Re: CC #5.63

Postby deerpuff » Wed Jul 29, 2015 5:56 am

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Name of Zver; Pebblesong
Biological sex; male
Gender; male
What is their greatest fear?; He is slightly afraid of water, as he has never seen it or know what it is. He is afraid it will ruin his soft fur and accessories.
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Re: CC #5.63

Postby Raleigh » Fri Jul 31, 2015 4:31 am

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    ACHERON
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    ᴀᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ᴇɴᴅ ᴏғ ᴛʜᴇ ʀɪᴠᴇʀ ʟɪᴇs ᴛʜᴇ ʟᴀɴᴅ ᴏғ ᴛʜᴇ ғᴏʀʟᴏʀɴ
    ᴡʜᴇʀᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛ ʙᴇᴀʀs ɪsᴏʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ɪɴ sᴜᴄʜ ᴀ ʟᴏᴠᴇʟʏ ғᴏʀᴍ

        ✤ Acheron
          /ˈækərən/
          noun
          1. Fʀᴏᴍ "Aᴄʜᴇʀɴᴀʀ"; Tʜᴇ ᴇɴᴅ ᴏғ ᴛʜᴇ ʀɪᴠᴇʀ.
          2. Kɴᴏᴡɴ ᴀs ᴛʜᴇ ʀɪᴠᴇʀ ᴏғ ᴡᴏᴇ ɪɴ Gʀᴇᴇᴋ ᴍʏᴛʜᴏʟᴏɢʏ.
          3. A ʀɪᴠᴇʀ ᴏғ ᴄʟᴇᴀʀ, ʙʟᴜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ sᴜʀʀᴏᴜɴᴅᴇᴅ ʙʏ
          ᴘɪʟʟᴀʀs ᴏғ ᴡʜɪᴛᴇ ʀᴏᴄᴋ.
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          Mᴀʟᴇ; ɢᴇɴᴅᴇʀғʟᴜɪᴅ
        ✤ Greatest Fear
          Hᴀᴘʜᴇᴘʜᴏʙɪᴀ; ғᴇᴀʀ ᴏғ ᴘʜʏsɪᴄᴀʟ ᴄᴏɴᴛᴀᴄᴛ.
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Re: CC #5.63

Postby comically » Fri Jul 31, 2015 10:22 am

Closes in a hour!
If theres any last minute changes and or entries, now would be a good time to get them in.
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Re: CC #5.63

Postby comically » Fri Jul 31, 2015 12:32 pm

Closed!
I'll begin judging these, the winner should either be announced today or tomorrow morning.
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Re: CC #5.63

Postby comically » Sat Aug 01, 2015 1:19 am


It was a pretty difficult time choosing the winner, even with a friend helping me decide on which one I should go with. Because on one hand I really liked ZombieRoadkill's story and on the other hand I also liked the fear and drawing in Raleigh's form.

In the end I chose ZombieRoadkill, because the story was interesting and enjoyable for me to read! I liked how you described how Trinket was being disconnected from reality and being brought into his own nightmare world, which I can envision really well!


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Username; ZombieRoadkill
Name of Zver; Trinket
Biological sex; Male
Gender; Male
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What is their greatest fear?;
His main fear is his own nightmares.
Smaller fears are the 'Nothing', being alone and empty rooms.

There I sat just casually sorting my small collection of jewellery. All the jewellery I have belonged to others who had said it was useless, but I think that ever piece is special and has its own story behind it.
I feel a strong sense of deja-vu. Its like I know what will happen, but yet I dont. I look down to find that part of the ground beneath me is starting to dissappear. That's when I remembered and realised what was happening. My jewellery starts to melt, the trees seeem to dissintergrate and the sky starts to drip like a leak on a roof. Everything was just turning into.. nothing. No. No! I wasn't going to get trapped again. Tears start to form in my eyes, I'm so scared. I start to scream as the Nothing catches up to me.
"Help me! Someone please help me!", I shout out as loud as I can.
It's got me.

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Slowly I start to open my eyes. I know what I'd see but continued to open them. I'm inside the Nothing. How many times will this haunt,chase and terrify me? My body is tense and skaking, I start to cry again. This isn't fair! Why does it torture me like this? Whats worse is that I'm it only prisoner. It won't even allow me to have company. I have to be all alone.
"I don't want to be alone", I cried quietly to myself. Still shaking, I manage to stand up and start walking. I'd never walked in the Nothing's world before but the more I did, the more nevous and scared I became.
After walking for quite some time I was about to give up. I wanted to just stop, lay down shaking like usual but as my body started to sink down I saw something in the distance. I saw something in the distance... I saw something in the distance! I sprang into lifeand sprinted forward. 'I wonder what it is?! Maybe it it feels pity for me and is giving me a friend!', I thought. I was so exited that my fears even seemed to leave for a while. It had taken me a while to get to the thing but what I saw when I got there was completely unexpected and utterly confusing. It was a giant hourglass. It was spinning rather quickly which i watched it do for a while. It was very soothing and calmed me down. Watching it made me feel tired and I closed my eyes. Before I drifted off to sleep I was starteled by an enormous bell ringing sound. All my fears suddenly came rushing back to me and i started to skake furiosly. The noise died down and I looked to see the hourglass had stopped spinning. The sand from one end was falling effortlessly to the other. This was somehow making my fears feel greater, I felt more scared than ever and had bno idea how to stop it.
A voice Speaks to me,
Time is running out Trinket. Time is running out.
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Nightmares.
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Let's hope they never come true.

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OTHER - there may be spelling errors in the story, sorry about that. Art of Trinket is by me. The Nothing idea came from 'the nothing' in The Never Ending Story. Story was made up on the spot so it may be confusing. First time trying out for something, good luck to everyone else :D
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Re: CC #5.63 - ZombieRoadkill

Postby C0RGIS » Sat Aug 01, 2015 4:11 am

Omg I won?!? This has cheered me up so much since I've had a horrid day, thank you! Promise to take care of him ;-;
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Re: CC #5.63 - ZombieRoadkill

Postby Metallic Dragon » Sun Aug 09, 2015 5:31 am

This one is so pretty <3 You're a lucky one Zombie!
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