Artist Army {old thread}

[Harpalyce]

Here you go, lass!



You'll probably see it on tumblr, but just in case someone else benefits from it, here it is. c:

[rheia]

@lass; I really like your style. c: The way you draw hands is amazing.
@Nex; As always, I am completely envious of your art. I love how you've done the muscles. I never can get abs right,
@Koiyote; I'm by no means an expert, but the back seems a little too curved. Otherwise, I really lie that drawing. The detailing is great.

I was wondering if any of you have any tips for working with charcoal? I've tried a couple of times, but I always seem to get it everywhere, and I find it harder to draw with charcoal because of how thick it is. Is that just because I'm used to pencils, or do any of you feel the same?

[mawsoleum]

Thank you Nex<3
That's a lovely character you have there, and some nice abs XD

Koiyote- Hmm. The body seems a bit stiff, and like it has no structure.
And although the tail is 'stumpy' it looks out of place. I would give you a redline, but I don't have time *.*

That's alright, thank you for critiquing anyways.

But one question, what do you mean by no structure?

I mean the body looks like there are no bones.
Yes, cats are limp and flexible, but they still have body structure :3

I guess I failed at the practice,then, because the first thing I started out with was the skeleton. Then the body. If you look closely, you can still see bone lines in some places.

I'll work on it more.

[the d]

I didn't see any art that hasn't been commented on or that I can help with in the past few pages, so I'm just gonna put my little sketch here.
But, if anyone needs my help with canine art, I'm glad to help.
Please excuse the quality of the photo.
I'd love some anatomy tips, even though this is only a quick 15-minute sketch.
Also, could anyone help me price my art?

[schizoid.]

@Koiyote- sorry^^
But practice makes perfect :3

[rheia]

I didn't see any art that hasn't been commented on or that I can help with in the past few pages, so I'm just gonna put my little sketch here.
But, if anyone needs my help with canine art, I'm glad to help.
Please excuse the quality of the photo.
I'd love some anatomy tips, even though this is only a quick 15-minute sketch.
Also, could anyone help me price my art?

First off, I adore your style.
All that really strikes me is the neck. It seems a little too long, but that may just be me.
And, as for pricing, I'd give anything between a few 09 uncommons and an 08 rare. You might want some other opinions though. c:

[Notichimtoki]

Hello my friends!!
I have a quick question regarding copyright

If I take a picture (Like a legit picture, not drawn) and I attempt to duplicate it (Not tracing of course) is that a problem?
Thanks guys~!!

[Zephayer]

@moonstar:

if it's your picture, you can do whatever you want with it .

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[star;]

I didn't see any art that hasn't been commented on or that I can help with in the past few pages, so I'm just gonna put my little sketch here.
But, if anyone needs my help with canine art, I'm glad to help.
Please excuse the quality of the photo.
I'd love some anatomy tips, even though this is only a quick 15-minute sketch.
Also, could anyone help me price my art?

Oh , I love the way you draw wolves . :')
I don't know about you , but it sort of reminds me of Balto , haha . I love Balto(:
I don't know too much about wolves , but I think the neck is a bit thin . I'm not sure about length , but I think if you make it thicker , it won't seem as long . On the other hand , the right forepaw seems a bit off . Is that a shoulder , or a line that should be erased ? ouo If it's supposed to be there , I think that's part of what makes it awkward . The fluffy fur on the neck should go down in between , which I think , in your case , would end up covering that other shoulder . The joint on it seems a bit off as well . It might be too long , but I'm not sure . :$
Honestly , that's the most I'm able to help . Don't take my crit too seriously , because it's really more of a suggestion than a crit . Because I suck a critiquing. I just mentioned stuff that seems off to me , but it may be perfectly fine to someone else . o3o

[mawsoleum]

I didn't see any art that hasn't been commented on or that I can help with in the past few pages, so I'm just gonna put my little sketch here.
But, if anyone needs my help with canine art, I'm glad to help.
Please excuse the quality of the photo.
I'd love some anatomy tips, even though this is only a quick 15-minute sketch.
Also, could anyone help me price my art?

I cannot help you price, but give me a few minutes and I can get you a redline.

Edit:

Okkoi, got it.
xx
(Blue indicates the far leg)
1. I've changed up the pose. I've never seen a wolf in that running position, mostly because it would be the close front leg and the far back leg lifted. They don't usually move the two legs on the same side at the same time, opposites. (Not necessarily when jogging or walking quickly)
2. Wolfy needs more chest. You shouldn't be able to see the far leg's shoulder. And also, the shoulders aren't so pronounced. They're slighter than how you made them, in a wolf you do not see that much.
3. Back sort of arches. You did a pretty good job on this, but the actual back need to rise too, not just the rump.
4. Move that closer back leg back some. He would be very unbalanced running like that.

And the tail is redlined in blue because I don't know if you want it. If you're going for a sort of realistic/semi-realistic anatomy, the tail falls down. If you aren't, you can leave it the way it is.