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by wibeke » Wed Aug 11, 2010 3:09 am
Meadow wrote:Could someone possibly critique what I've got so far? It's not totally finished; I still need to write the personality and some of the background yet, but I'd love as much feedback as I can get ^^ I'd critique yours in return, of course ^^
I'd love to critque your's. I only read the first half of your story, and I really want to finish it.
If you want to critique mine, just search Tarrow. ^^
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by Meadow » Wed Aug 11, 2010 3:11 am
wibeke wrote:Meadow wrote:Could someone possibly critique what I've got so far? It's not totally finished; I still need to write the personality and some of the background yet, but I'd love as much feedback as I can get ^^ I'd critique yours in return, of course ^^
I'd love to critque your's. I only read the first half of your story, and I really want to finish it. :D
If you want to critique mine, just search Tarrow. ^^
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by gingertail98 » Wed Aug 11, 2010 3:12 am
Oh Mai gosh. *dies* I just finished my form for The spotty banana dog. Whole form's total word count: 3780 that may not sound like much, but for me it was killer. I worked really hard. If I don't win it I think I will actually cry. Not because I didn't win but because I did all that work for nothing! |D
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Cause you get me so high that I gotta go down
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by Pharaoh » Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:05 am
xD I once made a form where the history was 4,848 words, and the rest of it amounted to near 6,000 words. The pet was given to the other person, with 800 words, because the form was "cuter". I'd worked two weeks on my form. And I've been upset about it ever since. D:
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by June Bug » Wed Aug 11, 2010 5:10 am
Would anyone be willing to critique mine as well? ^^; I've asked a few other places and got nothing. I can't get the link on this comp, it wont load the freakin page so I can get it, but it's on page 416 near the bottom. X3
Also, id there a limit to how huch artwork we can have? I did two pieces and want to use them both. ^^;
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by alas, » Wed Aug 11, 2010 5:13 am
Kamaliah wrote:Would anyone be willing to critique mine as well? ^^; I've asked a few other places and got nothing. I can't get the link on this comp, it wont load the freakin page so I can get it, but it's on page 416 near the bottom. X3
Also, id there a limit to how huch artwork we can have? I did two pieces and want to use them both. ^^;
I'll crit yours Kam. :3
I don't know if there is a limit on art, though. ^^'
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by Toadfoal » Wed Aug 11, 2010 5:14 am
Kamaliah wrote:Would anyone be willing to critique mine as well? ^^; I've asked a few other places and got nothing. I can't get the link on this comp, it wont load the freakin page so I can get it, but it's on page 416 near the bottom. X3
Also, id there a limit to how huch artwork we can have? I did two pieces and want to use them both. ^^;
I did and no one's said anything, so I think so?
*groans*
My muse is distracted, I may have to stick with what I've got. I know I won't be able to really concentrate on anything again for a little while. 8(
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by Tiikeria » Wed Aug 11, 2010 5:32 am
Dear Backstory,
Please get out of my head and into this Word document before I go insane. I know exactly how I want you to go, I know every scene...but, I can't write it. Dx I have about 500 words. And I've been working on it for an hour and a half. I should have moooooooore! So, dear Backstory, get. Out. Of. My. Head.
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