Tough As Nails Adoption Fan Club (Happy Holidays!)

[June Bug]

Huzzah for critique! =D Thanks Drake

I was having that same problem all week Tiki. =P Last night it finally broke through and all came out like water from a broken dam. Of course that means I probably did a very bad job with it, hence my want for crit. XD
I thik we have till about 9pm est to finish forms, which is what? 7&1/2 hours? X3

[alas,]

Yup. ^^

Artiki@;

:c I wish when I have a good drawing or story in my head I could zap it on the page. xP

[Pharaoh]

-sighs- I finally finished my history for Leo, though it turned out rather crappy. D:

[Hanoverian]

Would someone please critique my form thingy? It is on... page 421, I think. ^.^;

[Meadow]

Would someone please critique my form thingy? It is on... page 421, I think. ^.^;

I'll critique yours if you critique what I have so far XD

[Lirrie]

Can someone crytic mine, its the first form up there XD.

[Vluaaq]

Hanov-

I love your form :3
it reminds me of a story I was going to use her in.

I would offer to crit more, but it I fairly time consuming and I'm leaving in a while to go on vacation. Once I'm on vaca I should have some Internet, but not much... :\


For all writers:
just keep an eye on your tenses and make sure you have your thoughts spelle out clearly...

Details details details :3

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maybe I can work with Atwood and we can compile different forms and create some with tips for writing...

[Hanoverian]

Meadow: Sure! ;D I'll PM you.


LBA: Thank you! <3 I love her so much, I really hope I win her. <3

[wibeke]

Hano: I'll do the same thing as Meadow, if you'd like. ^^

[Desmond]

>>
maybe I can work with Atwood and we can compile different forms and create some with tips for writing...

I'd be so happy to help you out with that project. :) There are lots of people that forget key elements that I go over and over and over when I give crit.