
whom Gerbill can be himself,
with his fears and his reserved
personality.


(horrible art by me ;u;)

Though he has also another
secret. When he was young,
he always argued with a strange,
stupid and violent mouse,
called Crex.

One time,Crex made him a joke:
he lead Gerbill in a wood,then he
scared him by pretend to be
a ghost. Finally,he throw Gerbill
in a hole and left him inside for
all the night.
So Gerbill has crexphobia,
fear of mice that looks like
Crex xD

That's all,I hope to win him c:

- d o x


I put a lot of time
and effort on making
this form,I love Gerbill,
so don't steal anything.
I'll report you.

[zet137]

❖ alright!!

this dokii is closed for judging! please no more forms beyond this point and no editing of forms!!

judging will take a bit longer today, since im a little busy doing stuff, but the winner will be decided before the day is out!

[makuu]

I forgot,
good luck
to you all
guys <3
this dokii
is too lovely,
good job
zetsubou c:

[zet137]

❖ after some tough decisions, i have figured out the winner for this dokii!!

congratulations, temporal!!

for those who need reminding, this is temporal's form;

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username;

pft you know me. please tell me you know me. the name's temporal, though everybody that knows me calls me ashee.


dokii name;

okokii
o-kok-i

there isn't a meaning to the name of okokii. i would give a huge, heartfelt story on what the reason was if there was one, but there isn't. which is rather, well. bland i guess.

but it rolls off the tongue if you say it out loud. so.


gender;

okokii is male. despite his feminine appearance, he is male.

their phobia;
atelophobia - the fear of not being good enough.
{ fear of making mistakes and it not being perfect }

this dokii has a huge fear of not being good enough, and making mistakes. he has to do everything perfect. if draws, and ends up drawing a line in the wrong place, he'll have to start again.

everything. must be perfect.

this is also why okokii isn't used for much apart from a skittish household pet. he just wouldn't be able to handle the stress of being set to do a job. or doing anything, really. e

simple things like going to buy a packet of oreos or something like that is a task for him. but he can do it. it'll just take him a long time. and hopefully another dokii or person to come with him and reassure him that it'll be okay, and how he's doing fine.

he'll often do things like scuttle across the street, and stalk around with his ears pinned down, carefully planning every pawstep he makes. he can't go anywhere outside without another dokii with him to guide him and keep him calm.


to be fair enough, the fear is much more around he's afraid of making mistakes. this is why everything must be perfect incase he makes a mistake.

❖ why? well first, of course, the name. i really like the name! Okokii is really cute, and i love how it resembles Dokii, not sure if that was intentional or not, but it was neat in any case.
and of course the real important part of the form, his phobia! truth is, i thought this boy would have severe OCD in some way or another while drawing him, it fit him somehow! im glad someone else saw this as well. i love how you explained his phobia as well. (not to mention it reminds me a lot of myself aha)

for these reasons, i chose temporal as the winner. it was hard, believe me! but i hope everyone can respect why temporal won.

but! theres quite a few of honorable mentions this time! (aka zet is horrible at choosing and has to make this clear)

honorable mentions;
paradox ; - your form was incredibly creative, i do love how you came up with a backstory to give him a specific fear! the poem is fantastic, too. you were really close to winning, honestly!
futile. - you were also super close to winning. i really loved your name and phobia, its adorable! if a little tragic </3 also, i loved how you worded your form!
wesleydog - when i was reading your form all i could think was "i understand the pain". balloons popping was my absolute nightmare as a kid </3 it fits this dokii, as well! plus the name Pitbull is delightfully ironic.

of course, everyone's form was fabulous, but sadly there can only be one winner ;o;
best of luck next time guys! thank you all very much for entering!

[zet137]

❖ just bumping to make sure people see!

[moonie,]

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oh my god i knew i won this about two days ago when it was just said but i never had time/the right place to reply ;v;!!

ahhhh!! i'm so happy- my lil' boy is so adorable i am seriously hugging my laptop and planning fanart already!!

as for the other mentions, paradox your form was amazing i was sure that you'd win i mean wow ;v;.

i really can't explain how glad i am right now. i am quite seriously grinning like a five year old. ♡♡

and who can blame me these things are adorable

[zet137]

❖ no worries about replying late ;u; i was just worried you hadnt seen this buried under all tons of other posts pfft

but oh gosh youre very welcome!! i know you will take care of him!! ♥♥

[Briar Rose]

Congrats temporal ^u^ I'm majorly jealous happy for you.

Just in the future people need to make sure they follow rules. I like paradox's form as much as the next but diesel said no extras so it's kind of unfair if someone's is judged with extras they made versus someone who followed the rules but made have not included as much. I found a really cute video to go with mine but didn't post it since it counts as an extra ^^;