[Eremite]

Username: ~Country~
Show Name: Touch Of Black
Barn Name: Rose
Gender: Mare
Color: Gray Pintaloosa (Bay Roan Base)
Extra 1: Songs
#1The Thunder Rolls
I picked this song because it is represents how she was betrayed in her past.
(WIP)
Extra 2: Poem (WIP)

And if I have time I'll add art!

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I'm pretty sure my forms finished. Any idea when this will finish?

[SerenWish]

Username;;
Coloré;;
Show Name;;
Whisper Quietly;;
I chose this as her show name, as she is usually shy and quiet.
Barn Name;;
Rain;;
In my opinion, both show and barn names should
relate, so in this case I am using the show name as
a metaphor for the barn name.
If further explanation is needed, just ask.
Gender;;
Mare
From my view, she would look best as a mare.
Color;;
Gray Pintaloosa
(Bay Roan Base)
Art;;
Finally done it^^:

Breif History;;
Rain was born on a cold day on a large
farm. She was there for three years
of which she was treated cruelly
before someone came and took her.
She was taken to a larger farm with a
variety of different horses, where he
was used as a broodmare for one year
before the owners were offered a great
amount of money for her. In her time
there, she only managed to give birth
one foal. She was taken to a house with
a tiny stable which housed three horses
but a huge mass of land. There she had
another foal there and after three years
she broke through an old fence, as she
was a very curious horse and got herself
lost. She found little to eat and drink but
got along. He ran into lots dangerous
animals, hunters, traps etc. but eventually
found herself in a stable where she was
properly broken in, well fed and loved.

Songs;;
Vanilla Twilight- Owl City
I chose this song mainly because it
has her name in it, but also because
it represents the way I imagine her
In my mind.
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Angel- Sarah McLachlan
I chose this song because it is gentle
and soft and how her personality would
be, even though this song has a different
meaning, I really think it suits her.
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Firework- Katy Perry
I chose this song as it represents her hope
in finding a new home.

Poem;;
Rain fell upon the cold night,
She neared the soft bright light,
And into safety and care,
Walked the beautiful mare.

Once she was cold and lost,
Rain turning into frost,
Abuse left behind,
To a heart of kind.

Now healthy and fit,
Biting down on the bit,
The fresh outside breeze,
Riding at ease.

Other;;
I am willing to do a lot to
win her, but I can't believe you made
me do a poem, Seren. First poem ever
and hopefully the last, lol. Why did you
have to make her so pretty!?! =) Also, I
am unable to watch youtube at the moment
so I have not looked through the videos.

Vanilla Twilight;;
Owl City;;

The stars lean down to kiss you
And I lie awake and miss you
Pour me a heavy dose of atmosphere
'Cause I'll doze off safe and soundly
But I'll miss your arms around me
I'd send a postcard to you, dear
'Cause I wish you were here

I'll watch the night turn light blue
But it's not the same without you
Because it takes two to whisper quietly
The silence isn't so bad
'Till I look at my hands and feel sad
'Cause the spaces between my fingers
Are right where yours fit perfectly

I'll find repose in new ways
Though I haven't slept in two days
'Cause cold nostalgia chills me to the bone
But drenched in vanilla twilight
I'll sit on the front porch all night
Waist deep in thought because when
I think of you I don't feel so alone

I don't feel so alone
I don't feel so alone

As many times as I blink
I'll think of you tonight
(Tonight, tonight, tonight...)

I'll think of you tonight

When violet eyes get brighter
And heavy wings grow lighter
I'll taste the sky and feel alive again
And I'll forget the world that I knew
But I swear I won't forget you
Oh if my voice could reach back through the past
I'd whisper in your ear:
"Oh darling, I wish you were here"

Firework;;
Katy Perry;;

Do you ever feel like a plastic bag
Drifting through the wind, wanting to start again?
Do you ever feel, feel so paper thin
Like a house of cards, one blow from caving in?

Do you ever feel already buried deep six feet under?
Scream but no one seems to hear a thing
Do you know that there's still a chance for you
'Cause there's a spark in you?

You just gotta ignite the light and let it shine
Just own the night like the 4th of July

'Cause, baby, you're a firework
Come on, show 'em what you're worth
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh"
As you shoot across the sky-y-y

Baby, you're a firework
Come on, let your colours burst
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh"
You're gonna leave 'em all in awe, awe, awe

You don't have to feel like a wasted space
You're original, cannot be replaced
If you only knew what the future holds
After a hurricane comes a rainbow

Maybe you reason why all the doors are closed
So you could open one that leads you to the perfect road
Like a lightning bolt, your heart will glow
And when it's time you'll know

You just gotta ignite the light and let it shine
Just own the night like the 4th of July

'Cause, baby, you're a firework
Come on, show 'em what you're worth
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh"
As you shoot across the sky-y-y

Baby, you're a firework
Come on, let your colours burst
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh"
You're gonna leave 'em all in awe, awe, awe

Boom, boom, boom
Even brighter than the moon, moon, moon
It's always been inside of you, you, you
And now it's time to let it through-ough-ough

'Cause, baby, you're a firework
Come on, show 'em what you're worth
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh"
As you shoot across the sky-y-y

Baby, you're a firework
Come on, let your colours burst
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh"
You're gonna leave 'em all in awe, awe, awe

Boom, boom, boom
Even brighter than the moon, moon, moon
Boom, boom, boom
Even brighter than the moon, moon, moon

Colore is our winner! You had a very strong form, and a VERY nice first poem! <3 I am impressed.

The other entries were lovely. <3 Thanks to all who entered!

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Thank you!

[noreptiles_]

Oh my gosh.. You should totally breed her with Vision!..

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Oh my gosh.. You should totally breed her with Vision!..

OMG they would make a perfect foal! Thanks, K~Dog! You have my permission to breed them if you wish since you had the idea C:

[noreptiles_]

Oh my gosh.. You should totally breed her with Vision!..

OMG they would make a perfect foal! Thanks, K~Dog! You have my permission to breed them if you wish since you had the idea C:

Really! OMG thank you! Do I need a permission slip of anything? When the foal is born, you can use it for breeding to.

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Oh my gosh.. You should totally breed her with Vision!..

OMG they would make a perfect foal! Thanks, K~Dog! You have my permission to breed them if you wish since you had the idea C:

Really! OMG thank you! Do I need a permission slip of anything? When the foal is born, you can use it for breeding to.

No permission slip needed.^^ Thank you. C: