Artist Army {old thread}

[KenmilltoSky]

Bast - I love that! I've not seen any snake art at all this year! It's nice that somebody is drawing something a little different. Unfortunately, I don't know a lot about snakes, so I'm not much help on critique. ;.;

Zoker - I'm not great with anatomy. However, I envy you for trying daring poses! It's so different to the general "standing wolf" and "sitting wolf". I love it!

::Tribal Otter:: - Perhaps the back legs are a little too short? :] I love your style and that tail is just... WOW. <3

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What do you guys think of this? I KNOW it's got no nose. D: I drew it a few days ago and I haven't had my tablet out since to add the nose in... *facepalm*
I was trying to go for a "clean lines" look, though I don't know if it worked that well. On top of that, redlines and critique are much appreciated! :]

[brian emo]

Bast - I love that! I've not seen any snake art at all this year! It's nice that somebody is drawing something a little different. Unfortunately, I don't know a lot about snakes, so I'm not much help on critique. ;.;

Zoker - I'm not great with anatomy. However, I envy you for trying daring poses! It's so different to the general "standing wolf" and "sitting wolf". I love it!

::Tribal Otter:: - Perhaps the back legs are a little too short? :] I love your style and that tail is just... WOW. <3

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What do you guys think of this? I KNOW it's got no nose. D: I drew it a few days ago and I haven't had my tablet out since to add the nose in... *facepalm*
I was trying to go for a "clean lines" look, though I don't know if it worked that well. On top of that, redlines and critique are much appreciated! :]

I recommend making the lines at least on the front of the ears smooth, they look strange in contrast to the face.

[Spotty]

What do you guys think of this? I KNOW it's got no nose. D: I drew it a few days ago and I haven't had my tablet out since to add the nose in... *facepalm*
I was trying to go for a "clean lines" look, though I don't know if it worked that well. On top of that, redlines and critique are much appreciated! :]

Great work on that drawing^^. I redlined it for you, but I don't have much to nitpick on. For the clean look I'd recomend less fluffing of the lines, especially on the ears, just like Medusa's Cascade just said before me. This will vary depending on what kind of look you are going for of course, but I also have some anathomical pointers; The ears are a great deal big, and placed to much on the top of the head. Try slideing them down the sides of the head a bit. The muzzle ends a little bluntly, a pointier tip with some nose and mouth details will give it a more delicate look^^.

[Notichimtoki]

What do you guys think of this? I KNOW it's got no nose. D: I drew it a few days ago and I haven't had my tablet out since to add the nose in... *facepalm*
I was trying to go for a "clean lines" look, though I don't know if it worked that well. On top of that, redlines and critique are much appreciated! :]

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/ ... keeper.jpg
^ Reference ^.^

Your muzzle has an interesting bump when it reached towards the end, whereas wolf muzzles are actually fairly boxy.
The ears also seem a tad to big ^.^
Other then that, though, it looks really nice.

Hope this helps~

[KogasBabyGirl]

@ Strudel - Very nice Very detailed im not very good at drawing humans so i really cant say much. I like it tho.

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Edit- Fixed

[DoctorDraca]

Guys. There is art that is being ignored. I really don't have to keep repeating the "if there is artwork within 10 posts of your own, you give feedback on that" rule, right?

KogasBabyGirl, you skipped over several pieces and hardly said anything about the one you did comment on. This makes me think you just get in a quick reply in order to post your own link. Show some respect and don't do this. I've been very patient with you, but if you keep acting like this, I'll be forced to ban you from the Army.

[KogasBabyGirl]

Sorry was in a rush but i did go back and fix it. Sorry.

[mawsoleum]

Didn't really want to post this here, but I need some help before I set coloring and there's no other place.
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Strudel- I can't really say much, but I think he's a little over muscled. That would be one tight shirt to show all those details, uncomfortably tight.


Tribal- The back legs don't bend like that. The one it's sitting on should be showing the paw pad and the other should be coming at us a bit more.

Here's a good picture:
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[Bast]

Bast - I love that! I've not seen any snake art at all this year! It's nice that somebody is drawing something a little different. Unfortunately, I don't know a lot about snakes, so I'm not much help on critique. ;.;

Lol. Yeah. I haven't drawn these critters in some time now so im edging up on them again. ^_^ I think ill have a few snakey line arts along with all my other ones. And no crit is fine. I just wanted to make sure more then one person liked it.

[Calix]

Iamlink- I don't mean to offend you, but isn't that picture very, very similar to this one? I understand referencing from another image or drawing, but they are very, very similar.. s: Regardless, the shading looks very nice.