I love how I have muse for one rp... and then practically none for another... 1 liner posts will ruin my reputation if I keep it up.
wickedwolfgirl wrote:What did I do to deserve such a crappy response for my sci-fi roleplay? *Sob*
One of the forms I came home to...Username:
BLAHBLAHBLAH
Any nicknames?:
BLAH
Character Name
PERSON P. PERSONSON
Crew or Passenger:
Crew
Age:
25
Gender:
Female
Species:
Parallel/human (if possible if not just Parallel)
Rank:
Medic (please)
Description:
Tall and slender. Dark blue waist lenght hair with bright purple eyes. Tan skin
Personality:
Motherly, and caring.
Likes:
Cute little puppies, Cute/Hott guys, and sweets
Dislikes:
Meanies, Snakes, and not being able to help someone
Greatest Dream:
To get married to a nice guy and settale down. and to best Doctor every
Greatest Fear:
To be surroneded by injured people and not be able to help
History:
Was put ahead a few years in school since she was so smart. She always dreamed of being a doctor it was her dream for ever
Family:
Teeneage Brother Kyle, and mother Kelly
Other:
Nope
...
*sob*
First thing, There isn't nearly enough on personality, history, or description. Also, the character doesn't feel like she's an adult. She feels like she is 9 years old. There also doesn't seem to be any flaws, or anything that makes the character stand out. She feels like a run of the mill character I would find in a number of roleplays. I apologize if I seem harsh.
wickedwolfgirl wrote:wickedwolfgirl wrote:What did I do to deserve such a crappy response for my sci-fi roleplay? *Sob*
One of the forms I came home to...Username:
BLAHBLAHBLAH
Any nicknames?:
BLAH
Character Name
PERSON P. PERSONSON
Crew or Passenger:
Crew
Age:
25
Gender:
Female
Species:
Parallel/human (if possible if not just Parallel)
Rank:
Medic (please)
Description:
Tall and slender. Dark blue waist lenght hair with bright purple eyes. Tan skin
Personality:
Motherly, and caring.
Likes:
Cute little puppies, Cute/Hott guys, and sweets
Dislikes:
Meanies, Snakes, and not being able to help someone
Greatest Dream:
To get married to a nice guy and settale down. and to best Doctor every
Greatest Fear:
To be surroneded by injured people and not be able to help
History:
Was put ahead a few years in school since she was so smart. She always dreamed of being a doctor it was her dream for ever
Family:
Teeneage Brother Kyle, and mother Kelly
Other:
Nope
...
*sob*
And they are going to try again. I don't quite have the heart to say don't bother. This is the message I sent when they asked why they were denied.First thing, There isn't nearly enough on personality, history, or description. Also, the character doesn't feel like she's an adult. She feels like she is 9 years old. There also doesn't seem to be any flaws, or anything that makes the character stand out. She feels like a run of the mill character I would find in a number of roleplays. I apologize if I seem harsh.
And they said they sometimes wrote too much. Writing too much involves over 2000 words or anything that is 75% or more fluff. I took a look at some of their posts....no...not even close to too much.
wickedwolfgirl wrote:wickedwolfgirl wrote:What did I do to deserve such a crappy response for my sci-fi roleplay? *Sob*
One of the forms I came home to...Username:
BLAHBLAHBLAH
Any nicknames?:
BLAH
Character Name
PERSON P. PERSONSON
Crew or Passenger:
Crew
Age:
25
Gender:
Female
Species:
Parallel/human (if possible if not just Parallel)
Rank:
Medic (please)
Description:
Tall and slender. Dark blue waist lenght hair with bright purple eyes. Tan skin
Personality:
Motherly, and caring.
Likes:
Cute little puppies, Cute/Hott guys, and sweets
Dislikes:
Meanies, Snakes, and not being able to help someone
Greatest Dream:
To get married to a nice guy and settale down. and to best Doctor every
Greatest Fear:
To be surroneded by injured people and not be able to help
History:
Was put ahead a few years in school since she was so smart. She always dreamed of being a doctor it was her dream for ever
Family:
Teeneage Brother Kyle, and mother Kelly
Other:
Nope
...
*sob*
And they are going to try again. I don't quite have the heart to say don't bother. This is the message I sent when they asked why they were denied.First thing, There isn't nearly enough on personality, history, or description. Also, the character doesn't feel like she's an adult. She feels like she is 9 years old. There also doesn't seem to be any flaws, or anything that makes the character stand out. She feels like a run of the mill character I would find in a number of roleplays. I apologize if I seem harsh.
And they said they sometimes wrote too much. Writing too much involves over 2000 words or anything that is 75% or more fluff. I took a look at some of their posts....no...not even close to too much.
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