Re: Star Catcher #3

Postby Luneste » Sun Aug 30, 2015 2:33 am

Just pushing this to the top of my threads._)
Rest in peace momma.
Your memory shall never fade away,
I miss you every day.
My love for you can never be replaced,
by anything of this Earth or any place.
So please rest in peace,
Smile as you look down and be at ease.
My tears will fall,
It hurts worst of all.
Knowing that I cannot hear,
"I love you dear."
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Re: Star Catcher #3

Postby ServerNurse » Sun Aug 30, 2015 5:03 am

Nomatani wrote:Just pushing this to the top of my threads._)


Go right ahead. I just thought this was judged already? Everyone. I'll talk with Faulkenby because they should have judged this already. I apologize for the inconvenience. I'll get onto it right away.
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Re: Star Catcher #3

Postby Faulkenby » Sun Aug 30, 2015 5:24 am

Alrighty.
Closed For Judging
No more editing your forum please!
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Re: Star Catcher #3 WINNER

Postby Faulkenby » Mon Sep 07, 2015 6:58 am

Oh. So many unfinished forums. makes me a bit sad. so many looked like they had so MUCH potential. ah. well. I'll still judge accordingly


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Username: howlingtothestars
Name: Suśrī (সুশ্রী) (Bengali for Comely - which means Attractive)
Gender OR Preferred Pronouns: female - she/her
1 piece of art: wip
Anything Extra: Suśrī is often the quiet one but when needed, she will speak her mind and take charge. Perhaps one of her favorite things to do is listen to the soft ringing of her bell when she feels alone or blue. It comforts her and reminds her that there is something more waiting for her.

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I love the extra bit with her listening to the bell ringing giving something to look forward to and the name is nice as well. if you had finished the art, it might have added to help, but it is a wonderful forum all the same!

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Username:
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Name:

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(Krásnou Noc)

History:
He was born by the God of the Skies, a single heir to a great kingdom filled with lavish beauty, and riches beyond any desire. A eutopia that would be his own if he passed his fathers test. First he must explore the realms that surround. Learn about the culture and on-goings of the land. Adapt and heal those around him. He had to prove himself gentle, kind and welcoming. So over the many years he wandered he did just that. Learning about the beings that surrounded him, helping whenever he was summoned. Krásnou Noc, actually began to love his work seeing how it made them smile and dance- like their worries floated away. So when the day came, for his father to allow him control of the Eutopia, he smiled to him and spoke one simple group of words, "They are my Eutopia.". With an almost knowing look the father presented his only son with a single amulet, that when opened allowed him entry to the place of his birth. A bright light can be seen emulating from it, and each step he takes a gentle ring echoes out. But it did have one unique bond with him. Wherever he went in his land, his true emotion affected the weather. When he cried, it poured and when he felt at peace, it was clear and pleasant. He continues to travel around from realm to realm, helping those he can.

Gender OR Preferred Pronouns:
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Whilst on a journey he decided he wished to hear the songs from those he had helped, turning that amulet into a music box, which has a constant soothing sound coming from it, powered by love, magic, or shiny light particles? He himself does not know, a fun thing he did accidentally perfected.
His Saying:"Listen to the Cosmos."
Song that represents him:
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Where he resides each night:
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(This image is a free to use/download wallpaper from X)

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It's a wonderful little story. quite an amazing story at that that shows a lot of his personality and backstory. unfortunately it doesn't tie into the Star Catcher's original lore. the Southern Hemisphere star catchers dwell in the north. all star catchers band together in 'flocks' and although there are loners that wander much like in this story, where he resides is a bit out there. as well as that his domain reflects how he feels. only Star Catchers that have complete control over the stardust they collect would be even close to doing something like that, and even then it's a pretty big stretch. The art is lovely. lovely lovely art. I'm not totally against the idea of a journey. i actually really like it. i guess it was just the route it took, being this high being. there WILL be future star catchers like that however, and they actually have minimal powers with their stardust. I do like his song and little saying though. it's nice. Overall it's a nice forum, but doesn't fit their lore and history well enough to be anything but a story. It WOULD however be a perfect entry for a nursery or kit starcatcher for a contest with a story to tell. I'd hold onto it for that then. good luck, yeah? If you have any questions about the lore and history of the star catchers, though, PM Drunken Medic. they're on more often then I am.


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            ★ Username;;
              Revan
            ★ Name;;
              Procyon [ the brightest star in the Canis Minor constellation ]
            ★ Gender OR Preferred Pronouns;;
              Male - he/him
            ★ 1 piece of art;;
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            ★ Personality;;
              Procyon loves colder climates because he is well adapted to them. He is especially fond of snow. Though he is subject to loneliness, and the clinking and ringing of his bell keeps him calm during his lonely days. He is naturally curious and very friendly, though both traits have gotten him into trouble before. Procyon also has a certain childlike innocence and playfulness to him that leads others to believe he is younger than he actually is.
            ★ Background;;
              In his earlier days, Procyon acted as a guardian of sorts among younger Star Catchers, some of which were orphans or otherwise without a proper guardian. As such, Procyon took it upon himself to care for them. He took on a much more silly demeanor, his subtle way of reminding his young Star Catchers to be exactly that: young. For the most part, it worked. Procyon took a small group of bitter and lonely Star Catcher children and transformed them into paradigms of hope. His bell became a symbol of sorts for this, as its ringing also became a symbol of hope.
            ★ Favorite Things;;
              ⋆ Strong cold breezes [ They ruffle his fur and leave behind delightful chills and a cold smell ]
              ⋆ Ringing bells [ The sound reminds him of his own cherished bell ]
              ⋆ Children [ He enjoys both their company and their laughter ]
              ⋆ The Canis Minor constellation [ The constellation contains the star which he was named after ]
              ⋆ Late night walks and flights [ He is at his most calm when the sky is dark and the stars visible ]
            ★ Dislikes and Fears;;
              ⋆ The ocean [ While he enjoys the cold, the ocean is the wrong kind of cold; the water envelopes and surrounds him, and when soaked to the bone it is a painful cold ]
              ⋆ Seeing others upset [ Having a strong sense of responsibility, Procyon feels it is his duty to cheer up and care for those who need it ]
            ★ Home;;
              In the side of a great mountain near its base, hidden by rocks and snowbanks, Procyon sleeps in a quaint little cave. The inside is small, and he cares little for material things, but he does have a small collection of bells and other shiny trinkets that make noise. These items rest beside a pile of branches and brush which make up his bed. A simple home for a Star Catcher with simple needs.
            ★ Anything Extra;;
              The ringing of his bell has such a calming sound to it, it has been know to lull some to sleep, even crying children.



I love it! I love the backstory and personality that fit hand in hand together. it also ties into the history of the star catchers wonderfully. I also love how you expanded his personality beyond that of just a personality and his story and made it so not only that, but he loves kids and takes in orphans or lost ones. I think that the only thing that would really counter that is he is lonely. i feel like the kits would love to be around him if he really does have that childish demeanour. Lovely Lovely art. lovely name. The forum is set up nicely though you were a bit repetitive with mentioning the ringing of the bell. where he resides fits in wonderfully. Star Catchers love high places to catch the currents and as Northern Hemisphere are adapted to the cold, it fits nicely as well. Overall wonderful forum. I would like to announce you the Winner!


To everyone with a WIP forum. i did not count you in here, because it was WIP. For this star catcher however, I would like to announce the winner Revan! with Procyon! Congrats and Good luck to everyone who didn't win for next time!
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Re: Star Catcher #3 WINNER

Postby Hail. » Mon Sep 07, 2015 1:02 pm

Congratulations ^^
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Re: Star Catcher #3 WINNER

Postby Revan » Mon Sep 07, 2015 1:27 pm

    Eee thank you :D








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