Possibly Songwriting

[Kazin]

Hello,

I'm attempting to write a song and remembered this place from years ago and decided to get some strangers input on what I have so far.

First thing I've ever thrown together so not expecting it to be good. I have 3 sections, unsure on the order yet or other sections inbetween so just throwing them out there.



Flashback to twenty fourteen

When I was [removed]

Brand new feelings

Stuck in a daydream



The longer we wait

The harder it will be

The more we're pushing fate

Its getting harder to see



As you give me one last kiss

I cant help but think

Why do we keep coming back to this

Is it just instinct