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by polerberr » Tue Sep 18, 2012 6:56 am
Aww! spike is so adorable. xD
Oh, I was Samwise Gamgee, but I've changed my name back to polerberr (that's how it usually is, so I won't be changing it any time soon). Also, please don't be thrown off by my change of avatar and signature, lol. Complete profile makeover. ^^
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by polerberr » Fri Sep 21, 2012 1:34 am
That script seems like a cool intro! ^^ Can we add a teenie bit more dialogue to it? So it isn't too rushed?
Er, I'm still confused about how this is being organised. One second we're making a movie, the next episodes. Some people are writing the intro, others want to write the middle part. Maybe we should come up with a proper plan! So that everybody is clear with who is doing what. XD
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by Flightstar » Fri Sep 21, 2012 5:58 am
polerberr wrote:That script seems like a cool intro! ^^ Can we add a teenie bit more dialogue to it? So it isn't too rushed?
Er, I'm still confused about how this is being organised. One second we're making a movie, the next episodes. Some people are writing the intro, others want to write the middle part. Maybe we should come up with a proper plan! So that everybody is clear with who is doing what. XD
I know, I didn't have much time to write, due to Rosh Hashana. ((BTW, L'shana Tova to my fellow Jews!)) I'll add more tonight.
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by polerberr » Fri Sep 21, 2012 6:39 am
Oh cool! ^^ It was just a suggestion though, so no need for a hurry. C: Since I'm a writer, though, would I be able to do stuff like copy/paste your intro into a document, make my own edits, and send it back to you, the original writer, and see if you feel it works? I probably won't change any major themes, just add a few lines of my own or something. Then you can compare your version to my version of your version. ? I would write an entire piece myself, but I first want to see where we're going with this story before I mess things up.
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by Flightstar » Fri Sep 21, 2012 8:41 am
polerberr wrote:Oh cool! ^^ It was just a suggestion though, so no need for a hurry. C: Since I'm a writer, though, would I be able to do stuff like copy/paste your intro into a document, make my own edits, and send it back to you, the original writer, and see if you feel it works? I probably won't change any major themes, just add a few lines of my own or something. Then you can compare your version to my version of your version. ? I would write an entire piece myself, but I first want to see where we're going with this story before I mess things up.
That's a good idea. How about you add something else after you edit it, and I do the same, etc....?
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by polerberr » Fri Sep 21, 2012 9:26 am
Flightstar wrote:polerberr wrote:Oh cool! ^^ It was just a suggestion though, so no need for a hurry. C: Since I'm a writer, though, would I be able to do stuff like copy/paste your intro into a document, make my own edits, and send it back to you, the original writer, and see if you feel it works? I probably won't change any major themes, just add a few lines of my own or something. Then you can compare your version to my version of your version. ? I would write an entire piece myself, but I first want to see where we're going with this story before I mess things up.
That's a good idea. How about you add something else after you edit it, and I do the same, etc....?
Good idea ^^ I'll see what I can come up with.
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