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by krazykitty00 » Wed Apr 19, 2017 12:23 pm
@trail mods, good luck to you all! Honestly, from the ones I've seen so far, I already know it will be a hard choice this time around! You all are such great writers from your own clans that I know you'll do great with these trails.
The tips I can give is treat each reply as if it was your own clan. This is simply writing with a prompt, in my opinion. Get a feel for each cat, read back on older post of the clan if you need to. Make the clans you reply to your own in a way.
I prefer not to write about everything and I struggle with writing hunting patrol scenes XD so don't strive to make every post perfect. But don't just right a post and post it if you don't like. Take that extra step to make it how you want it. I've rewritten so many of my replies so many time that I can't even count. But in doing so, you'll be more happy with your result.
I hope that helps you all so how. I believe you all got the makings for this. Confidence and Patience is the key~
Ah... I'm no inspiration so I'll just go back to my corner now... attempt to flesh out my plan for Soulclan and get my own replies down. finally figured out how to do the big kill... oh man.. I'll miss you Jaystar..
@Clan plans, Oh man, I can't even begin to describe how great all of yours sound! O_O
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by hazilnut » Wed Apr 19, 2017 12:43 pm
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*flails* Jaystar!!!!
I love her so much, she is one of my favorite Soul clan cats actually! She has clear morals and a strict conscience but she isn't infallible. She has her ups and her downs but ultimately she just wants to be the best she can for her clan and her family, and that's respectable. If the cats were real people she's someone I'd definitely want to meet and talk too! But I have to say, death at this point, right when she's come to terms with certain things, and before she found out the truth about Mudstone, is a very good ending point for her story. Look at me getting emotional over a fictional cat rip me but really she was a wonderful character- just like all of yours really!
I hope you find your inspiration because I can't wait to read whatever you write up! Your writing is always a joy~
Also maybe some time we could rp Barkknot in Soulclan? Idk I just need to feel may baby again
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by deimido » Wed Apr 19, 2017 12:57 pm
hazilnut wrote:But I have to say, death at this point, right when she's come to terms with certain things, and before she found out the truth about Mudstone, is a very good ending point for her story.
^^^ I agree!
Huh, if I'm right, once Jaystar goes that means Squirrelstar will be the last leader alive out of all the mod's starting Clan leaders.
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by hazilnut » Wed Apr 19, 2017 1:01 pm
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Squirrel is invincible, I thought we all knew that? XD
Squirrel the super mom- her power is invincibility and super pregnancy/the ability to mother everything and tell them to go to their rooms.
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by krazykitty00 » Wed Apr 19, 2017 2:33 pm
@Katroine, you are the many voices in my head that don't want her to go that is currently locked in the darkest part of my mind. I can't let you guys out for I would be too weak to your power and Jaystar would live. I'm sorry ;w;
@hazilnut, Firstly we may not Rp Barkknot for ashe is my prisoner and is banned from outside contact. So no. Lol, jk. Sure we can, but it'll be a while because I'm still stuck on writing my post for Soulclan. If I can get that posted whenever, then we can get that Barkknot ball rolling~
Second, Jaystar has truly seen development thanks to CaC. And she's gained a great fan. Shell be happy to thank you from Starclan. Ah... but I have been debating on pulling a "I killed Mufasa" Lion King thing with Jaystar before she passes on but I don't want my baby dying like that... hmm
@The Unbeatable Squirrelstar, she is the ultimate show of female power. How I love her and her pregnant self so~♡
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by Katrione » Wed Apr 19, 2017 2:56 pm
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I love Jay, especially how she brings out a squealing kit part of Squirrel. They've been best friends for most of their lives I think (which honestly isn't that long in real time XD)
I think Jay and Squirrel need to sneak out to see each other sometime and spend time together at least one more time before she dies.
I honestly don't know how much longer Squirrel is going to live. She was 6 lives left, but she might lose them pretty quickly. Even if she doesn't physically die, she might die emotionally with all of the new stuff I have planned for Echoclan
" wear me out like prada, devil in my detail . "
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by hazilnut » Wed Apr 19, 2017 3:20 pm
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Nooo my chiiild!!! XD Sure, whenever you're set them I'm ready to hit the posts! (and maybe some feels~)
And no no no! Jay has suffered so much, let her know how her kit died when in Starclan! Don't torture her more! Wa-ait. What am I saying? Torture is good! Argh I'm conflicted!! Well I guess either way you do it has benefits?
The unbeatable squirrelstar? Oh lordy XD
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I'm all for dying inside! But Super Mom must live on. And so must Jayrel but that's going to crash hard ;w;
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by deimido » Wed Apr 19, 2017 3:23 pm
@krazykitty00 & Katrione - i got the image of both these weary leaders boggled down with the weight of everything bad happening in their clans, but they find this pleasing comfort being with each other and catch up/reminisce on old times before parting feeling at peace after seeing each other after a long time.
...then the next time squirrelstar hears of jaystar it's about her death and she just stands there in silence absorbing everything until the shock of her best friend dying settles in and she just crumples to the ground crying. god @ me why must everything be so angsty with you
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