Re: Foxerfly #63

Postby BecNessMonster » Sun Dec 01, 2013 3:48 am

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Below :D (I have no idea how many words I think I Might be a bit over....)

I walked in the woods I was looking around after someone had dared me to go find the wicked witch that every one was talking about in the woods.The dark tall trees around me seemed to be blocking out any light so it was hard to tell if it was night or day. I Spoted a tree with a hallow in it so I picked up my pace and went and looked inside, it seemed to have been dug out and it made perfect stone stairs. I guessed it was night so I went down the stairs my paws hitting the stone and making loud echos as i soon made it to a large wood door,Why is there a door under a tree?I wondered as i checked if it was locked, and it wasnt so I pushed my way in not expecting to find a whole room dug out. inside was a round room with a ceiling at least 5 feet high, along one side was a bed and around the edges were book shelves in right in the middle was a large pillow with a sleeping foxerfly. This foxerfly was a light shade of brown like a tanny with dark brown almost black wings and a tail charm that was a ink bottle with a feather in it. along the tail and back of this foxerfly was writing that I couldnt read because of how dark it was. I was tired and I collapsed right there and fell in to a deep sleep. when I awoke i found that i was on the bed in the corner and the room was lit up, I raised my head to look around the room. now that it was lit up I noticed another passage way leading off from this room, and that was were the lite was coming from so i got up and walked over stumbling a couple times and i soon made it to the door way to find that the foxerfly i saw before sitting at a desk writing, a candle stub was burning on the desk to give her some light as the foxerfly looked up she spoke
I see you are awake, You Passed out in my home. My name is Elenoreshe said her voice plensent and I looked at her and asked "how did you end up living here Elanore?" and she foxerfly frowned as if her past was terrible
I will not tell you my past but you may read it she said getting up and walking past me and heading for the bookshelf and I followed her and sat down as she got out a book with a deep red cover and handed it to me
This is my Story if you want to knowshe said and went back to her study. I Picked up the book and went to the bed and sat down and started to read



I walked alone in the woods I Have been running from the other foxerflys for a while now. I didnt feel like i fit in so I kept finding new foxerflys and I always end up leaving again after they ask the same question. the last pack lasted longer then the others but I needed to keep looking.I was up in the mountains near the forest and a storm was blowing in and I spotted a cave and ran there looking for safety. the cave was dark as the storm started, it was hailing and raining and I guessed it would soon be sleeting and snowing. I looked back in the deeper part of the cave and started to walk in after I felt some of the rain drip inside, I wasnt paying much attention due to it being dark and I tripped over something scaly....wait scaly? I Got up quickly and backed more in to the cave and I felt my tail touching something and I turned quickly and manged to stop my self from screaming. a Big black dragon was sleeping there and I stepped back and ended up stepping on his tail again and the dragons purple eyes shot open and its large clawed paws grabbed my by my wings and I let out a small yelp and the dragon laughed a bit
Do not be afraid tiny fox I will not harm you and il let you stay in my cave if you tell me a story that should help pass the time while the storm is near I Looked at the dragon in fear why wasnt he eating me? I manged to look at the dragon again his large wings were crippled and he sat funny he was missing one of his back legs I felt bad for him so I nodded quickly
IL tell you my story but only if you set me down! I asked and the dragon set me down and I dusted my self off ok, so ever Since I was younger I was picked on and everyone asked what this was on my back and I could never answer because I have no clue the most I know is its in the language EnglishI manged as I sat down So I Have been running after many have been picking on my and some think I am some prophecy Foxerfly but I have no idea what they are talking aboutI said gaining a bit of courage around the dragon and the dragon smiled
It says To be or not to be... that is the question, Which is a Quote from a Famous person named Shakespeare. It is English as you had guessed, I can teach you it if you want? He offered and I was amazed and accepted

*~*2 Years Later*~*

After many years, long after the storm the dragon had stayed with me and he made me a home under a large oak where he taught me how to read and write.
I Worked on the some writing and I heared a loud sound above the ground and I Ran up the stairs My friend, the dragon who told me his name was Faros, was up there. when I got there I Couldn't believe what I saw... there were 3 foxerflys around my door and they were standing on something black with a shock I relised they had killed Faros who was defending my home. a tear traced down my face and I laid down in tears and a Foxerfly stepped forward

You Must come to the palace we are in great need of you the Prophecy Foxerflyhe begged with a bow and I growled back at him but there was nothing I could do...there was 3 of them and only one of me so I went to follow then the large black mass arose and I Felt a pang of joy that he was alive and he stood up and grabed the foxerfly who talked to be and growled at him
If she doesnt want to go she doesnt have to Go! If its such a great deal then fingure it out your self! and the foxerfly was shaking in fear and nodded as Faros set him down him and his two buddys ran and I smiled which didnt last long because Faros was dieing and he collapsed again and I raced to his side What is the matter?I asked tears going down my face again and he let out a week laugh I am old and that fight took lot out of me I Think its time to rest and that was all he said


I Closed the book with a sigh something tells me it wasnt the whole story but it was a sad one and I picked up the book and put it back on the shelf and looked in to the study and sure just as it had said on her side was writing in a language different from out own Elanor looked up Would you like to learn?


Finished :D Sorry for spelling errors and the times i messed up her name XD
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Re: Foxerfly #63

Postby Leafe » Sun Dec 01, 2013 4:26 am

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There was a book.. it was about a Fantasy world with awsome animals and a more amazing Story. every day i read 7 sides of this book. it seems like the book never Ends. The book hadthe title "Ink". I want to become an Autor and learned much from this book. this book don't have an Autor. only the words "ink" on it.One day the book layed beside me,when i did my homework. i wrote something for latin , when ink dropped at the book.suddenly the book became Brown light. the light became bigger and bigger. then it stopped . there stand a creature from the book in front of me. it was a foxerfly. my favourite Charakter in the book. the foxerfly,a female named ink. "I-Ink?"-I asked."etiom.quit?"-she said.wowwos my only thought. she speakes latin!" quit hic agis?",I asked (What are you doing here)."et hic a te in me",she said .(you brought me here.)
"etiam..QUID?",i shouted.(yes...WHAT?.)"nunc",she said(now.) we talked a Long time like this. She came from the book,because of my ink. that means she must life here,at my place.I tried to learn her english,but she can't.She only speaks latin. And that's my only friend who does this.


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nunc,thats it :3 Cause I learn Latin now. (traumwind,i'm sorry you speak latin too<3but you are like a sister c:)

Hope you like and good luck everyone <3
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Re: Foxerfly #63

Postby Guest » Wed Dec 11, 2013 12:32 pm

Reserve!!
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Re: Foxerfly #63

Postby jayus » Mon Dec 16, 2013 3:35 pm

Possible reserve c:
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Re: Foxerfly #63

Postby Olijter » Wed Dec 18, 2013 3:55 pm

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Re: Foxerfly #63

Postby Kodabomb » Mon Dec 30, 2013 9:33 pm

We have a winner!
Congratulations to Sketchy! Gorgeous form and of course the story. It was so sweet!
Take care of Joanne. Thanks everypony for entering!

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" There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you" -Mary Angelou

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      Sketchy., but just call me Sketch. I currently have one Foxerfly who i love dearly, and am searching for another one to add to the family<3


      ImageIf I won this beauty, I would name her,Joanne, or Jo, as most people like to call her, named after the famous author JK Rowling. <3

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      Jo wrote: . . .
      The young foxerfly slowly placed three dots down on a small piece of scrap paper. She smiled, but then frowned. She had wanted to write something all day. The clock ticked, and she heard a yell outside. Dads home, better pack up everything... She sighed and quickly hid the pens and paper, and flew outside, bracing what her dad would yell at her about next.
      And you would wonder why this father of Joanne's was so 'moody'? Well, having a foxerfly as dull as a piece of paper, her fur a burnt light brown and dark paws, he didn't like what she looked like. Many other Foxerflies said she was a disgrace because of her plainness, and that just made Jo's father madder.
      So here she was, waiting for another lecture about how ugly she was, or if she used any writing supplies. Her father rolled his eyes at her, and then stared at her. "Did.
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      He growled, noticing some ink smears on her cheeks and back.
      "I... Uh...." Jo stuttered, her eyes darting guiltily.
      "YOU SHUT UP AND TELL ME THE TRUTH LITTLE GIRL!" He seemed to hiss, his tail lashing.
      "Yeah... But I just... I just... I don't know why you don't like them...." She cried, a single tear rolling out of her eye. Father raised an eyebrow in anger and then narrowed his eyes menacingly. "WHERE ARE THEY." He murmured. Jo shook her head. "I'm not telling you!"
      "WHERE-ARE-THEY?"
      "IM NOT TELLING YOU!" She screamed, dashing up to her bedroom. The paper which had the three dots on it slowly floated down to her paws. She smiled, and began writing. Finally she had ideas. She closed her door, and shut out the yells of her father, and let her creative juices flow.

      Hello.
      My name is Joanne, but you can call me Jo.
      I'm a young foxerfly who wants to be a writer when I grow up. This is the story of my life so far.



      ~Many years later~
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      Joanne smiled as she handed her book to the publisher. She had found a whole pile of paper a few weeks ago in her old room, and had decided she would go with what she wanted to do her whole life.
      She wasn't plain anymore. The day she had found the pile of papers from when she was a child, many quotes from famous authors and poets had appeared on her back. She was finally happy with who she was. As she began talking to the publisher about the book, she knew one thing:

      Dreams come true if you try



      437 words, I may add some illustrations and some extras if that's allowed

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Re: Foxerfly #63 - WINNER

Postby Leafe » Mon Dec 30, 2013 10:02 pm

congrates Sketchy.! ^-^
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Re: Foxerfly #63 - WINNER

Postby a sky full of stars » Mon Dec 30, 2013 11:08 pm

Congrats Sketchy!
I may have forgotten to finish my form XD but I'm much more glad you won him/her <33
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Re: Foxerfly #63 - WINNER

Postby sketchy:: » Tue Dec 31, 2013 2:51 am

      *screams* ASDFGHJKL;WATWATWAT THANK YOU ILL TAKE AMAZINGLY GOOD CARE OF HER *snuggles*
hi, im serena.
you can find me on instagram
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I just come on to adopt pets
every once in a while. ^__^
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Re: Foxerfly #63 - WINNER

Postby sketchy:: » Tue Feb 11, 2014 1:06 pm

Sketchy. wrote:
      *screams* ASDFGHJKL;WATWATWAT THANK YOU ILL TAKE AMAZINGLY GOOD CARE OF HER *snuggles*

      could i be added ^^' sorry for asking so late
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