[jackbarakat]

I think I'm gonna enter, so this is gonna be where my form isC:

[Sapphy.]

Name:

Alcimar

Gender:

Male

Age:

Young Adult

Personality:

Alcimar, by all means, is adventurous. He loves adventure, but tends to take the wrong turn down the road sometimes, though rarely. Exploring, no matter what, is his passion, and due to experience knows what to do in even the most hard-core situations. Even if he’s handsome, he doesn’t really acknowledge it, and rather be exploring the seven seas than hitting on girls and trying to find himself a girlfriend. He loves the ocean, and the way water flows. Exploring is his life, and if he could leave behind all his duties to be a rogue and just… swim, he would.

He is also a brave being, never backing down from a fight and defending his opinion with all his might. He defends his pride with all he has and really dislikes others offending him, though if you leave him alone, he’s actually very quiet happy-go-lucky and friendly. He loves life and to laugh, but takes it seriously at well, in rare occasions that is.


Armor Type:

Silver with tints of Gold

Art -

Did you know... - viewtopic.php?f=33&t=942580

- This is my second attempt at a whale. My first was in traditional, and came out much better. I'll try to make more though :3 -

Job -

Navigator -

Story -

I love the ocean. The calm blue and its currents. Yet it’s amazing to see how bipolar the sea can be sometimes, going from the most peaceful place in the world, where you wish you could be for the rest of your life, to the place you’d never want to visit, with raging tides and wave’s way past the size of what can be called a tsunami. Yet, it’s still my home, and somewhere in my secret heart, it’s the place, in whatever mood it might be, I’d love to be.

I’ve never been in love with anything but the ocean, and it’s the plain truth. A truth I love to embrace, except part of it would be a lie. I have always loved the sea, for everything it is, but sometimes one makes a big mistake and fall face down into a burning fire of love with something unexplainable like a girl. Like bees to honey. Her name was Terrain, and this is the story of how I really liked a girl for the first time, a girl as pure as the sea, but lost her in a blink of an eye. Like a sick, twisted, brief version of Romeo and Juliet. Did I forget to mention that my best friend, Trek, is involved? Well he is, and tragically, he shares the same fate as Terrain, not to spoil the story or anything.

But ah well, I already did. Just read it. Laugh at my pain. I promise you, it’s a real, hearty laugh.

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“Tsk, Tsk, Tsk, Alcimar! Your way too distracted! What are you even looking at?” Trek, my best friend and my mentor scorned. He was around my age, ironically, but though he was very quite scornful, he could also be a joker. “Ohhhh, I see, you’z in lovvvvee~!” he laughed. Yup, that was my best friend, the intelligent retard. Apparently, he knew a lot about love, always trying to get girls to date him. Sadly, though his strategies worked for calculating the distance a migration would take us, he was very bad at girl chemistry.

“Oh please, Trek, you dumb tail. My only love is the ocean.” I snapped at him, but of course, that only supported his theory, as stupid as it was. “Aha! I am correct then!” He laughed, and if whales could point fins, he would be doing that right now. He was normal size for a bull of our age, like me, with white, flashy patterns. That was entirely normal, since he apparently came from a long line of leaders and such.

We swam around, straying farther from home-base where he was supposed to be teaching me, all the while hearing him rant about how in love I seemed to be these days. Of course, he thought a rock could be in love with another rock by the way it was positioned, so that he was going on about this subject was totally normal. And well, that’s when I saw her. She was swimming with the current, her tail and fins the perfect size and shape for her to be able to travel at high speeds. She was the traditional black and white, with unique silver tribal patterns, and had the most beautiful silver eyes.


“Wow dude, you did not tell me she was hot.” My retarded buddy said, stopping and floating like I was for a second both our mouths hanging wide in awe. We must have looked stupid enough to attract her attention, apparently, because she turned her head towards us, and smiled at me, looking all happy-go-lucky. She swam towards us, and in a few seconds, because of her speed was already in front of us.

“Well, hello there!” She said with a light accent, pronouncing her words lightly band happily, and gift wrapping them with smiles. “My names Terrain, and who may you be?” She asked, adding to her first statement, but of course, like fools, we didn’t answer, because apparently, we had looked to deeply into her silver eyes to ever come back from the trance, or spell, or whatever witchcraft, she had put us under. Luckily, Trek had been in a lot of these situations before, and, probably purposely, slapped be in the face with his fin during his introduction.

“Well hello Madam, glad to meet you on a fine day like this no? I’m Trek Storm, this is buddy Alcimar. He’s a bit slow, but you’ll get used to him.” He said with a wink to the poor girl, who was already kind of freaked out by him and seemed to be taking into consideration whether or not to bolt. So instead, she escaped being near him and swam to my side because apparently, I was the lesser weird one.

“Um, well, hello Trek. Hello, Alcimar.” She said, as kindly as she could to Trek, who had been, once again, rejected by a girl. By now, I was hoping, wishing, madly that my face was red. Of course, Trek had to go and point out the obvious to every fish and non-fish in the sea. “Oooh, look at Alcimar, he has a crush on a girl for the first time, how cute!” And once again in my life, I wanted to crush Trek like a squid.
Miraculously, Terrain hadn’t made a mad dash for it, but was actually giggling. “Awe, it’s alright. I kind of like him too.” The comment pretty much killed Trek, since he had; clearly, hope that his comments had discouraged her enough.

For a second, I was actually going to say something, but was stopped in my tracks by the odd mass coming towards us. I could barely make up was Trek had said, with all the noise, but when I made out the words, my eyes widened in fear. A ZENACHROME. And, by jolly, it was ready to tear of our heads and gobble them up like any normal whale would do with a shrimp. Isn’t that just beautiful?

I would tell you what happened, but I don’t remember anything after that. So let’s just skip to the next part, shall we?

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I awoke on the ocean floor, out cold for… how much had it been 30 minutes? Well, it must’ve been, because within seconds, instinct drove me to swim as fast as I could to take a ling full of air. Luckily, I wasn’t as heavily built back then. After taking the breath of air, I dove back into the sea, welcoming it like a good old friend. Friend… Where was Trek and Terrain!? “Treck! Terrain! Where are you?” I shouted, swimming around furiously, frantically, looking for my friends.

Except, they weren’t anywhere to be spotted. Gone. The ZENACHROME had probably taken them, or killed them. All that day I spent frantically looking for my friends, without success. Days, and days I still spent, searching and searching, still with no success.

Eventually, I grew weaker, and for the first time in my life, I actually thought I was going to die. “Let me die!” I muttered bitterly to myself. I was the only one that had survived, for what reason? Why had their lives been taken, but not mine? Why? What purpose was there left in life if we were all to die eventually anyway? “Just let me die… Then I’ll be part of the ocean, and my soul can finally rest. Maybe I’ll even get to see Trek and Terrain again.”

Those where my last thoughts before I was knocked unconscious from hunger, and somewhere, I believed I WAS going to die. Then I saw that shadowy figure, and the one that gleamed and glowed like light. “Trek? Terrain? Is that you?” I whimpered, swimming towards the figures, then I noticed, with a glowing, warm feeling inside myself, it was. They were wearing beautiful, stunning armor.

“Wow dude, you didn’t have to die just to see us.” Treck joked, laughing wholeheartedly, like he always did. Terrain rolled her eyes at him, like she had known him for a life time now, and not just a day. But then again, they had died together, so it probably counted as much. “Don’t mind Treck, he’s a retard, you know? Alcimar… Go back. Live. Dying just to be with us in soul isn’t worth it. Go live more adventures, explore the ocean, live.”

I felt like she had given me a brief talk about what life was, and the meaning of it with such simple, normal words, but it was probably easier to direct my attention on her, than the stupid swimming next to her, chasing his one tail fin. Gosh, sometimes I wonder how he came to be my best friend. But when he stopped and smiled then laughed, I knew why. Because I was just like him, deep inside. So instead of staying around, and objecting to what they said, I nodded, and smiled.

“Goodbye guys. See you in a while.”



Well, yeah, the story was brief, and as you might say, confusing, but even to I, that lived it, it still is. But I will kill that ZENACHROME that killed my friends. I will avenge them. But I will also live life, because like Terrain and Trek told me, indirectly, yes, but that our life is short. We need to enjoy it. No? So for now, I’ll just sit back... and float.

[randomzness]

thanks for your entry ^.^

[broodingtulip]

username: soulrider000
name of whale: Noel
personality:
Noel is forgiving, charming, and gentle. She is also agile and fast, but not as fast as the Z.E.N.A.C.H.R.O.M.E. She is torn btween healer and hunter, but she has made up her mind.
type of armor ( look at WOP page for info): Steel
art( can be ordered or drawn): ordered please C:

job (navigator, warrior, shaman, healer,:hunter
story:
Noel hugged her mama tight. "I'm gonna be the best hunter in the pod, mama!" Noel said as she zipped around quickly. "Yes, Noel. You will be. But every good hunter ust rest and eat alot of food. You also need to be responsible." Kalani, Noel's mother, said. "I know! I will, I truly will! Watch! I'll eat ALL the shrimp in the big, wide ocean!" Noel said excitedly. She couldn't wait to be a hunter!"Yes, but what about the pod? They can't eat if you eat their food!Oh Noel! What are we going to do with you." Kalani sighed and went to go see Alana, her sister. Meanwhile, Noel went out to go hunt for her pod.
"Noel! Noel, where did you go!" Kalani was searching franticly for her beloved Noel. Shanen, her mate, was trying to calm her down. "I'm sure she'll be back." he tried to comfurt her. "Why did she go! What if a Z.E.N.A.C.H.R.O.M.E gets her!" she said.Then, Noel curiosly poked her head inside the cave where her mama was. "Hi mama! Look what I have! I-" she was cut off by her mama. "Noel! where did you go! Why- when! Do you know how worried I was!" she hugged her baby so tight. "I'm sorry mama. I went to hunt for the pod." she squeezed out of the hug and dropped down several shrimp. "Oh Noel, Noel. What am I going to do with you?"

[~*Waffletastic!*~]

so who's winning so far??
hehee i want it to be the 20th XD

[randomzness]

i dunno who is winning yet :3 it ends tomorrow everyone!

[Blizzard-]

I so want to know who will win Good luck eveyone!

[~*Waffletastic!*~]

Yeah I'm über exited! ^3^
good luck people!!!!

[broodingtulip]

My entry sucks compared to all yours! Mine's like the shortest one!
GOOD LUCK TO ALL!!! HOPE HE/SHE GETS A GOOD OWNER!!!

[Sapphy.]

Pfft, I just finished with the story and added it to my form. Art is being delt with. The story is kinda like... happy-go-lucky and laid back, because I wanted to emphisize that he's not the bloody type, so yeah :3

Sapphy~