Re: Forager Readopt -- Extended to 18 Mar! 2 day warning~

Postby sillies » Fri Mar 17, 2017 10:13 am

2 day warning!
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Re: Forager Readopt -- Extended to 18 Mar! 2 day warning~

Postby lovage » Sun Mar 19, 2017 1:34 pm

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Name Paul
Gender Male
Story
I trotted over the Plains of Aron. It was a peaceful and nice day then a dark forest appeared in my path so I tracked in to be greeted by two thefts. I turned to see two others blocking my path. I rushed to the trees running with all my might. They chased me shooting sleeping darts at me. I rushed off and dodged each bullet.
A Kalon blocked my path. They threw up a shield. "Get behind me." she said and whistled. Two small kalons came out of the forest at the whistle. A female kit wielding a crossbow. She knew how to use it well. A male kit held a sword. He hummed with each step and swing of his sword. "Artemus and Apollo will delay the thieves. Follow me to the bridge." she said. Her shield still up til the end of the bridge. "My name is Adina. I'm in a group with Artemus and Apollo that defends this forest." Adina said. Apollo showed up with Artemus leaning on him for support. Apollo flashed Adina a look and she nodded.
She flicked her tail in telling me to run and handed me a knife carrier and a knife in it. I ran til I ran into a tree. I picked myself up. No matter where I went I just kept thinking of them. So in the end I joined up with them protecting the forest. I'm Paul a protector of the Darken Forest. I have never injured a single thing with that knife of mine and just scared the people, who harm others, away from here.
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Re: Forager Readopt -- Extended to 18 Mar! Judging in progre

Postby sillies » Mon Mar 20, 2017 12:01 pm

This is now closed for judging!
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Re: Forager Readopt

Postby sillies » Mon Mar 20, 2017 1:02 pm

Congratulations to Cats kitten! I felt your story went best with the music and that Forager was well developed as a character! I will add you to Foragers ref asap!


Catskitten wrote:Forager
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He was an act. A freak show. A traveler.
Forager is circus creation.
He traveled the globe with his knives performing trick after trick for the audiences.
His other jobs was minimal.
Care for the circus animals. Clean up the stage after.
Than he was a mistake.

"Come one come all!
See the traveling knife wielder.
May he strike anything may he win any fight!"
He called out,smirking when other kalons drew near
His audience was captivated.
Forager brought out his knives out of their sheaths.
He looked at his targets that hung around in the trees and such.
Than screams were heard. Loud wailing met his ears.
He turned around.
A bear stared him in the face.
He than gasped and almost dropped his weapon.
"Run you fool run!" someone shouted
Forager ran like the rabbit kalon he was not thinking twice.
He ran into the forest the bear of course giving chase.
Running for his life he than ran further into the woods behind the circus area.
He gotten himself lost.
Than he was trapped.
Forager had ran into a dead end.
He had run into a river and he had to turn back but the bear was there facing him again.
Forager had no choice so he jumped into the river.
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A flash of light.
An he woke up in the forest standing on land.
He glanced about in confusion.
The forest was white and light reflected off the trees.
His knives were re-sheathed.
"Funny. I don't remember getting out of the water.
Hello?! Did someone help me?"
He than turned to look at the water.
Than stepped back as his confusion turned to fear.
The water was glass and a small kalon was on it looking at him.
This stranger was chuckling and shaking their head at Forager.
"You seem like a lost soul. Follow me for a way out."
The tiny kalon walked off.
Forager ran after him having no other choice.
"Wait who are you? Where am I?"
"Some call me reflector." the stranger answered him
"What."
"Fine you can call me Bear."
"Be...bear? Your the bear?" Forager whimpered
Bear glanced at him.
"No im a reflector. You woke up in my world.
This is the Mirror Realm. A alternate to your earth plane.
There is no going back only forward."
An so Forager followed him with wariness on his face and fear in his heart.
He had no idea where he was or if this little kalon was lieing to him.
They both eventually stepped out of the woods and Forager's jaw dropped.
There lay a city before them. A city of mirrors.
An adventure waiting to be discovered.
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Re: Forager Readopt -- Winner!

Postby lovage » Mon Mar 20, 2017 1:02 pm

Congrats
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Re: Forager Readopt -- Winner!

Postby Catskitten » Mon Mar 20, 2017 4:14 pm

oh gosh i just saw this
thank you so much i have some really good ideas for this guy and can't wait to work on his character:D
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