Crow PH-WINNER! by Legohouse

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Crow PH-WINNER!

Postby Legohouse » Wed Dec 21, 2011 6:45 am

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Entries-
Redwolf2000-You got the idea of the story down,really good,but it would of been amazing if you made the story longer and more detailed c:
Zanaia Swift -Love the plot!All that was missing were a few short details.It seemed that you could make the story longer at,for example,the first paragraph.Describe the setting,looks,etc.Great job though :]
The Doctor.-Awesome story,espcially the plot and how the sentences rolled into one.I didn't stop at any point for mistakes or to wonder what it meant in a bad way.Detail made images in my head and it was easy to imagine each character,setiing,and voices.

Winner Gets-
By SilverKitsune
By me

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And the winner is..

The Doctor! :3
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Re: Crow PH

Postby cryonic. » Thu Dec 22, 2011 12:11 pm

Name: Glofm
Gender: Male
Age:54 years
Story: He was old when the goverment was giving to to me. I was walking in the dark when I saw him, I heard stories about them, how the crows didn't like the dark. It nearly attacked me but he didn't. The next day I went to the goverment, I told them about the crow plauge hound. They said " You can have him and be a savior, " I accepted.
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i'm nuts, baby, i'm mad,
the craziest friend that you've ever had
you think i'm psycho, you think i'm gone
tell the psychiatrist something is wrong
over the bend, entirely bonkers
you like me best when i'm off my rocker
tell you a secret, i'm not alarmed
so what if i'm crazy? the best people are

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Re: Crow PH

Postby N/A » Sun Dec 25, 2011 2:28 am

I'm going to try for this one. :)

Name:
Effigy
Gender:
Male
Age:
54 years
Story:

Never had a crow so old be put up for adoption. Sure, when Plague Hounds were ready for work they weren't young, but this nicely patched fellow was a rare case. 54 years is creeping up to middle aged, and my mind couldn't help but wonder why this beast was in training for so long. What challenges did he face after being created by my fellow Scientists? I sat quietly with about ten other freshly picked SIT, or Saviours-In-Training. I was an exception, I had the honour to be a Scientist for my government. I looked into the barren eyes of the Crow, trying to figure out it's past. Did this creature have a fluke in its design? No, it couldn't be, could it? It's tail was round, it's ears curved like any other hound. Of course, its pattern was a bit strangely balanced, but it wasn't an uncommon occurrence for an artist to get a bit creative. The Crow seemed to be staring at me through the barred cage it was locked inside, hollow and cold. It didn't make a sound, not a single whimper as it sat on the cold floor. Suddenly, the trainer opened the door and walked inside the white room.
"Today, you all will be given the chance to become a Saviour for your government. You have been hand-selected by your leaders to become part of this organisation. Do not take this lightly, ladies and gentlemen. Even though you have been chosen, it does not mean you will leave here today with a Plague Hound. Understood?" The trainer cooed to us sternly. Her voice was cold and uninviting, despite the small smile in her eyes. Such recital of these words over and over would conclude in such a tone, I suspected. "So, lets see who our furry friend will chose. Stay seated, and stay calm. If this is your first line-up, I suggest you don't tremble. Crows do not like weakness." The woman unhooked the cage door, swinging it wide open and moving out of the way. We waited.
Slowly, a pointed nose stuck out of the shadows of the box. A soft clicking noise filled the room, the sound of bone against bone signaled the opening and closing of the Crow's jaws. Ears pricked, it quietly climbed out of the cage. No wonder, I thought, this Crow was in training for so long. I could see it now. Every few pawsteps he took a gait would show. This Plague Hound was crippled. Suddenly, curiousity washed over me as I glanced to my right. Surely these SITs wouldn't want a deformed partner. I could see in their eyes the dissapointment as the looked over the creature, the dissapointment of might being chosen by a crippled dog, whom would be troubled by walking, let alone running to catch mice. I was surprised they even took the time to train this beast. I stood up, meeting the trainer's questioning gaze. "Ma'am, I am a Scientist, and by looking at this Plague Hound, I don't think he is fit to serve his government the way he is supposed to. Perhaps I should bring him to my lab where he can keep me company and perhaps I could fix his limping. I hate to say this, but I believe none of these Saviours in training want a hound who can't even walk without falling."

"Fine." The girl replied, though I could hear the gruff anger in her voice. I could understand her feelings. She had trained this animal for many years, and for what? To rot away in a lab? I decided I would give her some comfort.

"Miss, don't think he will go to waste. It would be good to have a Crow to keep us scientists safe in the lab from Death's Door. There won't be a lot of running, either, because of the small amount of space in my division's room. He will have a safe, happy home while doing at least most of his job," While I spoke, she was slowly clipping a leash to the Plague Hound's neck. She made her way carefully to me alongside the creature and handed me the leash.

In a soft tone she whispered, "Please, take care of him for me. Don't let him die.." I replied a reasurring 'never' and picked up the crippled animal into my warm grasp. I made my way to the door and one of the SITs opened it for me. I walked out and heard a soft purr coming from the creature in my arms. A soft, warm feeling rolled over me as I slowly walked back to headquarters.

"I think I'm going to call you Effigy, because you are now the symbol of the 11th division of the protecters of the earth. You will keep us safe, and in return I'll keep you warm and happy. We are partners now, so you gotta take care of me as I will do to you, ya hear?" The creature seemed to smile at me and gave my hand a cheerful nip. Laughing, I playfully scolded him. "That's enough, haha. Lets get you some food. How does some freshly baked salmon sound?"
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Re: Crow PH

Postby Legohouse » Sun Dec 25, 2011 7:36 am

Enddate is on the 26th,or 27th at latest c: Great entries guys!
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Re: Crow PH

Postby DrakElias » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:44 am

Name Ichtaca
Gender Female
Age 54 years
Story
I wandered through the city streets, eyes dark. In the past month, I had lost both my brother and mother to the deadly plague that had taken over our city. My father was gone, leaving me to die in this infernal place.
As I walked, I saw a man crouched in the shadows. Next to him, a glowing eyed creature met my eyes. It stood, and the Saviour next to it – for it was a Plauge Hound – got up as well. The creature padded over to stand in front of me, a paw raised. The Saviour frowned slightly, tilting his head to the side.
”Odd. Coatl doesn’t usually make friends with… Civilians. She must like you.”
My eyes widened and I took a step back. I shook my head and turned, running.
The next morning, a pair of government officials were at my door. One held the leash to the Plauge Hound from yesterday. The other held a letter in his hand. ”You are Miss Zanaia Swift?”
I nodded, not truly understanding what was going on. “Yes. That’s me…”
”If you would come with us, please. The Scientists would like to see you.” I nodded and quickly locked my door. I followed them to the Saviour Headquarters and was confused when they brought me to the Saviour Training room.
An older Plauge Hound, a Crow that seemed a lot smaller than the rest, was being led across the area. I remembered something that my brother, a Saviour, had once said. ’A Plauge Hound may not look like much, but even the smallest will fight to the end.’
From what I knew about the kind, smaller hounds wwere often frowned upon, seen as weaker or not as fast.
I stood and whistled. The Plauge Hound lifted its head, looking in my direction. I met its eyes and smiled slightly.
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Re: Crow PH

Postby SilverKitsune » Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:22 am

>.> can the winner of your hound also get
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Re: Crow PH

Postby Legohouse » Mon Dec 26, 2011 4:12 pm

Of course silver,it's very well done!Good PH anatomy too c:
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Re: Crow PH

Postby SilverKitsune » Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:10 pm

^.^ yay! =D and thank you!

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Re: Crow PH-WINNER!

Postby SilverKitsune » Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:20 pm

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Re: Crow PH-WINNER!

Postby N/A » Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:57 am

Yay, thank you! C:
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