Please don't bump, I'll judge within the next few days.

♥ Sweetypie ♥ wrote:WIP <33Pony Name;;Marley May
Her nickname is Mar Mar <3Cutie Mark;;A sweet little strawberry pie <3Talent and/or Hobby;;She is a master at baking all types of pastries, but her specialty and favorite is strawberry pie.Story;;With her permission, I included Diddlebug's pony Paradise in my story, she's Mar's friend.
Marley sat silently, staring wistfully at Paradise's cutie mark, anxiously awaiting one of her own.
"Par?"
She mumbled in a voice just audible. Par's ears perked, and she looked over to Marley.
"Yeah?"
Marley stood and shuffled her hooves in the dirt, looking down at the bits of grass sprouting.
"How did you get your cutie mark?"
She paused nervously before continuing.
"Should I have gotten mine already?"
Paradise stood and shook out her coat, waving her hair to get rid of the dry leaves. The sun shone brightly from a cloudless blue sky, and Marley blinked from the light entering her eyes when she looked up. The grass was silent beneath her hooves, moist and crisp in the warm spring air. The green hills rolled softly into the distance, untouched by impurity. Paradise sighed and glanced back at her hip, eyeing her cutie mark; a starfish and a Hawaiian flower.
"Well Mar, my story isn't as grand as everyone else's is, I was simply walking on the beach one day when a found a large group of starfish stranded on the shore and carried them all back into the water. I had gone back home later that day and realized it when I walked past the mirror. I wouldn't worry; I'm sure you'll get your cutie mark soon."
Marley sighed in relief, and sat back down on the picnic blanket. Paradise joined her, and Marley decided to bring out the dessert. She pulled from her basket a large strawberry pie with wavy edges and three small slits on top, it looked absolutely perfect, like it had just been pulled off the TV. She sat it between the two of them and gave Paradise a plate, cutting off a generous slice for each of them.
"Wow Mar, this looks great! Did you make it!"
Marley smiled and blushed, nodding as she took her first bite. It was scrumptious, still warm all over, and the inside was juicy, yet the crust was still flaky and crisp. Paradise took a bite and her eyes instantly lit up, her mouth slowing at the taste of the delicious morsel.
"Oh my gersh," Par said through muffling crumbs. "This is amazing, wow, oh my gosh, it's incredible!" Her eyes shut in pleasure and her chewing slowed even more as she tried to savor every bit. They finished off the pie all on their own quickly, lying on their back to relieve pressure on their bellies. Marley stood slowly and stretched, moaning with content. She heard Paradise gasp and turned to see a wide grin on her face. Marley followed Par's gaze back to her hip, seeing their her very own cutie mark; a strawberry pie.Art;;






Tano wrote:I went ahead and updated it (found my mouse, yay! <3).
Also, this gal has a fair bit of art, so I'll PM it all to you if you'd like. :3




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